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5/21/21, 7:12 AM
Oh, being able to revert to 'human form', that would be a very useful thing. A stealth mode to blend in, it's the sort of thing you'd expect from a guardian. I like that!

5/21/21, 10:22 AM
Agreed, I think it will be a Neanderthal hybrids only ability, and be kind of an at will "werewolf" like situation. 😃@Uncle Arctos
5/21/21, 9:59 AM
wow,that was NICE
Bravo Monster
5/21/21, 9:54 AM
what about the next chapter?
5/21/21, 9:41 AM
oh wow,this ticked boxes I didn't know I had
5/21/21, 6:20 AM
Great chapter, getting the local police involved, it stops questions being asked, also as someone has said they have their own security now. we know that the cops are in there nut sacks waiting to be reborn as hybrids for the new race. my suggestion for now is, when they go back on duty they have the ability to shape shift to human form, to lesson suspicion for the reminder of the towns folk. reverting back to hybrids when with their clan.

5/21/21, 9:16 AM
The shapeshifting idea has come up a few times now as a suggestion...perhaps I can look into incorporating that. And the Neanderthal hybrids would probably make the most sense, kind like a werewolf thing, going from human to large hybrid man-beast. 🙂@MalSkin
5/21/21, 6:12 AM
Yet another great chapter, its good to see that Daniel is progressing - 2 things i note from this chapter is first after his encounter with "bleach", He realized that he needs Piss as an antidote, part of his conditioning from a previous chapter, the other thing i noticed was that Duke called him Danny, was that suppose to happen? at one point i thought name change, but thinking about it, Daniel is a far better name for the towns New Sheriff. Looking forward to the next chapter
Evan
5/21/21, 4:47 AM
Loving the progression here. The milking scenes were extremely hot and the connection between the guys. Plus I enjoyed sharing their piss with him as well. I guess his is toxic given he's flushing out the "bleach". Shame. Thanks for a fun series!
5/21/21, 4:25 AM
Great story!! Very glad to have you in the writing community!
Anonymous
5/20/21, 10:51 PM
Great story addition. I hope we see some more transformations though.
5/20/21, 10:45 PM
This is one of my favorites! Great writing about some of my favorite themes!!
May 20, 2021
5/20/21, 5:37 PM
MMMMMMM.... that was hot!
May 20, 2021
5/20/21, 4:05 PM
Short and sweet! Love the twist
5/20/21, 3:51 PM
Very kinky and well written
Jonanator
5/20/21, 7:09 AM
hottt

5/20/21, 1:14 PM
@Jonanator Glad you enjoyed it. Working on Part 2 soon!
5/20/21, 5:44 AM
Thanks so much, Hypno-Tales, for this sexy and very entertaining story. You did a wonderful job of describing Mowgli's brainwashing. The depths to which you had Kaa take Mowgli's trance and his sense of absolute obedience and devotion were amazing! I felt like going into trance myself and was able to stay just conscious enough to continue reading. If you will forgive me for being too direct, your English is somewhat awkward in places. Strangely though in this context, with my mind rather fuzzy anyway, it seemed so much like English poetry where the essence of the message was more important than the way things were worded. Any errors in wording or sentence structure didn't seem in my mind to make any difference to your wonderful story-telling.

5/20/21, 9:07 AM
@boi98229 Oh, thank you very much for your comment. I have loved reading it and being able to hear that you enjoyed the story, I appreciate your words very much and I am very satisfied that I have made you have a good time reading my story. :) I really wanted to put a lot of emphasis on those details that you mention, the depth of the trance, the absolute and delicious feeling of submission and devotion to his master. Hopefully this summer I will be able to finish one of the three new stories that I still have unfinished. I have nothing to forgive, don't worry ^w^. Certainly my English is strange, although I hope it is understandable. First I wrote the text in Spanish and then I gradually translated it into English (for me it is easier to do so), so it is likely that many sentences maintain a structure similar to Spanish, resulting in that peculiar result. Anyway, please, if you find a serious error that makes it difficult to understand, I would appreciate it if you mention it so that I can fix it. Thank you very much for your comment. :)
Anonymous
5/20/21, 5:03 AM
Love this series! Please keep going!
5/20/21, 4:12 AM
Oh my FUCK this was hot. Sheer erotic eating, lazy hypnosis, and weight gain...damn.
5/20/21, 1:09 AM
Oooooo! Or the local beer supply! Sneak into the local tavern or two and leak some semen into the kegs on tap. Maybe the town bar AND the rougher biker/redneck bar on the outskirts of town! 😉

