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Anonymous
1/1/20, 11:25 PM
Please more of that!
Boston Satyr
1/1/20, 10:50 PM
You can also extend the changes to everyone in the neighborhood: make the entire block male, gay, and hot.
Anonymous
1/1/20, 8:26 PM
I hope you come through with a part three. this story is so hot
Anonymous
1/1/20, 8:25 PM
will this continue? can you make some of the guys into cowboys and power bottoms? l
Zane
1/1/20, 7:41 PM
“What if I wanted you to crawl for the rest of the weekend, like a puppy?” “Want me to buy a doggy tail, son?” Ok this needs to happen! Daddy needs to wear a collar and leash. Make Phil become his obedient guard dog. Love seeing the younger guy have complete control over someone older.
Anonymous
1/1/20, 7:07 PM
Love how the inductees begin to feel so constrained and confused by even the idea of clothing. Such a hot story!
Anonymous
1/1/20, 6:58 PM
damn really hot one! any chance of seeing some older professor or gentleman type being turned into a big redneck daddy?
Anonymous
1/1/20, 6:49 PM
i hope the main character can make the dad act more like the girlfriend.
1/1/20, 5:59 PM
PAHRUMP!? I was there on Monday; the one in Nevada!
1/1/20, 3:00 PM
Well, now it's got to be a series.
Boston Satyr
1/1/20, 1:53 PM
bravo - love this story. imagining further stories, like the were-redneck encountering & biting a sheriff who pulls his truck over, a silicon valley tech geek, a stuffy doctor who tries to examine him. or what would happen when he encounters a real redneck? (monthly boyfriend/true love?)
Anonymous
1/1/20, 1:53 PM
How can I want something so perverted?! I would love to be taken and transformed into a shiny gimp for the pleasure of my new master. I loved that he pecking order of the pups was determined without words, even submitting to other pups desires a very sexually charged notion. Thanks!
Shiningbookend
1/1/20, 11:37 AM
loved it. my kind of mind control.
Anonymous
1/1/20, 11:32 AM
continue, please
Anonymous
1/1/20, 10:11 AM
Mephisto should be fucked by Trevor ansmd turned into a massive bottom-slut himself
Anonymous
1/1/20, 10:00 AM
very very good!! 😀😀😀
1/1/20, 9:18 AM
is because is a way to say he isn't worthy of him... even mike thinks now that sam is a pathetic person...
1/1/20, 9:11 AM
Yeah!! Your back on this story! Just question: Why did Mike called Sam a "faggy" if he is a gay slut? In the previous chapter.
Anonymous
1/1/20, 8:51 AM
This is great! I'm also loving all the references to one of my First, favourite authors: The cut off jeans, the egyptian space gods, etc. I'm going to have to go back to refresh my memory of Various Techniques
SirD
1/1/20, 7:30 AM
Hot story!!!! very happy with the ending. Look forward to your future work
Anonymous
1/1/20, 7:15 AM
Three separate stories minus one of the three promised stories equals two separate stories.
Anonymous
1/1/20, 3:19 AM
It was so amazing!! It is getting darker and hotter!!
xl19586@essex.ac.uk
1/1/20, 1:21 AM
where is the part 10? The story is amazing. I can't wait to see the next part.
Anonymous
12/31/19, 11:22 PM
Wild! I've never read a male pregnancy story -- I didn't know it was "a thing"! Wonder what Gramma Witch thought - or what her daughters thought about how things turned out? I'll bet family reunions are awkward, to say the least....
Anonymous
12/31/19, 11:17 PM
This entire story makes no sense at all, but it's a wild read! I wonder what the wives and witchy mother-in-law will think? Oops?
12/31/19, 11:02 PM
> but most of the MC methods in “Various Techniques” take effect in a matter of minutes > True. This was the most frustrating part of the series. I'm loving your slow indoctrination -- dismissing the weirdness around them, etc. Very nicely done. > I don’t know if you can tell from this chapter, but the implication is that Connor and Ethan haven’t taken the pills or gotten much of the audio indoctrination; they’ve been enslaved simply by playing all 10 levels of the game Ryan shared with them. > I completely got that. I loved the video game chapter and this reference to it was excellent. It was very clear to me that they'd been inducted by the VR helmets. I'm so excited to read more!
Karl
12/31/19, 10:38 PM
need to talk to skins I'm drunk an wankin
Karl
12/31/19, 10:36 PM
great I wish I was transformed into a ugly nose broke
Karl
12/31/19, 10:31 PM
drunk an wankin I am a wealthy snobby white collar guy who wants to be
Karl
12/31/19, 10:27 PM
wankin thinking I am a white collar guy who would luv bein a stinky skin lll