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11/18/23, 8:16 PM
This is freaking hot.
Tom
11/18/23, 7:32 PM
A mind flayer fucking one and eating his brain at the same time
Enchanting-Sorcerer-Boy
11/18/23, 7:19 PM
Enjoyed this a bunch. Excited for what you write next!
Anonymous
11/18/23, 6:48 PM
Continue the story please Sir !
Anonymous
11/18/23, 2:20 PM
I hope there's another chapter after this!

11/18/23, 5:56 PM
@Anonymous I don’t currently have another part planned but if there is enough interest i might
Anonymous
11/18/23, 3:09 PM
I would be thankful this thanksgiving for the next chapter of this - so so good!
Anonymous
11/18/23, 12:17 PM
My favourite story on this, if these devices ever become real and available, I want one! Amazing fantasy, and I can’t wait for more instalments!!
11/18/23, 11:22 AM
A very hot returning chapter.
11/18/23, 11:20 AM
Oh wow, a first person and third person view of conditioning. So hot. Cant wait to read more, especially the big family reunion.
11/18/23, 8:39 AM
Such a tease but very hot.
Anonymous
11/18/23, 6:57 AM
This series is great so far. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
11/18/23, 6:55 AM
Oh, mark me down for orcs and oozes! I'm a little confused though. If...er, *when* the monsters succeed and escape the dungeon, doesn't that just mean the fratboys will be stuck there alone? Who will torture and abuse them for all eternity then? It's one thing to be trapped in an ancient magical prison, it's another to be *bored* on top of that.
11/18/23, 6:48 AM
Awesome story, need more
11/18/23, 6:47 AM
Wow!
11/18/23, 6:13 AM
Looking forward to seeing how this will play out. Minotaur, orcs and pets, any werecreature if planned, mindflayers, goblins, mimics, oozes.
11/18/23, 5:43 AM
Oh wow! I know this is just a snippet one-off, but it just _begs_ to be continued into a series.
11/18/23, 5:43 AM
Oh man, keep it goinggggggg Hahaha 🙏
Nov 17, 2023
11/18/23, 5:26 AM
This was great!
11/18/23, 4:26 AM
Is this getting a part 2? Hope so!
11/18/23, 3:37 AM
This story is one of my favorites and I'd love to read more from you for sure. Such a hot story
11/18/23, 2:08 AM
A very good mind control story and a very good mha fanfic as well. Thanks for writing it!
Anonymous
11/18/23, 1:38 AM
I mean, technically manipulation can be mind bending, so maybe? Hot either way though, boy shouldn't have kept his Daddy waiting.
11/18/23, 12:15 AM
Goddamn you can fucking write I'm hard as fuck and ready for the next chapter(s). Well done you definitely have a knack for writing gay mind control erotica, that sir is a motherfuckin fact
11/17/23, 11:27 PM
3. Jamie did pick up a third black mark from this, didn't he? So according to Valour, that means his apprenticeship to Atlas is permanently terminated, and he's suspended from the League for a year. Enforcing those rules is a bad idea for the League, though. That leaves Jamie extremely vulnerable, and gives Master and Onyx a lot of freedom to work on him, especially if Kane's (already ineffective) oversight is removed.
11/17/23, 11:26 PM
2. The time Jamie was in the club and at Master's HQ. This has bothered me a little every time I've read this Chapter. I guess I have something in common with Atlas - getting lost in the details. 😒 Fade or Remedy said he was in there an hour when the final scene happens.Jamie was with Theo/08/Horizon at least a half hour, and spent another one Pet/DS-011's care. Plus, he spent a while with Master. I'd say 2 hrs is more likely. Did the Fucksticks show up late to the party?
11/17/23, 11:25 PM
OK. So just finished my reread of Chapter 5 and have a few notes. 1. One thing that could drive Jamie into Master's warm latex embrace? Getting proof that Master's tale of the League being behind his building explosion is true. He's not likely to get that, but learning about Cerberus might be enough to make him believe it.
11/17/23, 10:10 PM
Hate to see Hatim go, but love to watch him walk away!

11/17/23, 11:09 PM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) I was surprised people wanted to get rid of Hatim, since he seemed like such a favorite! Or a favourite, for our Anglophile readers. Ah well, we must do as the public demands...
11/17/23, 10:17 PM
I'm curious to see how Matt will change Jack now the every two days limit with Jack has been circumvented by the dicknotizing.
11/17/23, 10:11 PM
Too short! But a fun little nugget for sure. 🙂