Recent Comments

8/24/21, 11:49 AM
Interesting start. Can't wait to see where this goes.
8/24/21, 11:39 AM
just found this series. great stuff. love it and can't wait for more.
8/24/21, 8:58 AM
Hot story! The mental-only "cock shrinking" is a fun take on the topic.
8/24/21, 8:52 AM
Wow, it's great to see a new chapter of this! Harry's condescension is so hot. He's being mean, though! Tommy's desperation is also hot. Despite the title, I was starting to doubt whether this story was leading up to a TF-into-cock scenario, but the end of this seems to heavily hint that this is going to be the case :) I'm interested in seeing how that will go (or if I'm wrong and something else is going to happen)...
8/24/21, 8:28 AM
I love where this went. made me go back and look at the previous chapter. I can't wait to read more. the "second hand" wishing part is awesome. I really enjoyed the oblivious changes.
8/12/21, 4:36 PM
Nice. Wulfram apparently didn't count on their instincts still being heroic? Probably because the clothing ray kept the intended purpose of each person's clothes in mind rather than creating a generic uniform... If Wulfram keeps making the same mistakes - probably the same ones that got him imprisoned - he's probably going to lose badly. My predicted worse case: Two members of the Guard have non-heroic motives, the ray causes them to retire, and Herod has to rush to replace them just before the final battle of the season ;) Good world-building, very solid lampshading for the themes being parodied.

8/24/21, 7:57 AM
Thanks @Shieldage, and interesting prediction. As for Wulfram, well, you'll see soon enough. He may be playing a longer game than meets the eye. Or he might just be villainously capable, but ultimately not that bright and overly fixated on skimpifying men's clothes. Or both. Anyway, thank you for the comment!
8/11/21, 7:37 PM
Absolutely love the parody

8/24/21, 7:49 AM
Thanks, @Pisces142! I'm glad to hear other people like it as well!
8/11/21, 9:18 AM
I'm finding this entire experience just endlessly entertaining, so please do keep it up, there's obviously a lot of potential to work with and its clear you're having fun :)

8/24/21, 7:48 AM
@Mr. Sandman, thank you! I'm looking forward to getting the rest of it written out.
Anonymous
8/11/21, 7:28 AM
Really like the story, and looking forward to a part two, but all of the “trademarking” through the first half pulled me out of the experience. We know it’s a parody, and what it’s a parody of, so they felt somewhat redundant

8/24/21, 7:47 AM
Thank you for the note, it's good to hear where it falls short with readers. I'm glad you still liked it so far though!
8/11/21, 3:05 AM
I'm intrigued for where you will take the story, there's so many things I like here! I especially like the twisting of characters to be turned in erotic parodies of their original selves, that's something I find so appealing, especially when it goes for a wild direction. I see a lot of interesting hot and fun potential on this story, I'll be waiting for the following chapters!

8/24/21, 7:44 AM
Thanks @Plymouth58, and I hope you like where I take it as the story goes on. I'm glad you enjoyed the erotic parody aspect, as making men over into slutty self parodies is one of my favourite story devices (shock, I know).
8/10/21, 8:21 PM
Please please do more. I really want to see how this goes and how each one reacts. It would be fun to see how they act before and after having the update. Could be interesting if by the end there saving the world form the heterosexual mind set.

8/24/21, 7:39 AM
Not to worry @Cerian81 there is definitely more planned, and a lot more updates in store for them. I'd never leave the heroes stuck in such conservative outfits.
8/10/21, 4:40 PM
this is amazing ! can't wait for the next

8/24/21, 7:35 AM
Thanks for the comment, @Somnius! More on the Spectacular Guard to come soon.
8/10/21, 10:46 AM
So, this is part 1 I assume

8/24/21, 7:34 AM
Yep, @darkblade2814, part one of, at the moment, 6. Tentatively.
8/10/21, 9:47 AM
Interesting take on the Power Rangers.

8/24/21, 7:33 AM
Thanks @Cutlerfan, originally it was planned to be a oneshot for the superhero challenge, bit there was more I wanted to put them through than I could fit into one chapter.
8/24/21, 5:59 AM
beautiful. really hoping to see this continued!
8/24/21, 4:11 AM
I can't even begin to tell you how excited I was to see this continued. This is genuinely one of my favorite stories on this site, and I was worried that it was dead. The latest chapter was just as hot as the rest! The slowburn transformation of both of them in opposite masculine directions is intoxicating. The subtle differences that can alllllmost be explained away make the story so exciting to read. For example, the idea that they used to be the same size and strength, and now Harry is using MUCH bigger dumbbells...loved that! And you don't dwell on those changes, each change is a little tease. I love it. I'm excited to see just how far apart (and yet together!) they grow. Will Harry and Tommy start to notice the more obvious changes in their size? How BIG and TALL will Harry get? How short and skinny will Tommy shrink? So many exciting revelations to come.
8/24/21, 3:32 AM
Kept me hard and leaking the whole time! Wanted the cop to experience more sex in the bathroom (next chapter?). Wood love to be mind controlled like that to do anything I was told to do. Keep up the great work. I can visualize all that takes place in the story. That's what makes it so hot! More please!
Btm
8/23/21, 10:58 PM
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

