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5/27/20, 6:06 PM
The one thing I will say as a note is that I hope there is not too much emphasis on the AI. Like I am fine with it being the tool that Dennis uses to take over others but not so much if it becomes a sort of independent character that say manipulates either Jese or Dennis for its own needs. Hehe, well you should be sorry. :) grin. Rimming is de best! Oh yeah, its such an amazing idea, with such potential, such rich potential for twist and turns and fun sexy uses. I really like that, that slow, unrealized transformation into good boy. Especially towards his brother's friend who just seems so cool all of a sudden, so cool and sexy and who causes him to feel good when he compliments him. Ooh, I wonder if there is a way for the brother to also be introduced to the MMO tech, cause that might be fun, for Dennis to have both of them. lol I could totally see a blushing Jese not realize why he feels so good when he is a good boy. Or maybe he finds himself accepting quests that have him pretend to be a pet or slave at his master's knee, head by his crotch, as the master talks business, which ends with him sort of loosing time as he begins to enjoy the pleasant scents that maybe even taste as he sniffs and licks cock. Its part of the mission of course, and so its not gay, its just a quest! hehe But yeah, really good fun stuff. Love the idea, love the start, so very sexy!
Anonymous
5/27/20, 6:06 PM
Love this. Love their dynamic too. Wouldn't say no to a second chapter, if you're inclined...
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/27/20, 6:04 PM
I wish I could find somebody like this to blackmail me, lucky kid.
5/27/20, 5:59 PM
I wish you actually put a story synopsis in each story rather than simply copy the series description again and again.
5/27/20, 5:55 PM
I'm excited for the finale
5/27/20, 5:40 PM
Very nice, love to be mistaken for some one else, that way i got in to this house. Hoping Ben, don't try to fight this.
5/27/20, 5:28 PM
@Elmara - Dennis surely has a character of his own, and I'm sure the two will meet ingame at some point. As for clothing, already something that is to be explore to varying degrees. As I write chapter 2, its already a very interesting detail. I'm sure you will love what I do with it, although it still being a little more discreet than a jock strap in plain view, haha. Aside from that, Dennis will surely be manipulating Jese in many ways, but I'll explore that naturally as the story takes me where ever it does. @Heru - Glad you've enjoyed it as well. Sorry I couldn't get more emphasis on rimming ;) Glad you enjoy the idea, as its been a huge fantasy of mine as well. Love how it bridges a sense of realism, with the impossible that video games can introduce us too, and the hopefully powerful experiences VR will get to someday. In terms of future reactions with Dennis, and men in general? Jese will find it strange that he wants to impress them? Whether it be a random opportunity such as cooking breakfast for them, or choice of clothing when around them. I'm sure it would be a total mistake if Jese happen to show up in front of Dennis in just his underwear. haha As for the other comments, as always, thanks for reading!! And for the compliments. (As always, feel free to email me.)
Anonymous
5/27/20, 5:11 PM
Dude, fantastic piece of work! If you hadn’t mentioned it was your first time I totally wouldn’t have known. Fingers crossed it’s the first of many ;)
5/27/20, 5:10 PM
this is my favorite story in a long time..thank you
5/27/20, 5:09 PM
Great story. I have thoughts and dream about a game, that is hypnosis, you are in the game, Under hypnosis 24/7. This story is the answer to a fantasy, I love to be in. Thank you, I look for more. Rob.