Recent Comments

8/1/20, 8:49 PM
There are so many hot ideas in this story! I love the premise of this secret army filled with obedient, dumbed-down super soldiers. I just feel like the story needs more room to breathe. If it were closer to 10000 words, then you'd be able to spend more time on characterization, physical descriptions, creating suspense, and conveying how Andrew is feeling.
CMC
8/1/20, 8:48 PM
I loves all the little bits of Joes transformation!
transformheaven
8/1/20, 8:09 PM
You didn't disappoint, I really liked this story!
8/1/20, 7:43 PM
so hot seeing their minds, culture, religions, everything be washed away and brainwashed! love it and would love more like this from you!!
Drake Nightstrom
8/1/20, 7:07 PM
I really enjoy what you have so far. Keep going.
8/1/20, 5:22 PM
I wonder... if he cursed to do that to any guy fucking him? anyway, that was hot!
8/1/20, 4:12 PM
Well done! Hot, smart story!
8/1/20, 3:59 PM
That was a really great chapter. My tolerance for 'darker' things areva lot higher than some so this didn't bother me at all. What an awesome series, well done!
Feb 14, 2009
screamingmoist
8/1/20, 3:02 PM
Thanks! Feels like a lifetime ago, so I'm glad to hear it still holds up.
8/1/20, 3:01 PM
Swizzington, my glib answer to your question is that brainwashing is easy, but ESL classes are hard.