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Jun 14, 2020
Anonymous
6/15/20, 1:28 PM
a disgusting rape fantasy, no idea why this is up here.
6/15/20, 9:17 AM
I really think the moment they announce their relationship they will be the brawns & brain power couple at school. Can't wait to see that. It's cool to see you play around more with his wolf form. And I love all the fluff in this story
6/15/20, 8:31 AM
looking forward for more ! please continue.
Anonymous
6/15/20, 8:27 AM
i don't know why, but i get the feeling his neighbor is a werewolf hunter
Louis
6/15/20, 7:45 AM
Hey, wanna create a new story together?
Anonymous
6/15/20, 7:45 AM
Badly needs more chapters. Then again, this one is excellent for an introduction.
Louis
6/15/20, 7:44 AM
Hey, wanna create a new story together?
6/15/20, 6:20 AM
This was a great start but it felt like you cut the story short at the end. You did so well on the lead up but once he was there, its like you rushed to finish
6/15/20, 5:31 AM
Super hot, I loved how raunchy this story was! The slow mind control from the various intoxicating man scents was awesome to read. I'm excited to see what will happen to the other guys and what more raunchy fun is in store.
6/15/20, 5:13 AM
Damn, I really enjoyed reading this! I was curious as to the direction you'd go after the first chapter but I really like the end product. I think the whole concept behind this story and the addition of Jai becoming a cum fountain creates a fantasy that is fun to envision. I'm intrigued how the other guys will be incorporated in the other chapters now. Awesome work man :)
Anonymous
6/15/20, 1:02 AM
How about some body modifications?Great start
6/15/20, 12:54 AM
Great start! Novel concept! Looking forward to future chapters!
6/15/20, 12:42 AM
Another excellent chapter. Loved seeing Jack dominate and humiliate Chris.
6/14/20, 10:46 PM
Fuuuuuucccckkkkkk that's so hot and so nasty, i love it! i can't for new tenants to move in and use all that horny furniture and get enslaved themselves!
6/14/20, 10:10 PM
will we see part 5 son?
6/14/20, 10:09 PM
will we see part 7 soon?
6/14/20, 8:59 PM
Really enjoying this and looking forward to finding where it goes.
Anonymous
6/14/20, 8:40 PM
you should definitely have him sing at a straight club and turn it into a gay orgy
stwidd
6/14/20, 8:38 PM
This story is so wholesome. I hope it stays that way for Ace's sake. He deserves this win.
Anonymous
6/14/20, 8:28 PM
Great story cannot wait for future installments
Anonymous
6/14/20, 8:17 PM
very hot continuation! you switched tenses and from I to you a couple times, just keep an eye out for that. I'm loving the transformations and rewriting of poor Tommy's life, though!
Jun 14, 2020
6/14/20, 7:44 PM
Very hot. More please
6/14/20, 7:07 PM
this is getting much better! thanks so much for posting. i've pretty much logged in to this site just to read more and more chapters from you. thank you, and please keep up the good work!
6/14/20, 4:09 PM
Really creative story from what we've seen so far, and everything is so nice!!! One of my favorite!
6/14/20, 4:05 PM
Great second chapter! I love the slow progression. I can really identify with Atlas's (Ace's?) feelings of loneliness and fear of rejection. If only I had met some guys like this when I was in college! Keep up the good work!
Anonymous
6/14/20, 3:44 PM
I really hope you keep going with this series! So F'ing HOT!!
6/14/20, 3:19 PM
Your phrasology is wonderful. The one sentence: "I In an experience completely novel to him, Atlas let go of all preconceived notions and worries and just… existed, buoyed comfortably by a feeling of connection to the guys around him". is a wonderful summation of his conflict and resolution. wonderful!
Feb 11, 2019
6/14/20, 3:14 PM
Very well written. It is refreshing to have a more literary writer on this site. The person who made the thesaurus comment should work to improve his vocabulary. I don't see any words that are uncommon or inappropriately used in this story.
6/14/20, 3:06 PM
What an exceptional story. Selfishly saying, It could be a bit longer. The complexity of feelings on both parts could make for a chapter of it's own. And I love the first line. If ever there were an Ayn Rand sequel, it should be named "Atlas Sighed".
Jun 14, 2020
Anonymous
6/14/20, 3:03 PM
Really hot, loved the pictures for all of them Keep up the great work! <3