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7/4/22, 1:48 AM
@Maskedhimbo oh I like that idea! Ass upgrade would be my vote too. I’m so conflicted! Love the changes Carter is going through, but I definitely don’t want to see Rusty winning in the end. By the way, this story has been awesome. Checks off so many boxes for me. Most of all, seeing this big (mostly) straight guy being converted into a needy, sub bottom is SO well written. Amazing character development!

7/5/22, 1:47 AM
@Phantom Passenger Thanks! I wonder if I made Rusty too much of a jerk and Carter too likable...
7/2/22, 10:08 PM
I think the custom special ability is the only option that might allow Carter to fight back. Rusty needs to be punished for his actions and Carter needs to be safe. On the last chapter I felt like there's a chance Dusty will help, and I think that will be very interesting and hot (loving dom tops are the best dom tops)

7/3/22, 1:32 AM
@Reader If you like loving dom tops, I think you might like my Magic Textbook story!

7/3/22, 11:48 AM
@bluesuedewho Ohhh yes please. I'll read it now!

7/3/22, 3:03 PM
About that, I can’t wait for the next chapter of Magic Textbook, man. