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giveintothemusk
9/17/20, 2:16 AM
Hoooly fuck i can't wait for winter break 😍😍😍😍😍
jamiemboy
9/17/20, 12:58 AM
Geil verhaal ;)!
9/17/20, 12:28 AM
Redneck transformation and slobification...hot stuff, Sir!
9/16/20, 11:59 PM
Not keen on blackmail. I would've preferred Bob and his sons become willing and happy slaves, but that's just me. I still want to see where this story goes and look forward to the next chapter.
9/16/20, 11:06 PM
It will be fun if they stay at home as Dan trains Bob's hole while reinforcing his commands over him. Until he can get Bob to help him enslave his sons too.
9/16/20, 10:32 PM
Very well done! Love it!
9/16/20, 10:10 PM
Always great stuff Mr Bracken.
Lusty Stallion
9/16/20, 9:38 PM
Man, I really enjoyed seeing what would happen. Keep up the good work, and its great seeing your writing developing to. Keep experimenting. we're happy to be your gineapigs :)
Anonymous
9/16/20, 9:12 PM
I love this!
Elm
9/16/20, 9:10 PM
I like your stories! they are all a bit more wholesome than what we usually see here haha. I would love to see a bottom daddy tough haha, you always make them tops!
Anonymous
9/16/20, 9:02 PM
I live to serve the virus
Anonymous
9/16/20, 8:47 PM
i live to serve the virus
Anonymous
9/16/20, 8:44 PM
This was so hot! I can't wait for the next one!
9/16/20, 8:15 PM
A great story! I like that there old self wasn't wiped away but that they had to choose to embrace their new life. I hope this series continues! Amazing slow burn writing. The gradual mental transformation is super!
9/16/20, 8:07 PM
Please continue this series! I love it!
9/16/20, 6:46 PM
Thanks for your comments. @Erratic101, I'm glad you like that. Most of the comments wanted him to keep being an Alpha but him being a beta it's for the better. What other suggestions would you like to see in Bob? @Haru Kane, I like your ideas. Having a big burly man pleasuring you as you watch tv sounds great. About the blackmail, as I said before, I have a pretty good idea of where I'm going with the characters but everything could change on the way. The blackmail wasn't part of the original plan. In a way, it was used to push Bob to submission. Also, I don't think Dan had the intention to use that information, Michael and Dell still see Dan as a beta so I won't think they'll be happy with him messing with his father. @ForgottenCradle. and @Biasinoj, At this point of the story, Bob's (and Dan's) secret it's a wildcard. The smartest plan it's to keep it like it is, but sometimes the safest choice isn't the most fun.
9/16/20, 6:03 PM
i would love to see the entire dorm fall, particularly with more time spent with our sandman's instructions that he gives the jocks that took place off 'camera' this time around. or at least more time with the newly converted jockboys so we can see them start to enact their new programming.
9/16/20, 5:54 PM
this story is so hot ! i'm really looking forward to the chapter 3 !
9/16/20, 5:48 PM
looking forward to the next few chapters!
Sep 16, 2020
Zac
9/16/20, 5:31 PM
Fu-KING HOT! I wanna plan a vacation...
9/16/20, 4:18 PM
If I were Dan I'd keep it a secret until Bob's sons are on the same page as their dad and have them reveal it to themselves
9/16/20, 4:04 PM
Love the slow transformation. Looking forward to what happens next.
9/16/20, 3:59 PM
I'd rather Dan still play with Bob. And yes he keeps the secret so he can blackmail Bob if he rebels a little
9/16/20, 3:41 PM
I love this slow burn. Cant wait for the next chapter
9/16/20, 3:39 PM
The beta thing is interesting though I have to be honest and say I am not entirely a fan of the blackmail. Though this is I think just a kneejerk reaction as it works in the story, lol. (Though I hope he doesn't have an intention of using it.) The rimming was nice, could have been longer (haha), but as is it was hot. Looking forward to seeing how he makes the sons into good boys as well. Having them be beta boys for him sounds fun. Also, maybe he will be motivated to exercise more - not so much so he becomes a muscle man himself but so he becomes more healthy. I also like the image of Dan sitting on the couch watching TV as Bob either is on his knees sucking his alpha's cock or he is laying on the couch so his face is pressed into crotch as hands rub his backside. But yeah, good story.
Sep 16, 2020
9/16/20, 2:09 PM
Thanks guys! This was supposed to be a story contest submission but apparently I'm a himbo and can't read prompts. So we'll see if some other inspiration strikes me for further notes in this vein!
9/16/20, 1:58 PM
This is very different than your previous work. Good to see some creativity.
Sep 16, 2020
Nutiper
9/16/20, 1:30 PM
Oof, oh man. Give me some of that fruit! Your sex scenes are so, so good. Also now I'm curious what happens if you eat the fruit *without* having taken the vaccine...
9/16/20, 11:27 AM
I realllllly hope you continue this story. I'm obsessed.
9/16/20, 10:01 AM
I'm happy you made him the beta! More of his transformation please!