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3/10/20, 8:15 PM
Burning hot! So sexy to see this serious and committed lawyer lose control over himself, accepting every request, becoming more and more submissive under the unscrupulous businessman's command. Thanks for writing it! I think you did a perfect job exploiting the humiliation fetish. > Seriously though, I was wondering myself why he prepared him then didn’t use him. > I was wondering the exact same lol I thought he'd be penetrated while signing, but then he was made to masturbate. Not even on top of the table, licking his own cum, was that hot ass used. I guess there'll be time for that. Also, in regard of the photomanips, I know it's an all-time signature from your stories, but I don't think my mind needs an image for every situation. Having been presented with how the guy looks, I can picture him in the many positions you describe him. You're good at that after all. And by this I mean, I think I'm capable to imagine his rod and his underwear just by reading your words ;-) I read most of your stories back in the day with no pictures at all, just the celebrity cast names, and they're still the hottest in my personal ranking! That's how strong your writing is. All in all, super hot story! Got me hard in the very first paragraphs lol I'm eager to see what *cums* next!
3/10/20, 8:11 PM
Thumbs up on the expanded buttplay. If the boy has a fine ass one plus play with it. :) In the screwing over colleges, hehe. Its funny on how its at that point my empathy activates. I'm all "Its fine he hypnos not just the lawyer but the coaches and team" to "oh no don't financially ruin the college." Lol (I guess that's why I walk the line of liking hypno to make a straight guy into gay sex but lets not ruin his life!)
3/10/20, 7:28 PM
MORE PINK FRIDAY!!!
3/10/20, 7:10 PM
keep going I hope part 3 goes well
3/10/20, 6:27 PM
I might revise and expand the butt play just for you, HK. Seriously though, I was wondering myself why he prepared him then didn't use him. Such a nice ass. I think it thrills Daryl to screw over the college financially. It's one of his fetishes. It gives him wet dreams at night.
3/10/20, 6:05 PM
Off to a great start and can't wait to see what Daryl has planned for the players! I like the new form of photo-manip too!
3/10/20, 6:05 PM
I could be over-thinking things as I often do, but now that I've ready both points of view, I'm wondering maybe Ivan's reticence has to do with Hector's non-affection. Maybe if Hector started showing some TLC to Ivan, Ivan would start developing feelings. Then again, Mind in a Box stated previously this is supposed to be a parody of 1950s sci-fi films where no ever gets personal (and the poor acting in most of those films precludes the idea). Just interested to see where you're gonna take us! :)
3/10/20, 5:54 PM
Nice start. Love the way things were set up. A very sexy act. That said with the advantages he will have by taking over many jocks and coaches he could probably have the deal be a more equitable level, officially at least. Hehe Ps. If your gonna have a guy bent over you need to play with his butt. Hehe :)
3/10/20, 4:49 PM
I'm glad I'm reading this story first from Hector's point of view followed by Ivan's POV. That's because it's as if holes left open in Hector's version get fully explained in Ivan's version. But in this chapter Ivan is getting a lot of self-confidence, way too much for a real slave. I keep hoping that Hector stops relying on the Overmind and tries to fix Ivan's slave mind using his own ingenuity, which would (presumably) make the slave identification stick more permanently. And I hope Hector starts arousing Ivan sexually.
3/10/20, 4:12 PM
I agree: Upon returning Hector should've given Ivan a few hours in the Overmind. It's funny that in some ways Hector has done the right things, but he sounds a bit inexperienced in how to deal with a slave. Ivan seems to have too much freedom of thought and will to be a true slave. The episode with the policeman was scary and humorous in that it got us (the audience) really wound up that the scheme might be found out, but of course it didn't happen (yet). I'm really curious to see if Ivan remains a straight slave or when Hector starts making him emotionally vulnerable. This episode ends with the slave thinking that Hector is unfair which will only increase Ivan's dislike of him. Hector has to make Ivan love him so that, should the scheme be discovered and Hector sent to jail, Ivan will not think about anything other than freeing Hector.
3/10/20, 3:48 PM
I really enjoyed this chapter. Really raw and brutal. I especially loved the turn about, and how Adam’s comment about Kurt loving big cocks led to him getting a big cock again. Very hot!
3/10/20, 1:48 PM
I'm looking over the tags and I see #jewelry. Is that a mistake? Jewelry does not play a role in this story.
Anonymous
3/10/20, 10:36 AM
this is an amazing story! Can't wait for more!
3/10/20, 9:57 AM
love to see Danny the punk with a mohawk and the works
Mar 6, 2020
Martin
3/10/20, 9:52 AM
Wonderful story! The conquering and capitulation of Matt's mind was really done perfectly. One request: Please make your paragraphs smaller. And start new paragraphs whenever you start a new direct speech. Makes things much easier to read! Please don't let us wait for too long for the next chapters!
Anonymous
3/10/20, 9:15 AM
Where is the rest of the story?
3/10/20, 6:47 AM
To whomever commented "....Where have I read this story before? This exact one, but somewhere else," I'm an idiot and maybe even an asshole. I was going back and rereading one of Vchris1989's stories called "Goodnight, Son" and realized the part where the dad, possessing the son, looks in the mirror and says that he bets his son loves being possessed, followed by basically what I wrote here. To that commenter, I thought you were referring to the fact that I posted this story earlier, took it down, and reposted it. My apologies for my idiocy, and while I don't think Vchris1989 will read this, I am sorry for the unintentional plagiarism. You were a brilliant writer, a pioneer, and I just wrote what I thought was fun and it turned out to be what you write. I'll edit the story to give you credit where credit is due.
Anonymous
3/10/20, 6:07 AM
Good job on this chapter! You should post a next chapter
Anonymous
3/10/20, 4:34 AM
Definitely very hot and I love the reappearance of Josh. I wonder if the other converted characters will also make an appearance later. I also wish there would be more straight guys converted into tops. The last few guys turned into bottoms
Mar 6, 2020
rebelpup
3/10/20, 3:28 AM
this story was fantastic! hit all my buttons and i can't wait to read more from you! i would love some more like this! i love the rubber and leather and control aspects of this!!! was hoping for more gear even to make this a hotter tale, but my god! welcome to the site and thank you for writing such an amazing story!
A
3/10/20, 2:18 AM
Hey mw-scot! Love this series! I can read the adventures of Ad all day. I like the mind control premise of this series because its not a completely "broken" power unlike the other mind control stuff in this site. I like that theoretically there is a way for these straight guys to avoid their fate, and seeing them try to do so in your stories is the best aspect for me. I would like to continue reading more guys having to prevent themselves from cumming in future installments. Maybe have Ad capture more guys in a future story where he edges them to orgasm and then stops and have them beg him to let them release even if it means becoming gay. That would be so hot
3/10/20, 2:15 AM
Flattop, I understand and appreciate he won't be a greaser forever, but I can't think of any other stories in the past decade that even dipped a bit in it, so I thank you.
Anonymous
3/10/20, 1:06 AM
Hope there's a part two!
3/10/20, 1:00 AM
Great story. I love how one good fuck and the internal homophobic ass is out and
3/10/20, 12:54 AM
That was amazing man, that was some hot transformations!!!
3/10/20, 12:50 AM
This story is so hot. Can't wait for the next chapter.
x
3/10/20, 12:22 AM
Well done! I wonder how much our growing powerlifter weighs by the end of the story.
Brill
3/9/20, 11:20 PM
Reading this so turned me on
Rubberbud
3/9/20, 10:39 PM
hot as hellll
3/9/20, 8:52 PM
will we see someone getting a mohawk soon?