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Martin
1/25/24, 9:37 PM
@JockTopper: Due to a bug, we can't approve your edit. I'll try to fix it this weekend. The actual issue is that your current series is included in a curated list, and because of that, it cannot be deleted (to be replaced by the new series).

Martin
1/25/24, 9:41 PM
Actually, I've just fixed it. The core issue was that you named the series for each chapter individually. If you want to create a series with multiple chapters, all chapters have to use the same ***series*** name - but different ***story*** names. Let me know if you have questions about this!
1/25/24, 9:28 PM
please continue!!
Martin
1/22/24, 6:58 AM
Just a little remark from the site's owner: The site's rules contain a clause that there must be no realistic rape scenario and that includes the usage of real-life drugs. This first chapter seems to use some kind of knock-out drug. You need to add some total non-realistic touch to the follow-up chapters please!

Jonanator
1/22/24, 8:46 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I agree with you. As much as it is a great start to the story, not very keen on the fact a guy was drugged and taken out of a place without anyone even knowing.

1/22/24, 1:32 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) To get a little clarification, what is the difference with the start of this compared to a very popular story on this site Fall of the Parker Brothers. That story is all about drugs and rape and features no hypnosis.

Martin
1/22/24, 2:46 PM
@[Hypnofiend23](/user/show/2528896) It is a fine line, and yes, I've struggled with some of Jack's stories. As I see it, the drug in Jack's stories makes the boys extremely horny, submissive, uninhibited, and gay, but they have no other adverse effects. It's not described as realistic a drug like GHB or heroine. The 'realistic' part is the important point. The simple reason why this rule exists in the first place is to avoid people getting the wrong idea and try to play out this fantasy in real life. If you say that this is a bit hypocritical, I don't really deny it. It's a bit of a fig leaf for me, but a small price to pay.

1/22/24, 3:53 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks for the warning, if my work is in violation of the site's rules I can remove it or edit it to make the drugging part far less realistic. l already have the entirety of the story written out and this is the only time something like this happens, the rest is mostly mind control via bodily odors.

Martin
1/22/24, 4:08 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) No need to remove the story. It's perfectly ok to make this drug a bit less realistic. Like it doesn't knock him out but makes him very susceptible to the suggestions so he follows them on his own account. I'm sure you'll come up with something. Or maybe you make him sniff their odor which arouses him so he just wants to follow them. Mind control via bodily odors is perfectly fine!

1/22/24, 7:25 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I've removed the substance element all together, I hope this would be more acceptable.

Martin
1/22/24, 7:56 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) :thumbsup:

1/22/24, 8:09 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Awesome, thanks for all the feedback! :grin:

1/25/24, 7:16 AM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) I think the change fo squezzing sweat I go his drink is very hot and in keeping with parts two and three 🥵🥵🥵🥵

1/25/24, 7:15 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) That's a relief, honestly I was afraid it'd be a bit out of place :sweat_smile:
1/25/24, 6:15 PM
This is a great concept, looking forward to the next entry!
1/25/24, 5:35 PM
Perfectly well written, the build up is great
1/25/24, 5:21 PM
As always, I love your transformation stories, and this one is certainly no exception!
1/25/24, 4:47 PM
I love your experiences u sound dominant would you be able to hypnotize a guy online very submissive but strong willed don't believe I can be put under tried with spirals and hour long recording listening to them going to bed
1/25/24, 11:30 AM
This is that type of story where before you are fully satisfied, it ends, leaving you with a semi-hard and aching eyes for more of it with your mind cursing : Why was it so short?!

1/25/24, 2:43 PM
@[HypnoFreak](/user/show/10043513) Thanks! But don't worry, there are more chapters, so you don't have to torture yourself staying just semi-hard
1/25/24, 2:34 PM
After the story disappeared I was beginning to think I made it up specially because I couldn't find any trace of it. Glad to see it's back!
1/25/24, 1:07 PM
You have such a unique way of writing what I want to read and then rather than stop at one transformation you give us continued mpb, obese gents (slobs) bigger and better than before. So glad you are continuing this piece.

