Recent Comments

1/4/21, 7:31 AM
Good start! I like the setup and the characters. Responding to pheromones strongly enough to go into trance and having wet dreams at least indicates that Joe is quickly developing strong attraction to Steve. Not sure yet if there is something more going on, or if Joe is just starting to respond subconsciously to the Steve's Dominance by feeling naturally submissive and aroused.
1/4/21, 6:34 AM
i would love to see more of this series, especially with more scat and monster stuff.
1/4/21, 2:54 AM
Hot. Looking forward for this to continue for many more chapters.
Anonymous
1/4/21, 2:34 AM
Every part had me leaking like a faucet, I hope we get to see more stories about Bobby's victims.
Anonymous
1/4/21, 2:18 AM
I loved it! I was hoping for even more permanent effects but it was still excellent.
Anonymous
1/4/21, 2:10 AM
Great story. Really intriguing...
Anonymous
1/4/21, 1:15 AM
extremely good stuff, both the bulk of the chapter and the set-up for whatever's next
1/4/21, 12:54 AM
Once I caught on to the idea it totally reminded me of Mantan Mooreland's Incomplete Sentence routine: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SDOQiy1XmBU](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SDOQiy1XmBU)
1/4/21, 12:18 AM
Found the conversion of the father by the son to be very hot. Enjoying this series.
Jan 2, 2021
Anonymous
1/4/21, 12:17 AM
I liked it, thanks ! Shinsou is obviously my favourite character, so it's great to read some stories with him !
1/3/21, 11:48 PM
Ha! Go ahead -torture the reader. :)
1/3/21, 11:29 PM
Woof! I was hard throughout Jame's time as a dog. The mountain spirit came across well. I enjoyed his narration and his sense of magick
1/3/21, 11:27 PM
The descriptions in this are really vivid, and you manage to pack a lot of characterization into very little space. Like Dace and Noam have said, the way you progress the changes is very elegant and awesome! Great work!
1/3/21, 11:21 PM
The only thing wrong with this story is that it hasn't continued yet. It has the potential to be a great continuation of "A Trial Through Hell," one of my all time favorite stories on this site.
1/3/21, 11:15 PM
I *loved* this - the gradual refinement of the satyr's reality warping, the rising lust in the vendor, the *sensory* nature of your descriptions! It's a masterpiece and I love it!
Lusty Stallion
1/3/21, 10:50 PM
Fuck man. Great job on a short story. Well written, described, really hot. Got me going. I'd love to see more of your stuff man. Thanks
1/3/21, 10:35 PM
i dont have a problem with making them leabians but many stories already did that. i guess this is why the story stand s out. it gets to explore themes other stories dodge in favor of erotica. i have no problem with those stories and i love most of them, but here is a unique opportunity to explore this themes of misogyny and homophobia and ask Questions like how society will move forward . its fascinating to me that it subverts thw usual tropes of making every one gay fixes society that usually happens in this stories. and i love me some gay utopia, but i am now starting to invest in the story itself.
1/3/21, 10:21 PM
I appreciate how evocative a setting you managed to create in such a short story, and how well you do that 'reality revises itself in iterations' thing to really get at what's happening and how the subject is being affected. Plus, the sexy bits were, well sexy :D Very nicely done, especially given the word count. You should post more stuff! And if you wanted to do an expanded version of this one to really drill into Thomas's experience with the satyr in more detail, well, I wouldn't say no :P
Anonymous
1/3/21, 10:05 PM
god damn this is AMAZING! Thank you so much for writting this!
Jan 3, 2021
1/3/21, 8:50 PM
This was hot as hell.
Dec 31, 2020
1/3/21, 8:18 PM
Dace - Thank you so much for taking my word salad of a prompt and making it into something steamingly hot! You've got a gift. The fact you parceled it up for me into a perfectly snug little story is the icing on the cake!
1/3/21, 6:56 PM
the only thing that would make Willie Cici's stories better would be to find a way to re-link the photos to them.
1/3/21, 6:16 PM
Thanks for letting me know - The Question is Does the Father know who his son is and likewise does the so know who his father is
1/3/21, 6:12 PM
I hope everyone will finally be able to convince Erik, especially his dad and brother.
1/3/21, 5:56 PM
@malskin yes it is a repost/reedit from 2017 i made it to a community story, so others could write their own stories in the emperors universe ;)
1/3/21, 5:53 PM
Great Story, i am more that sure i have read this before, but it has come up with todays date 03/01/21
1/3/21, 5:32 PM
I can't wait for the next chapter!! What's about the coming reinforcements? It will be hot.
Jan 3, 2021
1/3/21, 5:25 PM
Very hot induction and story!
1/3/21, 5:24 PM
Wow - that scene with Malik hiding was really thrilling! Good luck on producing more!
Leo
1/3/21, 4:46 PM
You should make the dad/king become his obedient slave