Did not disappoint. But, hoping there is more on the horizon.

Wow! The synopsis intrigued me. But, I never expectd what I got. Awesome. Can hardly wait for the the next chapter.

Looking forward to seeing their adventures!

MUST COMPLY. OBEDIENCE IS PLEASURE.

Very intriguing start. I can’t wait to see the next chapter!

God this was hot. More Nightwing smut please!

Thank you guys for the support and suggestions, I really appreciate it. You guys are giving me a lot of ideas, and helping me improve my story telling skills.

That was FANTASTIC! and thank YOU. i loved it.

I would’ve like to see a little more detail regarding the uniform and description of how Jensen and Daniel felt. Also maybe more insight into their day to day routine, what type of chores. Do they have any recollections of their previous life? Do they try to fight it? How do their appearances become altered? Are they forced to do any type of s**ual acts But this is great progress and there aren’t enough of these types of stories on here so please by all means keep up the great work!

Nice although I do wish it was longer and a bit better fleshed out. I would have also liked to see a slight difference in the was Daniel was controlled. Like you can still go for the pocket watch but maybe have Blake slightly sneaky to ambush him. He just seems to walk to and whip out his pocket watch and gets the guy to fall easily. I think Daniel who has concerns already about Toby would have had his guard up. But he seems to sit down with a stranger and switch his focus easily. You could have stretched and fixed the issue with him arriving and checking him out in his uniform being like you're wearing an actual butler uniform. And Toby goes of course I am Daniel what else would I wear. He tries to talk more with Toby but he insists he will be for now needs to focus on finishing dinner. And to go and relax have a glass of wine. Blake tries to make small talk to which Daniel would be a bit uncomfortable with but a glass of wine later, that Daniel tries to insist Toby doesn't have to pour but Toby insists he wants to sand not to worry himself just relax he loves doing this. Daniel sips at the wine while loosening his necktie and trying to still ask why a butler. Toby gives maybe answers like he loves the uniform and cleaning. He loves waking up everyday with a purpose and knowing what he was going to do. The wine was laced with drugs and starts taking effect and at that point Blake steps in to control the conversation and tries to focus on Daniel and drops how it he had that focus maybe his girlfriend wouldn't have left and his life in shambles. Daniel is taken Bank by Blake's bluntness and the fact he seems to know details of a private conversation and gets up to leave angry with both of them only to have a hard time moving. To which Blake says he's in no condition to drive and instructs Toby to take his keys away and return him to the dinner table next to him. He pulls out the pocket watch and calls out the time and calling Daniel a light weight but Daniel insists he's not drunk and asks what he put in the drink. Blake is playing with the pocket watch and catches Daniel locking on to the pocket watch and then the rest plays out. Obviously I would stretch it out but it would build to it a bit differently so the chapter isn't quiet the same. I feel you need a different transformation/mind control method or change up how you get to the same mind control.

Awesome story! Would love to find those boxers on the floor, turn me into a big dumb smooth muscled wrestling brute bro!

Only wish it was longer because butler stories rule

This story came out almost four years ago and I still read it all the time because of how hot it is. You absolutely nailed it with this one, Author.

Helllll yes. Flirty, a little silly, but with consistent characters and hot, hot sex. This is exactly the kind of content I come (hehe) to GSS for. So excited for more, thanks for sharing your work!

I dont know if its my Nightwing bias, but this may be one of my favorite stories of yours. Great work!

Chapter two has been complete, I made some edits as well and changed a few things from my first draft of chapter two. Hope you all enjoy chapter two. Let me know what you think.

One of the hottest stories I’ve read in a while! Please continue writing more chapters!!

Love this! Any chance of returning to this?

Si intravede un barlume di speranza! Spero che i ragazzi riescano ad ingannare Giò, anzi che reggano lo stress della situazione in cui la sorte di Marco è in bilico. Sono sicuro che tutti si aiuteranno e chissà che fine farà Giò! Grazie davvero per il nuovo capitolo che il racconta diventa sempre più intrigante!

okay, the comment you asked: the first section about the zebras was a good warm-up for the short stories, and we could see how the pheromones work on people the second one, in prison, was a breath of fresh air, as you focused on the prisoners and not on the cops, also, the rhinos look so good the third one, with the wolves, was my favorite, not only beacuse of the Arctic wolves, but also, how tender the father was toward his son, and how the son topped that father, that is not very commum and the last one, the one with the bull family gave me a bit of suspanse vibes, as the pov was trying to warn his family and then flee befoe the the baor found and turend him, it was very nice

Love it! Great to see you write some more explicit stuff (much as I love Mike etc!) That's a show I'd love to go to - and volunteer for!

your writing is amazingly hot… and it is taken to a whole other level by the images… quite like the use of vignettes… adds to the overall story line… can’t wait for the next chapter wherever it takes us!!!

Very interesting. You can write more.

Deliciously diabolical.

Another lovely hot chapter to this series! I definitely loved the idea of showing various places affected by the virus all over the population now and the variety of horny anthro men! Great job!

Thank you for updating this series! Looking forward to Zane becoming more powerful.

Sequel?

Is the full story (new chapters) posted on your patreon? please confirm?

Well, the stories so far I've read are memorable and good. But I would have liked something that followed the classical books a lot closer, with plenty of gay sex thrown in. Like take 'The Tower Treasure', most of Frank and Joe's friends are other boys. At one point, they are all conducting a search and have taken different parts of town to search. With that many boys together in one spot, they could have all had some orgie. Or maybe a like-gathering at Chet Morton's farm. There was the sitation near the end of the book where Frank and Joe are locked into an old water tower by a hobo. It seems to me the hobo could have demanded some action out of Frank and Joe.

the hottest story I've read on here for quite some time. Great work!