Thanks guys! I'm sad can't always deliver this level of creativity and imagery - I think I started this a few years back actually, while trapped at a summer house with my relatives, and just rediscovered it while looking for something else. I'm glad you like it! Also, I made it a community series in case anyone wants to use this as a jumping-off point - I don't know if I'll ever circle back to this idea, so I want to make sure that if people like it, they can write more of it :D

I agree--the gradual changes like the smoking and the accent are SO hot and so wonderfully written! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Really well written. Very vivid imagery and descriptions. I could actually visualize the entire cabin from your text. Very neat idea. I really enjoyed this. Just a beautiful story overall. Hot as well :-)

i am liking this story as someone said the gradual changes from his dreams, eg smoking and remembering he was always a part of his dads family, noticed he now thinks his mum as a whore - what i liked in this chapter is the subtle accent change

This is a lovely slow-burn and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Really looking forward to seeing this continue!

Still LOVE Paul's NEW MEMORIES, making him the SKINHEAD 'DIRTY BASTARD' he was destined to be ! Wonder if his uncontrollable 'pee-pee' problem is going to get worse & if he'll come to accept he's always been this way [& has always worn a diaper [??] ] : Since Paul never finished school, it shouldn't be long before he totally forgets his previous job, should-it ??? At least not that job, [perhaps a janitor, for such a dumb, backward boi however].......

Yes! One word, one answer about what what I think about this story - YES!. This story is like an answer to a fantasy that I had only recently started to have. The idea of a vr mmo being used to turn straight guys gay and such is marvelous. The idea that mod is what lets the user do that to the other player is amazing. The nature of how this will turn Jesse into a submissive bottom boytoy for Dennis is brilliant. The fact that you tell the story from both Dennis' and Jesse's pov is very entertaining - we see the dominance and the submission. The fact that you mention rimming is spectacular fun, though it could always have more, hehe. The nature of how this might become changed and expanded upon and such is really really great. My hopes is that in the real Jesse starts interacting more with Dennis, becoming his good subby boy happy and willing to take his cock. In the virtual I hope he becomes more and more a good pet, a willing slut. I don't really want humilation but I do like the idea that clothes is reduced and more gay actions are undertaken, including his need to show off his hole for his master. The use of the quest mark is also hot to me and I imagine much fun could be had with quests. But yeah this is brilliant. This is awesome. This is really cool. I like the anthro element of the quest keeper, though i am not so much a fan of the naga as I prefer legged anthros myself, BUT the idea of the NPC monster being the one to start things was fun. I imagine a 'sequel' saga where a bunch of jocks in a frat or something become effected by the mod and made into good boys for either the mod developer or a friend of his. They take on various races in various situations that are quests that need to be solved by gay sex. hehe But yeah, whether any of that or other ideas happen this was extremely hot. The set up, the design, the writing, the characters, the two point of views in one story with both being the main but the dominant getting a major focus, all very super sexy and arousing and amazing. I LOVE, love, love, the general idea, so thumbs up on it all. :)

Really hot, and would like to know what happens when the lock down is lifted

Please continue the series I love it.