8/24/21, 3:21 AM
It's super close! Just gotta do some minor editing... @Btm
8/24/21, 3:18 AM
Very hot story and well done. Would have liked to see the relationship between Adam and Tony progress just a little more. In the end it was a somewhat terse master/slave relationship that was lacking in eroticism (when I think of coaches, I think tough but affectionate, this master was almost disinterested).
Austin
8/24/21, 3:12 AM
i am genuinely surprised to see this series return, its not an unwelcome surprise though, keep up the fantastic work man!
Anonymous
8/24/21, 2:44 AM
I’m enjoying where the story is going, but the inconsistent pronouns are definitely hurting the reading experience. There were a couple of them in chapter one but they’re really prevalent in this second one. If you can take the time to fix them it’ll catapult the story from good to great!
Anonymous
8/24/21, 2:18 AM
Great, as usual!!!!
Anonymous
8/24/21, 2:04 AM
Sure, continue series ,more antics with twists & turns that are not expected ! Don't forget to use the coaches & teachers & other workers, janitor !

8/24/21, 2:12 AM
Maybe even jock up Jacob, emasculate Alfredo or other jocks. There are a lot of hair antics to go with too ! Piercing and tattooing can't be left out as well. And there is also the fraternity houses. I think that should give you enough ideas to get started with something ! Good luck !
Jonanator
8/23/21, 5:55 PM
This is such a hot story. You should totally do a sequel to this, please, it was hottttt

8/23/21, 9:20 PM
@Jonanator i currently don't have plans for a sequel, but i am able to be persuaded! thanks for commenting!

Jonanator
8/23/21, 9:53 PM
@Mind Labyrinth Yeah. honestly, the worked you did, it does stand a good chance for a continuation. I think I might read it again. Truly one of my favorite stories. Great work.

8/23/21, 11:22 PM
@Jonanator i would have to give serious consideration as to how i would continue the story, but as i say, i am open to options!

Jonanator
8/23/21, 11:26 PM
@Mind Labyrinth no problem, besides, comments and options are what give us inspiration. I have two stories I'm currently working on the new site, and it's quite hards to come up with stuff as I go. So, I understand. Still, great work, your one of my favorite authors on her by the way.

8/23/21, 11:32 PM
@Jonanator its not always easy finding the avenue for continuing a story that a reader sees, so feedback is more vital than oxygen. I'm thrilled to hear you like my work so much, if you come up with ideas, you can always find me skulking around the discord server.

Jonanator
8/23/21, 11:40 PM
@Mind Labyrinth Certainly, I'll totally will. Also, check out the stories I'm working on over at GayCupidStories let me know if there good so far. I'm trying, it's my first time, but I hope to get better as I progress. Enjoy your day

8/24/21, 1:31 AM
@Jonanator i will have to check out your stories soon! right now i am at work, but i definitely know how important feedback is for improvement.

Jonanator
8/24/21, 2:02 AM
@Mind Labyrinth thanks, great chatting. It's fun to make a new friend on here
8/24/21, 1:59 AM
It's very distracting that the pronouns of the characters keep switching around. I couldn't tell whether this story was written with female characters and then incompletely re-written to be m/m or if there is some sort of deliberate gender confusion going on. If it was written this way for effect and not just typos, well, not a good effect.
8/24/21, 12:37 AM
woof this hit all my buttons. I love Vincent and how he is presented and the breakdown was perfect.

8/24/21, 1:29 AM
@Cadek thanks for letting me know you enjoyed my story. Vincent was a really fun character to build and explore.
Oct 10, 2021
Martin
8/23/21, 8:52 PM
Would you like to publish that on GayCollarStories once it's been opened? Can't be that long...

8/24/21, 1:09 AM
@Martin Absolutely. Whatever you think is most appropriate.
8/23/21, 7:28 PM
Wow. That was incredible. Well worth the wait that you described in the author's note. I like that Vincent didn't feel like a villain. Definitely not a hero, but someone that is doing their best with the power they received, and if they happen to use it to their advantage, so be it. Or perhaps he'd started to become corrupted by the power he had. Either way, it was hot. The attention to details was nice, specifically about the clothes worn. I do like a well-dressed man, and those descriptors in your story did not go unnoticed. The one small thing that took me out of the story a little bit was in a couple of the instances of stuttering happening, the letter that was stuttered was its own sentence. It's not a huge deal, but it did confuse me the couple times I ran into it. This one is going into my list of stories I come back to for sure. Great work!

8/23/21, 11:21 PM
@Proteus Thank you for your lovely comments! That you noticed some of my favorite flourishes makes my day! Vincent is my best attempt at a regular guy who is trying hard not to lose his mind with the power he has been given, so its awesome to hear that this resonated with the readers. i will take your critique very seriously and work harder to ensure such errors dont crop up in future stories, thanks for bringing it to my attention. i hope you enjoy this story many times.

8/24/21, 12:14 AM
@Mind Labyrinth The two stutters were not a huge deal, and I thought that maybe it had something to do with rendering or copying and pasting. It's definitely not something to stress yourself over too much. I look forward to reading the other stories in your backlog! I've definitely enjoyed this one and others you've written!
Jonanator
8/23/21, 11:43 PM
Hot story. Hope more is to come.
8/23/21, 11:25 PM
Standing ovation for that one!