Recent Comments

12/26/20, 9:46 AM
Since we've collaborated before, Ng5, I'm going to be frank with you. From my POV, this is a deeply dystopian story that thinks it's a utopian one. To me, it's creepy as fuck that Cody only feels "happy" once he's conformed to the expectations of a white collar job and professional career. And it's even creepier that he only achieves this when he's somewhat tricked into being hypnotized by these uncanny twins who remove his free will, give him a number instead of a name, manage all his finances, and decide whether he'll ever be free again. It's clear that this is supposed to be a model ethical dom/sub relationship, but it just doesn't work for me at all. Don't get me wrong: this is a well-written story, and I still found parts of it to be arousing. But it was trying to sell me on a certain ideology that I just wasn't buying.
12/26/20, 9:45 AM
This was excellent, great work. And if you do decide to do more, I know where you'll find one eager reader!
12/26/20, 9:36 AM
looking forward to see the effects of all those sodas, since you do behavioural changes so nicely. Too many man-to-fag stories don't have a recipricol man-to-daddy-bear counterpart to make it all five times better, so here's looking forward to either of the roomies mainlining the Brut Beer and Poppa Pop <3 (it's sounding like Jeff might get tricked into Sisselixer, and Mike will take the Brut Beer for variety at this point :P)
Dec 26, 2020
Anonymous
12/26/20, 9:28 AM
terrific!!
Anonymous
12/26/20, 9:27 AM
excellent work!!
12/26/20, 9:07 AM
What a great twist on the satyr transformation genre! Transporting it into a totally different setting like an auto mechanic's garage, makes the genre feel fresh again. I'm curious to see what happens next, especially to Dale and Chet out in the office.
Ng5
12/26/20, 8:59 AM
Why does there need to be a struggle against hypnosis? I feel like that is an unnecessary and overused plot device that is painting the false impression that every hypnotist is a villain or that the post and pre hypnotized versions of a person are always going to be at odds. In the narrative of a stereotypical straight society, having that resistance makes sense. But when all stories are like that, I cant help but cry at night at the thought that not even hypnosis, a personal kink for me - a subject-, is going to be filled with nothing but tragedy and inner turmoil, which are antithesis to the motivation for joy.
Dec 26, 2020
12/26/20, 8:41 AM
Such a hot conversion story, gets my Boxing day off to a rock hard start!
Dec 26, 2020
12/26/20, 8:25 AM
i can't even tell you how psyched i was to see you had posted again! we missed your stories!! and this one didn't disappoint - it was super hot. i wish i got a fleshgrip for christmas
Dec 26, 2020
Anonymous
12/26/20, 7:34 AM
In case the image at the end isn't loading for you guys, you should be able to find it [here](https://www.lpsg.com/attachments/tumblr_o8dupy5d671u5ah3lo1_1280-jpg.26322471/). It looks like the link is only accessible to LPSG members, so if you don't feel like registering for a free membership to that group, then you can message me or e-mail me at hypnothrill@yahoo.com, and I can send you the picture.
12/26/20, 6:53 AM
Too bad there is no following chapter. This is one of my best stories on the website. Maybe one day we'll get to know what will happen next ? Anyway, thanks for that great story !
giveintothemusk
12/26/20, 6:39 AM
What an excellent story! Creative and hot.
12/26/20, 6:39 AM
Very hot story! Would love to see more the hypnosis was a bit short without a struggle or anything
12/26/20, 6:04 AM
Wanted to comment on Chapter 3 but couldn't...loving where you're taking this. Keep it up! And thank you for enjoying my work too! Stories like this are what keep me horny enough to keep writing :P
12/26/20, 6:03 AM
Oh God, I'm already OBSESSED with this story!!
Dec 24, 2020
Anonymous
12/26/20, 4:14 AM
aww! sexy, cute, and well put together! i also totally agree with fyh about the twist, it was a nice change of pace :)
sthessexguy
12/26/20, 3:16 AM
I wish this could be me my feminine side as beatrice seems more and more important
Leo
12/26/20, 3:05 AM
Wow I’m so happy we finally got a new chapter :) I agree with the previous comment, please add more feet action for those with foot fetishes! I also really enjoyed the part where he controlled his new slave like a puppet with strings. So hot. Wish we could see more of that in future chapters. I’m very excited to see the chief as his personal butler, I want him to sell his home and move to his masters house to better serve him.
Anonymous
12/26/20, 2:41 AM
This is actually really nice. I really like your work and its super creative. Can you do a part where he gets visited by his uncle but the uncle is all like 'chill go make mare gay guys
Dec 20, 2020
12/26/20, 1:10 AM
I hope you're planning a sequel, I can't wait to see what happens next!
12/26/20, 1:01 AM
Hello, really enjoying your work. Please continue to turn the world into chaos. I liked the threesome scene and that the general suspected. But kind of hoped for a. Little more elaboration thereafter,.maybe mounting edge again xD. Hope you will continue.
12/26/20, 12:41 AM
it would be interesting to see a bigger group, like a whole gym or class reacting to the new reality
12/26/20, 12:40 AM
Hot story, I'm always glad to see something from you!
12/26/20, 12:04 AM
The second chapter of "To Wish For Cock" builds very well on the first. I am increasingly interested whether the satyr will play a future role in the storyline. Prior to that, however, I am interested in how his encounter with the narrator in the first chapter will continue to play out, particularly in its effects on the world at large. Was the narrator chosen for some reason? Will he accomplish some larger goal through his actions on the part of the satyr or the powers he represents? Theorizing aside, I loved the romp that was this chapter. The plot device of a journey is always good to keep things active and moving. The idea of the journey is reflected not only in the narrator's return home but in his own interior travels as he comes to terms with what has happened to him. His interactions with those around him, both physical and mental, become increasingly significant. Do they have any real sense of what is happening to them? I have a feeling that the narrator's wakeup, his morning after, with Jack will be very interesting.
Anonymous
12/25/20, 11:53 PM
The first are blocked:(((((
12/25/20, 11:20 PM
great continuation looking forward to more
12/25/20, 9:31 PM
One of my all time favorites!
12/25/20, 8:05 PM
Sissy twinks with girly desires and no self-control sound like wonderful Christmas presents to me :)
12/25/20, 7:55 PM
@ncyboot there is one more story released just a couple moments ago. this is the last story i've commissioned so far.maybe 2021 are a good year for more stories. who knows :)
Sam
12/25/20, 7:15 PM
pleeeeaase do more especially the back stories for the other two and how he was able to start changing himself and everyone