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2/15/24, 3:50 PM
The ending is really hot! I do wish the getting the soccer team and coworker part would be more elaborate ;)
Elm
2/15/24, 3:08 PM
So hot!!!😍
Elm
2/15/24, 3:02 PM
I love this series, thank you for taking the time to add to it! Just love my dumb bottom daddies 🥴
2/15/24, 2:39 PM
The written words about the smells... oh my gosh... I am triggered in such a great way to hear about the smells of men and the entrapment of another man by those smells. THIS STORY is so compelling and interesting. I love the sexy blond teammate that seems to be lingering about. It'll be so fun to see if you bring him into the storyline. The coach's influcence over the boys - I am enjoying it... cant wait to hear his story and how he does it. THANK YOU... wonderfully written and exciting.
Jonanator
2/15/24, 1:07 PM
Hope there is more.
2/15/24, 9:53 AM
man if you ever come back and make a part two, I'd be ecstatic!
2/15/24, 7:48 AM
Now I wonder what the dad is doing for Gino right now 🤔🤔🤔
2/15/24, 7:26 AM
I was following this along. I wanted so much at certain places for some enhancements, but it was well written. Chapter two might add the depth I am wanting... and hope you see a plot developing some day... I can, I can see the sub exercising mind control tapes on the Alpha to shape Him into a better Alpha with a a slower build to a progression into Alpha/sub with the Alpha not having the girlfriend available for a month while she was out of the country and him coming home drunk too many nights in a row. More from there over the months with Dan no longer paying rent or bills but daily and twice daily oral when that sneaks in. Buddy service would be the final chapter to me.
2/15/24, 6:42 AM
really good build up and development. Equally strong capture of the audience and hold making you want to read more. Not at all slow in fact could have been longer once they got back to the cabin (greedy ready lol) with what happened the next morning. Jackson Stock is a valid hypnotist with actual skill, so it is good to "hear" it come across in his written work. He does other niche specific headings so I'd love to read those headline stories. Alpha Findom, Dom/sissy, role reversal, Alpha brothers and a family sissy brother. Am I greedy to ask for ideas because he can do it? No, I don't think so, because he is skilled when very few are.....
2/15/24, 6:11 AM
That was very fun, is this part 1?