Good story. Always good to see team effort. Thanks for the work.

Hey, love this story, thrilled you added to it- I can't see chapters 1 and 3 since it says they're in something called "safe mode", any chance they can be accessed if it's on the sites end?

It lacks a pic of the victim's transformation

What a great ride that was, thank you! Thank you, so much for creating such an imagination activating piece of art. Buff, beautiful, blonde, built Ben has an exceptionally large cock, 11 inches, if I recall. He's just an inch away from being on the same level of male superiority as his football teammate with the big 12 incher that he can't keep his eyes off of. Max, his best friend is notably more demure in physical presence than his number one bud since elementary school. Though, back in the day, pals that had only recently left toddlerhood and infancy behind them, the guys may have been peers, equals, on the same footing. But as they grew up and out of boyhood, after the years of puberty had worked its magic of physical development and maturity of sexual characteristics, Ben was the stud that Max was forced to literally look up to. Broader shoulders, more pronounced round buttocks, thick legs, bigger feet, taller by a head, bisceps, abs, pecs, denser covering of body hair, and (of course) incredibly bigger manhood. Now that they are young men, an unspoken irony begins to be felt between the best friends. Ben, the stud quarterback, everybody's all american, best looking guy in town is gay and Max, the smaler in stature and frame, floppy dark hair, modest six (ish) inch dick is straight. Ben's greatest frustration, he's learning, is that he gets really aroused by dude's with bigger dicks than his. Ben's mega cock really narrows that field down to one guy that he sees in the lockerroom showers, but can't touch because he's straight. Ben knows Max has totally caught him lusting after the football team's 12 inch cock stud, so it's time to come out of the closet to his best friend. As he does, reality quickly changes, thanks to a dark relic that grants wishes with a curse. I loved being pulled into that story. I connected with Ben and took the journey as him, reading along, always wondering what would be ahead for me and Max. Great ending. I wonder what it might be like, if there somehow became one unexpected last wish granted by the wicked monkey's claw. Right as their falling asleep and I say, I mean, Ben says, "Oh, Max, it feels so erotic, so incredible to have such teeny weenie, now. I wish you could have the same pleasure of having a wee wee just like mine, now, too. Both of us forever with ever shrinking manhoods."

love this I want to hear what goes through the head after the machine

I love some wholesome casual hypnosis! I was also a huge fan of the brain drain segment. Very hot and well written.

Wow. Amazing. Reading it took me away, blissfully. It spawned day dreams, fantasies, imagination freed. I loved it. Am going to look for others that are similiar, because this one is perfect. Feels like it was written for me, about me, to me, within me, and actually immersing me. What's mbmbam? I'm curious about anything related to this story, its theme, etc. Thank you for creating this.

A very great story, really love the fluff here :D

estoy consciente de que me falta elaborar más en las escenas eroticas. Igual tratare de tenerlo más en cuenta para futuras historias. me alegra que al menos te pareciera interesante la trama ^ ^

Como historia la trama es muy original, sin embargo como relato erotico es muy insatisfactorio por la falta de detalles.