Recent Comments

3/5/20, 3:06 PM
Thanks, transformationheaven! Again, I find the reaction to date a bit absurd. The age of the character is mentioned once in parenthesis. If you like, I can change it to 18. It doesn't fundamentally change anything, but makes it a bit less realistic, since he's supposed to join the football team after completing his transformation.
transformheaven
3/5/20, 12:11 PM
Well your first story isn't short of comments, that's for sure :P I liked the story and OMG your instagram is sexy. Excited to see the next of your work!
3/5/20, 11:09 AM
I've revised this chapter to tweak Travis' behavior. I didn't like the infantile (almost age regression) aspect.
Anonymous
3/5/20, 11:06 AM
so hot! love the cliff hangers
Anonymous
3/5/20, 8:56 AM
So anyone else curious about Marcus? At first I thought the (australian?) waxer was in on the whole subjugation, and I don't think that him saying 'slave' and playing it off as 'love' were a slip of Ivans mind. Especially given that Hector didn't even suspect Marcus, I assume that they aren't directly in league. So now for my crack theory: I think Marcus was perhaps another scientist that used to work with Hector, and escaped the execution. He probably recognized the signs in Ivan and decided he too would prosper off the hypnotized stud.
Anonymous
3/5/20, 8:17 AM
Damn. Was hoping this was relatively recent so I could get a chapter 4. Would love to see Tad actually mature through owning Will.
3/5/20, 8:17 AM
Seemed like Adam is now Ada. Personally I didn't find that their going from a gay couple to a sort of hetero couple was kind of off-putting.
Beardfull1
3/5/20, 6:54 AM
Keep the transformations coming, specially involving daring facial hair styles to suit the head hair. The boldest the look the hotter the story. Good job!
3/5/20, 6:22 AM
There was more than one moderator involved. I only deleted those posts that were exclusively insults that added nothing to the discussion. Another moderator and/or Martin himself has obviously gone through this and deleted several other posts. I have brought some of the issues mentioned here to Martin's attention, just to be certain that they're not lost in the controversy. Leaving aside any arguments about what people consider appropriate, there are a couple of things that some quick Googling tells me about this situation: first, sexual attraction by males towards those sixteen and over is not uncommon. Several psychological studies confirm this, so it's not as unusual as some here seem to think it is, and that's very likely why the legal age of consent is 16 in so many jurisdictions. That said, the legal age to *have* sex and the legal age to be *written about in porn* are not the same, and others are correct in pointing out that either writing or even reading this story would be a problem in many jurisdictions. It seems just a little fucked up to me that you can legally have sex with a 16 year old but if you write a fantasy about having sex with a 16 year old, that's illegal. I mean, seriously, if you're going to argue that it's harmful in some way, it seems to me that the *actual* sex would be far more harmful than the *imaginary* sex. Laws don't always make sense, though, I suppose.
Anonymous
3/5/20, 6:19 AM
You are amazing. I can't believe I just found you! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter
dredlifter
3/5/20, 4:41 AM
Wow that was HOT. Love the semi-slow growth. Hope it continues.
3/5/20, 4:36 AM
LOL Thanks for the apology but I'm not discouraged. I do find the reaction a bit absurd. The main character's age is mentioned once in a parenthesis abd doesn't substantively influence the rest of the story. Just make him 18 in your mind if that suits you more. I wantedto emphasize his youth and inexperience, which heightens the later contrast! peace out!
3/5/20, 4:28 AM
Just for reference, I have deleted a derogatory comment, as it added nothing else to the conversation. For the time being, I'm letting the rest of the conversation stand, pending Martin's decision as to what to do about it when he wakes up. I will continue to monitor this thread until that time.
Anonymous
3/5/20, 4:18 AM
At this point, I would like to apologize to the author for having to deal with this. Hopefully they don't discourage you. Know that you are actually, in fact, NOT a pedo. Like I said, they may call people creeps all they like on their high horses, but the rest if the world thinks they are creeps for coming to a site where men are controlled against their will and converted to be gay. Take care.
3/5/20, 1:28 AM
hahaha, I know, I'm a mess! I just get distracted by life a lot. This here is a one off though. Unlikely to have a follow up. But a prologue from Chris' perspective...maaaybe.
TcomJ
3/5/20, 12:18 AM
You and I have a love hate relationship at the moment. I know your stories are so good that I will have to wait forever for it to conclude...such a dilemma whether I should read or not. haha
Boston Satyr
3/4/20, 11:34 PM
More installments in store? Really hoping you will continue this.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
3/4/20, 11:25 PM
Would be cool seeing any "special" football gear that integrates itself with its wearer, just my 2 cents.
Anonymous
3/4/20, 9:13 PM
Great start! I really liked the story so far, but please check your spacing of your paragraphs. It is hard to read big chunks of paragraphs without any spacing. Maybe after a new person is talking, or when a new idea is introduced. I look forward to reading more.
Anonymous
3/4/20, 9:06 PM
Can't wait to see Adam get even faggier!
Anonymous
3/4/20, 8:26 PM
I loved this ! Please make more
Anonymous
3/4/20, 8:19 PM
I loved this! Please make more
Anonymous
3/4/20, 8:11 PM
Please make more
3/4/20, 8:03 PM
My kind of story
3/4/20, 7:43 PM
Time to edit the new reality making Steve and Ben a couple again with Chris as their loyal houseboy!
Anonymous
3/4/20, 7:38 PM
That escalated quickly! Hot
3/4/20, 7:35 PM
Hot Story!
Anonymous
3/4/20, 7:32 PM
This is such a hot story! I wish we could see the cops turned into obedient slaves too
Mar 2, 2020
3/4/20, 7:26 PM
Great new story!
Anonymous
3/4/20, 3:37 PM
Very hot developments!