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May 26, 2020
Anonymous
5/27/20, 10:32 AM
Easily the most well-written story I've read on here. You wove a story that literally enthralled me, couldn't stop reading
5/27/20, 7:29 AM
This story has very hot imagery, but it skips over a lot of the actual mind control, which for me is the best part. I'd love to do an edit of this where I just work on beefing up the middle sections, starting with the point that Cole and Wyatt discover their teammates naked.
Ky'Ro
5/27/20, 4:43 AM
I'm not usually into cutesy, sappy stories, but this one works for me. You should keep it up! Roger and Phil's chemistry is beyond fire and it actually made my heart flutter when Roger asked him what he thought of him and he actually got a positive response. So how long will the wait for the next chapter be exactly?
5/27/20, 4:39 AM
As Hypnothrill and Magnum said, we need details to really appreciate this story. I love a good vampire story and you have the potential but you could do a lot more with this to make it better. If Hypnothrill is giving you advice, take it and follow it. It'll help the work improve a lot. Also look at Hypnothrill's Zindar Invasion; that was a story Hypnothrill rewrote to show how to improve a story for beginning writers. Looking that and taking ideas from that and applying it to this work will make some big improvements.
May 26, 2020
5/27/20, 4:02 AM
True erotica, sparkling writing, sensuous conflict, satisfying outcomes, a rare gem of a story with true intimate entanglement. I'm ensorcelled.
May 25, 2020
Anonymous
5/27/20, 2:47 AM
please write more
Anonymous
5/27/20, 2:45 AM
I just imagined that many "tiny" 6'4" dudes also went through the nMIGHT process!! Looking forward to seeing the protagonist going through the process too. Hope the process looks addictive ;)
Anonymous
5/27/20, 2:40 AM
it would be amazing if this story continues !!
May 26, 2020
5/27/20, 2:23 AM
Beautifully written!
5/27/20, 1:20 AM
it is a great premise. it read as a story that was stream of consciousness without any editing or spell check. but damn if I didn't picture a rubberized dick grayson. give us a description of robin and vampires in terms of face and features... go for it again..