1/25/24, 2:05 PM
@[Titan](/user/show/17556) Thanks so much! Some of your stories were foundational to my interests. While the next story I've been working on splits off of my main core fetishes in a different direction than this, I've got some stories that I've been ruminating on that focus more intently on the balding obese gentlemanly aspects that I hope you enjoy (in addition to some more on this story down the line).
1/25/24, 9:00 AM
I love the general idea of an interracial/class body swap. The pace of the story was good. It was hot the way Pablo ended up as Alex's darker skinned boyfriend who had trouble speaking English. What was really missing for me it any sense of how the transformation was done.
1/25/24, 3:19 AM
Miss this story. Please come back

Anonymous
1/25/24, 8:40 AM
@[Baekhyun](/user/show/1916361) Yeah, we all miss it a lot
1/25/24, 8:36 AM
I was really missing this series! Thank you for bringing it back
1/25/24, 7:16 AM
Continuity error. Now fixed. Thanks, F1.
1/25/24, 4:27 AM
Really impressive! Great writing! Great imagery, build up, and awesome tension and manipulation of the situation… and I even felt it myself… you worked your magic on me as much as on the coach! Thank you!

1/25/24, 7:08 AM
@[Frank1](/user/show/10000899) Glad you enjoyed it, Frank. More to come. -JT.
Cracker
11/18/21, 8:55 PM
Fk great. This is really hot.

Jock Topper
11/18/21, 9:14 PM
****Thanks @Cracker. I take that as a huge compliment coming from someone with your talent.

1/25/24, 4:20 AM
@Jock Topper hey JT, your note to cracker implies that he might be a writer too, that impresses you! Is that true? Would you share how to access his work??? Or is that not cool to ask?

1/25/24, 7:05 AM
@[Frank1](/user/show/10000899) He's on this site. Check out: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10023984
Anonymous
1/25/24, 5:01 AM
Can’t wait to see how the whole series will end up!
Anonymous
1/25/24, 4:57 AM
I have been looking for your stories for so longggg so glad to see you’re back
1/25/24, 3:54 AM
My checking back finally paid off! Loved this chapter, of course. It took a few satisfying sessions to complete it. Life happens and breaks are understood, but I hope you keep writing (preferably before 3 more years). Love that this father and son were put through this, know what's happening, but can't do anything about it! Great work.

1/25/24, 4:52 AM
@[HusbandFirst](/user/show/2436468) Thanks so much for your continued support! Glad to know that I managed to interrupt your reading...:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: I do still have some other ideas in mind for other stories, but creative writing is a time and brain power consuming effort. I'll definitely try my best to keep it going, we'll see how it goes. Thanks.
1/25/24, 12:10 AM
It wonderful and great things to see you add another chapter. I like the part how they punishment them. And just control their body and crave but still remain their personal. It little bit sad the story is end. I thought their would be a part like make them list some man or boy to force them join club than the end. Anyway it good to see you write more! Very thankful.

1/25/24, 4:43 AM
@[easterblue229](/user/show/920853) Thanks! Unfortunately I don't feel like I have any more interesting new inspirations to bring to this series at this point. I have covered the operations of the Club and how the servants got enslaved into working for the Club. I guess I could go on some more about the Club's activities or how Ron or Chris might be made to go about recruiting more innocent men. But I feel like I don't have any new ideas to present these in a different and interesting way, so I'd end up just repeating the similar plots that I've already written about. So I think it might be best to just wrap it up nicely. But thanks for your support and comment anyway!
1/25/24, 4:36 AM
Wow, the way you describe things is amazing, the phrases you use and the obvious experience behind your storytelling is clear! I feel like you take me on a journey and you plan how I’ll end up… just like the top in the story leads his new devotee where he wants him to end up, and what he experiences along the way! Damn! One question that confused me, is this part two of JT seducing Coach Murphy, or JT seducing a new Coach (Johnson)? Thank you for writing and taking me on an exciting journey! Damn I want to meet you and see who you are in person! Wow
1/25/24, 3:26 AM
Good story, well written and enjoyable like all of your stuff that I've read. I did find it interesting you chose to use Welsh as the alien language.
Anonymous
1/25/24, 2:59 AM
I love how you’re detailing Monty’s inner idlings and his slowly increasing want to covet his friend. Also, I am enjoying the resilience Justin has, compared to your other JPS-afflicted characters. Don’t get me wrong, I love the slutty ones who cave the instant they see big cock, but the ones with a bit more self control are a nice change of pace. It’s also very satisfying to see them crumble eventually lol
1/25/24, 2:52 AM
I love the melding of the power exchange and the romance. The pace of Baby's transformation seems almost unnaturally quick and smooth, without self-doubt, which hints of the power of the subtle hypnosis sessions. The seduction feels both somewhat insidious and yet seemingly harmless and romantic. This small lack of clarity just as insidiously keeps the reader moving through the story as fast as one can absorb the hot interaction. Speaking of which, no time to say thanks. i gotta go!
1/25/24, 1:07 AM
Glad you continued writing this series! Have been looking forward for more chapters.
1/24/24, 11:28 PM
This is so good.
10/7/23, 12:58 AM
Is it bad I kinda want Booker to escape!? He was so hot in this story and the one before this. He could probably use his science to completely reverse his condition and get that massive dick back!!!!

