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12/10/20, 8:40 PM
> Lousy religion, keeping us fearful of our bodies for centuries. Now I gotta clarify. I'm not catholic - raised Anglican, but these days I just consider myself a theist. I just like the phrase 'catholic conscience' to describe the weird hangups I've got from a conservative upbringing. I get that there's no sin to it, and yeah, I've actually read the bible unlike most of the douchebags that claim to speak on behalf of the christian god. I feel like I got us off topic, but honest to pete, I feel like this is the best community to have these kinds of conversations with.
12/10/20, 8:30 PM
Glad to see you back to writing this story. I'm enjoying the story; you definitely are taking your time exploring the changes but you're grounding them in the two characters and their natures. I'm looking forward to the next section.
blankbot
12/10/20, 8:27 PM
Nicely done.
12/10/20, 8:21 PM
"Can I use that as a blurb for my next collection?" You certainly can. Although it may sway people NOT to read your stuff!
12/10/20, 8:20 PM
A lot of references in the Bible to homosexuality are, in fact, condemnations of consorting with prostitutes and *pederasty*. "The sin of Sodom" was not identified same-sex acts until at least the Middle Ages. References to pederasty and pedophilia were changed to adult homosexuality in the early 20th century. And I echo Absman's words about the priests: they're all doing it, and far worse than you would consider.
12/10/20, 8:08 PM
> I love a cock in my mouth, but my catholic conscience is always there making me hold back a little. > Lousy religion, keeping us fearful of our bodies for centuries. Here's the question to ask: are you an immortal soul on a journey of spiritual growth? So I wonder what the point would be in manifesting on a physical plane and then denying yourself physical sensations, like sexual pleasure? It seems to me that whatever happens to us when we're done here on Earth, we won't be experiencing the universe in the same way we do now, so why NOT take advantage of that? There is no sin in experiencing physical pleasure with another consenting adult. Period. Put as many dicks in your mouth as you want -- you know your priest is...
12/10/20, 7:54 PM
I liked this a lot! Love the septum piercing!
Anonymous
12/10/20, 7:51 PM
That's one I've never been good at. I always get a little squicky when it's the right moment, so I usually pass. Honestly, one of the hottest parts of this story was how he learned to love sucking so much. I love a cock in my mouth, but my catholic conscience is always there making me hold back a little. One of the reasons I write so much dumbing down stuff is that I love the idea of a guy losing his inhibitions. I still got a few to lose myself.
JRL
12/10/20, 7:43 PM
my god this is an amazingly hot story so far!!!! can't wait for more. thank you!!!
12/10/20, 7:26 PM
> Who cares if you end up a whore. With training like that, I’d be hella good at it. > I never did get to the eating ass training video...
12/10/20, 7:07 PM
absolutely love it. love the idea that they might switch body types and perhaps even some personality treats. seriously can't wait to see how they turn out.
12/10/20, 6:17 PM
Dude, that was excellent. I meant to spend last night writing, but instead I got my hand around my horn and edged to this for as long as I could manage. Blew my load during his scene where he sucked a dick for the "first time". I wish I had coach on my phone. Who cares if you end up a whore. With training like that, I'd be hella good at it.
12/10/20, 5:03 PM
I'm OBSESSED with this story...really inspiring me to write more!
giveintothemusk
12/10/20, 5:02 PM
Fan-fucking-tastic writing . Can't wait for more.
12/10/20, 5:01 PM
This is FANTASTIC so far!! Cant wait for more!
12/10/20, 4:58 PM
I'm not trying to sexualize it, but the reason EVERY SINGLE MAN owns a motorcycle is to feel the vibrating throb of the engine between his legs.
Anonymous
12/10/20, 4:56 PM
> I actually was so into the story that the bathtub ran over and flooded two rooms! It’s all your fault!!!!!! ;-) > Can I use that as a blurb for my next collection?
12/10/20, 4:53 PM
Love it! I don't think the inner turmoil is necessary. I tried a similar approach to my series (which I published here in part, before the shitstorm on "Pedophilia" broke out) Pure Muscle Mass, where a teenager lives in a facility and is turned into a drooling muscle beast. It's a question of who your audience is and what you're intending. If it's just a smut story, the turmoil can distract from the sexy, hot scenes of transforming into a muscle beast. Not every story needs to be a Hallmark holiday special. I actually was so into the story that the bathtub ran over and flooded two rooms! It's all your fault!!!!!! ;-)
12/10/20, 4:47 PM
Great start! Looking forward to more. I hope Charlie grows more comfortable with his new situation.
12/10/20, 4:44 PM
Really got to find me a biker bear who can take me for a ride on his Harley. This is the second story of yours that mentions how great the vibrations feel. Color me *very* curious.
Anonymous
12/10/20, 3:43 PM
excellent work!!
12/10/20, 3:36 PM
Thanks boi98229! I appreciate the feedback. Glad you enjoyed!
12/10/20, 2:56 PM
> I hope this means we’re in for a third installment in the Cycle One series! > Heeheehee! (Evil laughter)
12/10/20, 2:25 PM
This series is one of my all time favorites. I hope this means we're in for a third installment in the Cycle One series! You're an amazing author, Absman!
12/10/20, 2:15 PM
Someone should do a story about Sam Bennett's all-male MFA writing workshops...
12/10/20, 2:12 PM
oh god i should have never read this at work. but i still don't regret it. fuck this was hot.
12/10/20, 1:52 PM
Very excited to see where this goes! Little Tim here is about to make a man out of so many boys!
12/10/20, 12:17 PM
> I'll take a job if they are hiring! > Please send me all pictures and resumes and I will forward to the appropriate people.
12/10/20, 10:54 AM
thanks GM for the chapter. I don't mind if they are long. it's the epic story line that makes it a real fantasy erotic read. love to see where your heading with this. but will wait for each chapter to come out. easily my favourite story here. thank you for sharing your writing. PS voting for Hunter. with a red signet ring or wrist cuff. Relzad.
12/10/20, 10:25 AM
ill take a job if they are hireing!