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BankStreet
1/12/20, 12:42 AM
> This from Wikipedia: "As a psychopathological term, the first to publish on neurasthenia was Michigan alienist E. H. Van Deusen of the Kalamazoo asylum in 1869, followed a few months later by New York neurologist George Beard, also in 1869, to denote a condition with symptoms of fatigue, anxiety, headache, heart palpitations, high blood pressure, neuralgia, and depressed mood. Van Deusen associated the condition with farm wives made sick by isolation and a lack of engaging activity, while Beard connected the condition to busy society women and overworked businessmen. Neurasthenia is currently a diagnosis in the World Health Organization's International Classification of Diseases (and the Chinese Society of Psychiatry's Chinese Classification of Mental Disorders). However, it is no longer included as a diagnosis in the American Psychiatric Association's Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders. Americans were said to be particularly prone to neurasthenia, which resulted in the nickname "Americanitis, (popularized by William James). Another, rarely used, term for neurasthenia is nervosism."
1/12/20, 12:36 AM
nycboot, the best examples of that kind of story that come to mind are Derek Williams' [The Birthday Gift](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/1172) and RdyRoger's [Huge Changes](https://metabods.com/stories/huge-changes-book-one).
1/12/20, 12:21 AM
It was nicely handled and quite simply told. Kudos.
1/11/20, 11:17 PM
There are plenty of stories where a str8 guy is turned gay. But I don't recall that many where the str8 guy is turned gay in order that the friend is able to fall in love with him. Very nice story!
Anonymous
1/11/20, 9:00 PM
Need more of these! ! !
UchihaDEMS
1/11/20, 8:56 PM
I'm glad to see this series still going! And the feet part was a nice touch.
1/11/20, 8:09 PM
Thank you so much for all the nice comments! I did this rewrite of Limerick's incredible story years ago, so the rest of the story is already mostly done. I'll release the other parts in over the next few weeks/months
1/11/20, 8:04 PM
I have reread and had fun with this story a dozen times. Its such a sexy premise. I especially like how saying it effects the other who hears it. Lots of fun with that. I had the idea of the tech making the owner gay. Anda gay guy realising it and using it on his friends. Hehe
Anonymous
1/11/20, 7:45 PM
cant wait to see this little bottom bitch get owned by Liam and punished for being a bad slut
Anonymous
1/11/20, 7:23 PM
Phenomenal Thanks
BankStreet
1/11/20, 6:51 PM
More, please!
Anonymous
1/11/20, 6:39 PM
Please continue this story! It's so damn hot!
Sep 16, 2019
1/11/20, 5:30 PM
please do a sequel.
1/11/20, 5:13 PM
abso.Lutely. Fascinating!
1/11/20, 5:06 PM
incredibly well written. Some of the turns of phrase are just perfect. I got off to this last night, and i woke up horny for more.
Jan 11, 2020
1/11/20, 4:59 PM
One of the more interesting aspects of the narrative is the differences between what 25 thinks that it's doing/remembers having done and what Moser describes (nippleplay, for example)...subtle but amusing.
dogdaes@yahoo.com
1/11/20, 4:57 PM
One of my fantasies, to be secretly taken at a bar or coffee shop to obey and mindlessly follow
1/11/20, 4:33 PM
lush in details and a wonderful excercise in world-building!
Jan 11, 2020
tomozco
1/11/20, 4:25 PM
Thanks Willie! You're one of my favourite authors on here too, along with Hypnothrill! So it's humbling to see your kind words and support. Thanks! :D
Jan 11, 2020
Willie Cici
1/11/20, 3:48 PM
Great story! I loved the plot twists. I suspected Jason was involved somehow when Rafael ended up on his knees, but the 'Professor' angle, I did not expect. Keep writing. You have at least two fans, myself and Hyp!
Jan 11, 2020
Anonymous
1/11/20, 3:37 PM
I love these stories. My only critique would be what I say to all the novice writers: writing means editing. Run SpellCheck/GrammarCheck on your word processor. It will catch so many errors and improve the syntax, while still keeping the natural speaking tone of your characters. Try it! It can't hurt.
Jan 11, 2020
tomozco
1/11/20, 2:44 PM
Thanks for your comment, Hypnothrill! I'm a big fan of your work as well! Like I mentioned, this was just a short one that I put together quickly, hence I didn't think much into the details of the setup or characters... just focused on the key action.
Anonymous
1/11/20, 2:32 PM
Please, do continue. I quite enjoy this diary-styled storytelling.
Mutabear
1/11/20, 2:08 PM
Short but intriguing. I'm curious to see where this goes.
Jan 11, 2020
Anonymous
1/11/20, 1:18 PM
thanks I love it man
Jan 11, 2020
1/11/20, 12:48 PM
Always great to get a new tomozco story, and I thought the various plot twists in this one were very hot. I just wish the story was longer, because we barely got a chance to know who these characters were or how they'd behave normally when not following hypnotic commands.
Jan 11, 2020
1/11/20, 12:43 PM
I really like this premise, and I think the writing is strong. But the POV shift doesn't do the story any favors. We get some exciting build-up in the first half of the story, and then before we get to the sexy climax, we cut away to the doctor's POV, and then the rest of Darren's mental transformation is described in dry, clinical terms. It might have been better to insert a short cutaway to the doctor's POV, then switch back to Darren's POV.
Anonymous
1/11/20, 12:22 PM
So good! I wish you'd put like a dominant bottom cousin that Liam would hate to fuck. but he has to. oh wait. Make that his dad. I'm so psyched about what you're going write next!
Anonymous
1/11/20, 8:23 AM
Not wanting to be rude but there were a few things that really put me off this story. If it turns into a reversal revenge story than maybe I could get it as buildup. If not then this just reads as angry belittlement towards disliked items framed with superiority over disliking them. You've already set up the main character as being without self issues only external ones. And immediately set up the first victim as understandable for his actions. Some of these ideas are real issues that can even have harsh effects. I just don't read this and think that it's going to be shown any other way other than a self promoting domination fic. Please don't take this harshly. I only wanted to offer criticism in a constructive and concerned way.
fingrfethr
1/11/20, 8:18 AM
I don't know whether it's your own work you're rewriting or someone else's. Either way, this is witty, intelligent and stylish erotica and I would love to see more of it! Please continue!