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6/2/22, 7:48 PM
No esperaba ver al tío nuevamente... o el pov del abuelo... :blue_heart: :blue_heart: :blue_heart: Eres de mis autores favoritos y creo.que de momento el unico que publica en español :3 gracias por tus increibles historias y por continuar esta (no lei la parte donde dijiste que la dejarias con final abierto en el cap pasado :sweat_smile:) aqui seguire esperando el siguiente o algun nuevo cap de tus otras historias ^ ^
6/2/22, 7:40 PM
And the one who wakes up in Mowgli. What an ending. The implication that Kaa dies in his sleep. :grin:
Jake the Nerdy Fox
6/2/22, 7:38 PM
Mmf so hot and so much coiling fun for the man-cub, can't say I'm not jealous X3
Blue moon under hell
6/2/22, 7:08 PM
Please don't be discouraged by any negative comments, i find the story really enjoyable on its own narratively and the kink stuff is also very hot, i always enjoyed the idea of someone being a conscious prisoner of their own body that they can no longer control, and this is one of the few stories that zero in on this concept here. Honestly the most unrealistic part of this story is not the magic but danny being able to consume so much piss without getting dehydration or kidney problems lol
6/2/22, 5:00 PM
This is a wild, hot journey for your stories to take! As someone with a twink Asian partner that slowly has become more muscular and less twinky over the years, I’d love to see if your tales with include some of your earlier themes (e.g. Chinese jocks/bodybuilders)

peaks
6/2/22, 5:08 PM
@Big Fan what are some ideas or scenarios that you have? Or would like to see?

6/2/22, 6:50 PM
@peaks, it’s not something I’ve really thought about 😅. It sounds dumb, but I met my partner and saw Peter Le in videos at pretty much the same time, so I don’t which influenced which. Natively, there’s something about a mixture of a small guy getting as big as he dreamed of getting (or bigger) and that conflict of traditional values (being a big, sweaty hulk isn’t typically what Asian parents). That and taking that new strength to be this uncontrollable beast to his normal-sized partner
Kip
6/2/22, 6:41 PM
These were great! Jackpot was fantastic. I would love to read more about that resort. I bet they have crazy table games there (craps that increase dick size, roulette that could do all sort of things, baccarat that grants wishes (with the house win giving the dealer a turn). 😀
R P
6/2/22, 1:49 PM
This is a fun and hot start 😄. Can’t wait to see more of Mason’s adventures! (And hopefully some more of Rope Burn too)

skywindsword
6/2/22, 5:58 PM
@R P Thank you! There will be definitely more adventures with Mason and we might see Rope Burn again, but in due time.
Jonanator
6/2/22, 4:35 PM
I feel bad for Danny, I really do.
6/2/22, 2:39 AM
I hope Whitechap will forgive me for altering his story. I tried to keep the basic tailor theme, but added my small cock & feminization fetish's....Since it was offered as a change-story I thought it would be o.k. Hope no one is offended...

6/2/22, 6:40 AM
@little tiny tim I've read through your changes but I feel that they turn the story into something completely different, a parallel version that focuses on different fetishes from mine. I would suggest that rather changing my story you take the text, with my blessing, and publish your vision as a separate piece. Cheers

6/2/22, 4:21 PM
@Whitechap_e1 Thank you for you kind word's...Would you be kind enough to drop Martin a brief note saying that you'd approve of this site publishing my version [in addition to your own], Thank you, 'TinyTim'
6/2/22, 3:45 PM
i honestly dont think I can continue reading this story. it's making me physically ill... not because your writing is bad but simply because all of this goes way to far. Now he lost everything, his dignity, his freedom, his possession. Nothing is left. All of this just makes me feel sad and defeated

6/2/22, 4:04 PM
@billi Don't worry. Everything is about to change...
Jonanator
6/2/22, 7:30 AM
I like the story, I do. Very hot . On a side note, the thing about liking Asian guys, that's normal. Heck, I watch Asain shows daily (both straight romance, mainly for the hot guys, and a few gay shows too). I did really like this story. I actually have a fiance, who lives in China, he's quite handsome, at least to me. I digress, anyways, I loved the for that fact too.

Anonymous
6/2/22, 7:46 AM
Proud, uncut, asian dong vs a bunch of American amputees? They never had a chance...

Jonanator
6/2/22, 3:56 PM
Definitely. Again, I liked this story on a personal level since, well my fiancee is Asian and lives in China.
Kip
6/2/22, 3:06 PM
This was really great. Loved the crossover aspects to your other stories! That’s a meta-twist I hope to apply to some of my own stories, given time. Very well-written, very hot!!!

6/2/22, 3:45 PM
@Kip thanks! I'm enjoying your Global Warming story right now, so I'm glad you've been enjoying mine :) - there was a small easter egg in this story as to what the next series is going to be about, which I'm excited to start work on once Good Dog is finished.
6/2/22, 1:17 PM
Absolutely love this story, and really all of your stories. I was so happy when you mentioned the romantic feelings Adams was having and would definitely not mind seeing that play out while balancing Adams feelings against the Lucky persona. Would also be interested to see Adams/Lucky, as a reforming/reformed bigot, reacting to hate crime against himself or his master. Whatever you end up doing, I am sure it will be fantastic and I will love it. Keep it up!

6/2/22, 3:42 PM
@Knicksy I never start out any of my stories with the intent of their being a romantic connection, especially not this one. But it always ends up that way. What can I say, I'm a sucker of love.
6/2/22, 11:07 AM
A great co-mingling of all 3 stories. Really helps flesh out the world a bit more. I do wonder if/when they'll discover their Dubcon Corp connection.

