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1/20/22, 7:37 PM
I enjoyed this one just as much as the truck driver story. You're really good at this, I hope you are able to finish another story and share it with us!
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1/20/22, 7:27 PM
This story is so hot and so much fun. I love how everyone has pretty much devolved into just sex all the time. I hope to see some of those items and more powers being used. Keep up the amazing work!
12/3/21, 10:47 PM
I thought almost everything about this story was wonderful except for the last few lines which were confusing, I couldn't figure out exactly what Mr. E was doing or what the significance was. But aside from that, story is sweet, tender, and hot as hell.

1/20/22, 7:24 PM
Basically it is implying hes about to do something else kinky and weird to another guy. It's a prompt for the next person who wants to write chapter.@amul
1/20/22, 5:51 PM
Well written, second story now for me that has shown me that it is possible to inject a tenderness and variety to sex scenes to try to keep things interesting. I did find the characterisation of "I would *never* loose this much cum..." a bit odd when just sessions earlier he was saying that he was ready to let it all go, not telling his husband that he was close

1/20/22, 6:16 PM
Ooh, I’m really glad that I was able to show you something new in that sense! I’m always trying to make sure that my scenes aren’t just repetitive. I’d like to think that what he thought earlier on was a result of Tobias’s powerful edging, and once Tobias cowed him he became a little more sensible again, but I understand if that rang kind of strangely after all! @A Possession A Day

1/20/22, 6:41 PM
@Soren Fitz Yeah that does make sense, I guess people are rarely going to be fully rational in the middle of a wild sex romp and everything haha. Just a minor thing
1/20/22, 6:03 PM
Unf. Of all daddy types, I think Doctor Daddy's may be the hottest.
Jan 19, 2022
1/20/22, 5:53 PM
I love rubber, I love oozing slime cocooning men, I love transformations. Please keep on with this story.
1/20/22, 5:51 PM
Another great chapter! And now the plot thickens. Drake's predicament just gets hotter and hotter. Work will no longer be an escape for him. I love how much fun Brendan is having.
Sep 16, 2020
1/13/22, 7:14 PM
I think the overall concept is great and I really like the description of the changes they go through. They are aware of what is happening to them, and they wouldn't have liked it were it not for what's happening to them. That's a much more interesting line to walk than despair or mindless sluttiness. While on one hand I perhaps would have liked it to start out even more subtle, there is also a timeline in the story and the actual pacing to think of that works against it. My biggest objection is the common plot device of staff or officials taking part in the action when they aren't part of the main story. Is Will personally fucking everyone that lands on the island for the first time? I guess there is another nurse as well taking the other half. Why two nurses if the island is so small and presumably the traffic low? And why scrubs in an airport? To me it would have felt like much less of a coincidence that the hotel staff showed up to the room with food and maybe later engaged with them. Also, exactly how difficult is it to control yourself on the island. If everyone is humping everyone all the time there would never had been a hotel built in the first place. Did women build it? I think a lot of women would also appreciate a vacation on an island where men are guaranteed to only fuck other men. None of this of course makes the story any less hot. I think the foreshadowing with Davis could have been brought down a bit and not mention how he looked before his trip. It's very possible they didn't know him before he went. I assume the "champagne" was also made with local flora and thus would just have been sparkling wine. I suggest the bottle says "Champion" with the silhouette of a flexing man on the seal.

1/20/22, 5:44 PM
@Josh Slater My headcanon about Will and the need for medical personnel on the island is that a) most visitors aren't necessarily newbies and that b) I kinda wanted a medical-ish conceit for why the fruit turns people gay. That part is a little imported from Isla Paradiso where the reveal is much slower and the changes much more gradual. My headcanon is that once a bunch if gay guys realized they could cultivate the fruits they picked a discreet island and built it up as a resort. The guys are way more gooned out and horny than most people on the island, in part because their bodies are just getting used to the fruit for the first time. Everyone else just uses it as an on-demand aphrodisiac. I'm really glad you engaged so deeply with the story! I like leaving little plot hooks and worldbuilding things around for people to find/enjoy/think about so the fact that this inspired you makes me quite proud.
Sep 16, 2020
1/20/22, 5:43 PM
Well written but I think that goes without saying. Definitely a more interesting and detailed sex scene than many I've read (I still skimmed it :sweat_smile:). I fell for the misdirect too, good job burying the lead. I guess I do have a small quibble for some of the dialogue in the early inoculation scenes, particularly the use of the word 'literature', it just struck me as somewhat incongruous to the mental "bro-ey" image I had built of the two protagonists thus far.
Sep 16, 2020
1/15/22, 10:42 AM
I love your writing style! It has richness to it - even in a short story like this one. I think I've seen "cummy fruit" somewhere else, might be your Isla Paradiso, might be something else - it had men stranded on an island that disappears off the maps... Anyway, I like that as a device because you have to eat something - and if there's nothing else offered... ;-) I also like it allows introducing smells and tastes into a story - improving the enjoyment for the senses!

1/20/22, 5:34 PM
@Delicious1papaya that was definitely Isla Paradiso! They're loosely in the same universe.