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1/7/21, 3:50 AM
Reminded me of an episode of Dr.Who. I.J.S.
1/7/21, 3:24 AM
Young virgin hot stuff, could have used a bit more hypnosis/ resistance- but good job. I.J.S.
1/7/21, 1:34 AM
Seriously mega hot ! Reminded me of the old OUTER LIMITS series ( which I found sexy even then ). Very imaginative, detailed and colorful- needs to be a mini-series on HERE TV. I.J.S.
1/7/21, 1:04 AM
Fine writing ( a bit too repetitive ) terrific sex , wish an authority figure ( principle? coach? ) had been drawn in to the Jay/ teach session good hot stuff. I.J.S.
Conversion Enthusiast
1/7/21, 12:14 AM
I love the imagery of how quickly he turned so many soldiers! I wish the transformations had more descriptions in them though and a bit longer pacing.
1/6/21, 11:51 PM
Wow! Great start. More, please!
Anonymous
1/6/21, 11:39 PM
excellent work!!
giveintothemusk
1/6/21, 11:30 PM
Would love to see more some day!
1/6/21, 10:51 PM
Very unike! Congrats to You! J.J.Z.
1/6/21, 10:47 PM
HOT ! Dumb jock played for sex by smart twink. I.J.S.
1/6/21, 10:06 PM
Want to see other ‘swingers’ attracted and transformed in wild scenarios and positions. I.J.S.
Anonymous
1/6/21, 10:00 PM
God the hipster names make me violently angry. Otherwise, great story as always.
1/6/21, 9:13 PM
Incredible finale , needs to be a mini-series on HERE TV. I.J.S.
1/6/21, 8:48 PM
Reminded me of a really hot gay twist on the film SLITHER, exceptionally well written and so sexy ! More please I.J.S.
1/6/21, 8:02 PM
Unique narrative.I.J.S.
1/6/21, 7:21 PM
A thrilling conclusion!
1/6/21, 7:06 PM
[@Feed Your Head](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1170832): Thanks so much! Guys getting potted out is one of my favorite turn ons too. Glad you liked it! [@Derek Williams](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/175661): Thanks bro! You were a big help in getting this story out. And agreed, stoners are so fucking hot. [@Plymouth58](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1353762): Thanks for the feedback! I was afraid of making the story too long, but next time I'll be sure to make it a little longer! [@Malefiscar](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1211427): Ooh, a series would be cool! You might be onto something...
1/6/21, 7:06 PM
Nice take on a gear based bodyswap story. Always loved the ones from bluffman and malskin. Only wish there was more description of what the hot young dom looked like, and some feeling of sliding the well broken in possibly warm leathers onto his body. I'm picturing the young guy as muscular smooth body with tightly cropped bond hair, a big German adonis
Anonymous
1/6/21, 6:08 PM
Love this story, cool to see something a bit different. Would love to hear more about Ross's life as a barefoot stoner
Daniel
1/6/21, 5:57 PM
Hot story! Ass a former weed head I can relate to it very why’ll. Please continue to write ( keep up the goo detail and character work ). I.J.S.
Anonymous
1/6/21, 5:54 PM
terrific story!!!
Malefiscar
1/6/21, 3:44 PM
Really fantastic story! I only wish it could have been longer or maybe the start of a series. I'd love to hear what went down with that landlord in more detail haha
1/6/21, 3:03 PM
Great story! It seems to have been dormant for a while - are you still around? Any chance of continuing?
Anonymous
1/6/21, 2:50 PM
This was absolutely amazing! I shall be reading it again, this time wearing a chastity cage
Anonymous
1/6/21, 2:37 PM
great pair of chapters!
1/6/21, 2:25 PM
I love it! I like the characters very much. Pretty cool story, although I must say I wish it would be longer! would had been great to have mores descriptions and a slower change, but it's an excellent story the way it is.
1/6/21, 2:14 PM
Thanks so much for all your kind words! I'm glad you folks like this one and are having as much fun reading as I did writing! Your feedback really encourages me to keep writing! I honestly was just as surprised when Griffin decided he was going to seek out and fuck the Kraken xD in my first draft.
1/6/21, 2:13 PM
Loved it bro. Stoners are so fuckin' hot.
Dec 31, 2020
1/6/21, 1:48 PM
What I especially love in this story is that in addition to the smouldering hot dynamic and the very sexy ending, you don't really try to like, magically solve Francis' chronic pain. You depict a healthy and positive attitude toward his progress and quickly show without ever mentioning it directly that he's still desirable and can lead a full, sexy life even with the pain and disability. That means a lot! As usual, your writing is incredibly good and sexy.
Dec 31, 2020
1/6/21, 1:42 PM
Awww, I loved Noel's unerring confidence and kind demeanor in this story, and the very hot results of that. It's a very sweet and wholesome sexy story, through and through.