5/20/21, 1:13 AM
Very possible, as Billy clearly frequented a place when he was fully human. Perhaps he'd know how to get in a taint the drinks 🙂@Uncle Arctos

5/20/21, 2:14 AM
@ArdanWolfe You know what he probably does, and Vincent probably frequents the other bar and hangs out with a cigar and a beer on the smoking porch out back. Might even be friends with the bartender and knows a LOT about the bar. Wonder if Gavin moonlights as a bouncer at the same bar?

5/20/21, 2:28 AM
Well now I have plenty of ideas to work with, gotta see what fits in the next chapter. Thank you again for all the good feedback and input 😄@Uncle Arctos
Anonymous
5/19/21, 10:17 PM
such a hot story!!
5/19/21, 8:52 PM
This is an interesting resolution to both clan house security and the threat of police intervention. now if they can get their semen into the water system, they'd be able to steadily process the whole town, picking and choosing who gets made into watchdogs or not.

5/19/21, 10:05 PM
Ah that would be a quick and efficient option....an option worth exploring. Thanks for the feedback. 😄@Mind Labyrinth
5/19/21, 9:58 PM
@Morph Thank you for allowing me the chance to discuss this! In the "real world" they appear as fully human, though they have exaggerated genitals (like a horse) -- they soon discover that they can access a "Magic Realm" where they manifest their "Bestial Forms" which you would recognize as a classic centaur. The scene above takes place just after they first discover the Magic Realm, which is what turns Pokey's hair blue (to match his tail). To sum up -- Real World, human; Magic Realm, classic centaur. Until the next book, when I break that wall down.
5/19/21, 9:51 PM
This is incredibly hot. I love seeing what happens at each time stamp. I like that Niko was the one that Jonathan picked, and it makes me wonder if Niko's memory flash is the reason that Jonathan picked him. and like Dace says above, I like the lack of inhibition as well as the fucking that is affectionate and loving. Great job, and I look forward to reading more from you.
5/18/21, 12:21 AM
Pokey....LOL. I love the reference. Did someone say " eating scented hairy manhole combined with thick and heavy cocks?" I'm in. This is how I envision my ultimate goal of forming a wolf pack. Centaurs though give it an even deeper primal feel. I'd like to find my face someday in a hairy scented Centaur hole. I'll be out in the woods waiting, find me. I always had the fantasy of recognizing my pack brothers by the scent of their pits and hole. Lucky Red. And this story got the elusive 5 ratings in every category. Woof! or WhinnyWoof?

5/18/21, 10:14 AM
@PupScout They also get their opportunity to have sex in the Bestial Forms, but that's later in the story. The Pokey reference is not alone. ALL of the centaurs have good horse names: 1) CAVALIER - the Herd Master 2) GAMBIT - the Warrior 3) LICKETY SPLIT - the Scout 4) DUNN - the Sexual Instigator 5) APPLEJACK - the Tech Guy 6) POKEY - the Unicorn I have lists of horse names that I wheedled through finding these. The only one I didn't choose was "Gambit" who won his name via a Twitter poll. (I wanted "Shadow" or "Rebel".) But a gambit is an opening chess move -- and since only pawns and knights can make the opening move in chess (and knights are horses) it worked in my favor. Scent plays a huge role in this story, from their pheromone power to the Dionysian Wine to the Divine Dung in the Augean Stables, everything stinks. Hahahaha I encourage you to read the whole book -- I genuinely think you'll like it!

5/18/21, 1:18 PM
@PupScout This is definitely a story that plays into your musk/scent kinks, I strongly recommend you give it a read!

5/19/21, 3:52 PM
nice
boi
5/19/21, 2:29 PM
wish this was longer
5/19/21, 12:12 PM
Best muscle bear daddy pig boi story ever! I shot ropes and ropes throughout the chapters!
5/19/21, 12:06 PM
Each story gets better and better, hornier and sexier the the last.