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1/4/21, 8:34 PM
I loved this chapter, very hot story. If I may, though - one of my favorite parts of your stories is the detailed description of the moment when the main character succumbs, and it seems like we fast-forwarded past that part this time. I would have loved to read about how it felt as the plastic pushed deeper and deeper into him and fused with his brain or spinal cord, for example.
1/4/21, 6:14 PM
Somnus, don't give up on your half-finished stories. You don't know how long I've been hacking away at this one. I wrote the first little section (the opening scene with Liam and Martin) more than two years ago, then I wrote the next section (up to Paul's arrival) about two months ago, and then I finally found time and inspiration to finish it all up yesterday. I don't really like writing that way, because it's hard for me to get back into the erotic groove of a story after I put it down for a while. But it can be done. As with anything, practice makes perfect.
1/4/21, 5:59 PM
Hot! I love it !
1/4/21, 5:53 PM
Proper pacing, hot story, indeed good as a standalone. Very hot!
Somnus
1/4/21, 5:19 PM
Another top notch story. I don't recall really liking the first two installments but i'm loving this which i do think speaks to how well it works as a stand alone. Simple but effective world building, sexy scenes and a hot transformation. What more could we ask for? I have so many half finished stories and bullet pointed ideas. Tbh it's in hopes of producing something of this quality that I keep hacking away at my little projects..
1/4/21, 5:19 PM
Great work!
1/4/21, 4:16 PM
Oh wow this story is so sweet and sexy x3
1/4/21, 4:11 PM
Couldn't have done it any better myself. Bravo!
1/4/21, 4:00 PM
lets see how the things will change
1/4/21, 2:34 PM
Helpless little babies get to cum.
1/4/21, 2:08 PM
Ooh, fantastic stuff! I love how you describe the gradual transformation of every man in town into the same perfect Ken doll--handsome, chiseled, and mindless. Would you give it all up for the perfect body and sex whenever you wanted? ;p
1/4/21, 1:04 PM
NOAM, you champ! This turned out better than I could ever have hoped. Everything about this - from the use of awareness and obliviousness, to the solo/duo time stop sections, to the poor beleaguered Mr. Barton... it all comes together into a delicious, sexy cocktail. Who ever said wishes didn't get you anywhere? Champagne work. Will be returning to this in the future, mate!
1/4/21, 1:00 PM
Way to go! This was a major effort and i found myself really drawn to it even though chastity play doesn't usually get me going. Hope to see more of your work!
1/4/21, 12:57 PM
Loved this subtle evolution of bully-to-lover and the mechanic of the timestop for making the changes. Gave me a bit of blue balls at how close we kept getting to a climax, for that matter! Well done!
1/4/21, 12:23 PM
wow so jot.
1/4/21, 11:54 AM
another great tale!
Jonanator
1/4/21, 10:12 AM
love the story.
Jonanator
1/4/21, 10:03 AM
soooo hot. love this.
1/4/21, 9:57 AM
Unfortunately the White Swan ain't what it used to be. They divided it in two making the larger part; the stage, dance-floor, beer garden and back bar into a straight 'gentleman's club'. The front bar continues as a gay bar but fails to pull in a crowd. All in all it has become very unfriendly which is a shame because when I was growing up it was the place us local lads could cop off with city bankers and get their help in finding jobs in the financial services sector. But, Corinthian, your comment sows a seed for potential revenge in my twisted mind...
1/4/21, 9:53 AM
So happy to see the story continued! Excellent content as always. Love seeing the enhancements, robotization, and assimilation. Hope we can see more of this world!
Dec 31, 2020
1/4/21, 9:27 AM
A bit different from what we normally get here, and imho, all the better for it. It was a very charming, romantic story that was a delight to read.
1/4/21, 9:02 AM
@anon and @Musicalannienfan Well. Kaa doesn't actually eat Mowgli, he keeps him. I mean, he threatens to do it, but I leave the ending open to be interpreted in whatever way you prefer. Let Kaa be a braggart who He enjoys threatening and taunting Mowgli like that, but in the end he keeps Mowgli it's a possibility.
1/4/21, 9:00 AM
Thank you . Please continue!
1/4/21, 8:20 AM
Ayyyy welcome back :) great story :D
1/4/21, 8:20 AM
hot as hell, fingers crossed for
1/4/21, 8:18 AM
Loved it!!! So good
1/4/21, 8:06 AM
This story keeps getting hotter and hotter!! Thanks so much for your imagination and willingness to share, even to the point of writing your first story! My own kinks include pheromones, hypnosis, mind control, transformations. i also love the idea of male hierarchical family so am very much looking forward to meeting the rest of the family. I have noticed a few odd cases of misused words and awkward unusual ways of wording things. i used to have a partner who was an English major and a copy editor for a national magazine, so i have picked up the disturbing habit of noticing this sort of thing. i am happy to review your copy if you would like. Just let me know. i seem to have a problem with my profile/account access on this site. If you want to contact me, you can message me on bdsmlr.com. You will likely have to join that site, but it is completely free, and I suspect the kind of site you might enjoy.
1/4/21, 7:31 AM
Good start! I like the setup and the characters. Responding to pheromones strongly enough to go into trance and having wet dreams at least indicates that Joe is quickly developing strong attraction to Steve. Not sure yet if there is something more going on, or if Joe is just starting to respond subconsciously to the Steve's Dominance by feeling naturally submissive and aroused.
1/4/21, 6:34 AM
i would love to see more of this series, especially with more scat and monster stuff.
1/4/21, 2:54 AM
Hot. Looking forward for this to continue for many more chapters.