1/24/24, 11:27 PM
@[Jjoday018](/user/show/10001108) Yes! Very bad! How many times can I have this man escape to wreak havoc on some other men?! XD
10/7/23, 2:54 PM
All we need is for Alucard to come in with his whip and...well... *smirks*

1/24/24, 11:26 PM
@[MeddlerIncs](/user/show/913480) **The million eyes of Legion look down upon the single man standing before them; clad in leather and brandishing a whip.** **"You must be the Belmont."**
7/28/22, 8:14 AM
Thank you so much! It was a really cool story and I really liked the ending. They'll probably be forever deprived of civilized society and their past lives, but I'm glad that the protagonists find happiness(?) in their lives as slaves. p.s. I have a question: I understood that instead of being permanently barred from ejaculation, they could feel the gratification of orgasm through other organs of the body. But, then, what's in their massive bulging scrotum? Is their semen reabsorbed back into the body if they fail to ejaculate? Or is there something else in it? p.p.s. I wish dr.wilt was still alive after 20 years. I wonder how he will be ruined by pain and desire for 20 years. He deserves that kind of pain.

7/28/22, 8:56 AM
I’m also ecstatic that that the crew will be fortunate enough to be gaping sex slaves for the rest of their lives. Also, think about Clyde, Eugene, and Russell. I’m assuming that after around 20 years from the end of the story, they are going to be sex slaves longer than they are currently alive!! And I’m so jealous of that tbh. They are going to be so far removed from society it’ll be like they never even went through childhood/early adulthood. I wonder what happened in their pathetic lives for them to end up on the expedition to begin with as research assistants. @abdtiresias

1/24/24, 11:23 PM
@[abdtiresias](/user/show/617769) Thank you very much! Was going through my stories and saw your question. If I was to go back, I would add that Qayllar nubs are almost constantly dripping with pre-cum, dribbling down their engorged balls. However, this is just normal cum and Qayllar are revolted by the taste... unlike the Booty Flowers who adore it's adore and flavor. In fact, the main ingredient of the soap the Qayllar wash with is their own cum, collected from the urinal slaves who's pre-cum goes into over-drive just from a Wiraqocha approaching them.
Evan
8/11/22, 12:04 AM
Another great series. Jared definitely has been a jerk all his life but even moreso after his rite to be a tribesman. It wasn't the happy ending Conner thought he wanted but he did get a happy ending. I just loved their getting caught by the flowers yet again and pumped full of nectar. The comparison to Punku was great. His and Trevor's acceptance of what they wanted now and who they were. Re-Qayllarfied and leaning into it. I do hope they were shown mercy for the extenuating circumstances and got to be something other than urinal slaves. (spoilers for Two Tops Make a Bottom) - - - Also found it interesting that Jared's exposure to the sexual slavery and superiority with the tribe included what amounted to chastity from the plants nubbing and lacquer. He takes that forward with him with cock cages. If memory serves, the Q Weed also makes the smokers eager for cock and cum but it's more mind-altering than a physical dependency like the nectar addiction. Though, let's be honest, cocksluts are just as desperate to get used so the result is the same regardless of the motivation. I am curious how things turned out there, especially after Jared is dropped off. I am eager to see your epilogue. Another fantastic story! Really enjoyed the fantastical elements of this with the flowers and the "magic" of them. DubCon's stuff has that feel anyway but the less manufactured version and the primal nature of the jungle really gave a different feel. Love your work.

1/24/24, 11:16 PM
@Evan Glad you enjoyed! You're correct about Q-Weed. Jared was never able to replicate the Booty Flowers back home, due to them only growing in the strict conditions surrounding the Wiraqocha village, but he was able to genetically splice the seeds with marijuana in order to replicate the mental effects but not the physical ones. Even Jared's cum has lost it's full nectar infused power but I wouldn't be surprised if it still retained a trace of its addictive properties, even without the weed.