6/2/22, 3:40 PM
@Timet Well both Hiro and Leroy both now work in some capacity with Dubcon Corp, so maybe...
6/2/22, 2:50 PM
Man, I really feel both the emotional stress and the hotness—you got me in my feels with how much this is hurting Luke, and Sammy too. And it’s a familiar experience to fail to understand that I’ve hurt someone/to be unable to understand. Keep up the good work.
6/2/22, 2:12 PM
Damn, everybody really wants to fuck Luke’s bubble butt! Yay for chill straight guys? This is fun.
5/31/22, 4:03 AM
One of my absolute favorites. I return to this every few months at least. Bravo!

6/2/22, 1:57 PM
@StageShowMM Thanks! I always really enjoy your work as well. Hope there will be more soon.
6/2/22, 1:50 PM
more please.... oh fuck...so good...
6/2/22, 12:41 PM
PHOLUS REBORN began as a short story that I deemed all "tell" and no "show". And as you can see, the novel ends with a "tell and not show" section of its own. But the fact is, I love epilogues! I like knowing what happens after the ending. I like knowing everything worked out, or didn't work out, and that everybody's moving on. Now, as if I knew my subject, I shot myself in the foot with this epilogue. In breaking the team apart, I weakened them. A centaur's strength comes in numbers, and in the second book, [CENTAUROMACHY](https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09RVDXR7M/ref=tmm_pap_swatch_0?_encoding=UTF8&qid=1643810153&sr=1-2), the antagonist takes advantage of this -- it isn't until they're deep in it that they realize had they been together, they wouldn't be in jeopardy at all. "Being together is our power" is a big lesson in book two. As I noted in an earlier chapter, it's been almost a year since I've read this and it was a lot of fun to go through it. There are a couple of small changes I'd make, but nothing that makes me regret what's already on the page. It has absolutely energized me about writing Book Three, inspired me in a way, as I can see hints about what I'm doing in Book Three here in the first -- that I hadn't really even planned at the time. The first two chapters of CENTAUROMACHY are [HERE on the GSS.](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10003439) If you choose to read them, chap 1 is expository, catching us up on what happened in Book One. Chap 2 sets up the major plot. CENTAUROMACHY is a very different book than PHOLUS, but it's a lot of fun to read. Thank you for taking the time to read me at all. I'm grateful.
6/2/22, 12:39 PM
*sigh* That's embarrassing, and extremely difficult to walk back from. I did read the entire "Pollination" series, though. That was also very well written and enjoyable.
6/2/22, 11:01 AM
I've been an avid reader of your work for quite some time now and this chapter's sex scene has to be one of the most insanely hot yet. So cool to see Luke evolve as a character over the years and see your craft go from strength to strength. Amazing stuff!
6/1/22, 7:45 PM
This is an engaging and incredible tale. So...does this group of centaurs need a healer? I have experience, even though I mostly work on smaller animals.

6/1/22, 11:33 PM
@Deej a centaur’s strength is in numbers, so welcome aboard. As for a healer, check out chap 16

6/2/22, 1:05 AM
@absman420 I just realized you're the author. I've been a fan of yours since I read "Ad Man" in 2013. I just want to be a centaur.

6/2/22, 10:02 AM
@Deej I hate to be the bearer, but “Ad Man” wasn’t mine, it was FanTCdude’s. I wrote a series loosely based on it, called [PLAYING W FANTCDUDE’S TOYS ](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/443539) that you might be thinking of.
6/2/22, 8:24 AM
If i wasn’t locked up in a chastity cage, i’d be jacking off over and over and over. This was one sexy hot series. I wish i had a rubber suit like that. I would love to become nothing more than a rubber fuck doll.
Ben
6/2/22, 5:31 AM
Still one of my favorites!!!
6/2/22, 4:10 AM
Oh dear. What a horrible situation. And I must respectfully disagree with the above Anonymous commenter. I am not reading this story for any sort of pleasure, sexual or otherwise. Instead I am reading it because it is not only compelling and well-written, but an EXTREMELY accurate depiction of abuse. The scenes of poor Danny sitting in fear of his boyfriend, yet still loving him despite what a monster he is becoming…I have seen that happen to a dear friend. And then watching David become crueler and more power-mad, “sharing” Danny with others—that, too, is familiar. It is painful to read, but it is also important. The addition of the magic spell makes for interesting symbolism, and I am truly excited to see what happens next.
Anonymous
6/2/22, 4:04 AM
Since I can't downvote I'm just going to leave my opinion, and frankly I'm sure I'm not the only one who feels this way. Honestly I'm so sick of this series, it just all feels wrong. I gave it a shot thinking something would happen where the curse would reverse itself or something where Danny would have the power to compel others to do what he says and get revenge on all these people who have abused him. I guess that's not gonna happen, and this is just mindless suffering.
6/2/22, 3:12 AM
I really loved the later half as he forced his domination on them. And the use of the wide variety of gear as he ultimately stores them away for the night. Hopefully more muscled guys like Micheal will find themselves a new master.
6/2/22, 2:47 AM
Just loved this story… only hope its premise about contemporary circumstances remain true 😪
Blue moon under hell
6/2/22, 2:18 AM
Perfect balance between being sexy but also still feeling bad for the person being humiliated. reminds me of when i used to to read whump on ao3 when i was 17, it has that vibe, mean that as a compliment of course.
5/12/22, 10:32 PM
I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait to see how you end this with Master Kaa's slitcubs.

SlutForHypno
6/2/22, 1:52 AM
@Redcoma100 Thank you. Im glad you enjoy it and I ask that you wait another week or two. My computer crashed on me and the final chapter (which was almost done) may have gotten deleted. Im super deflated atm moment so I will finish this story after another chapter of the other series im working on.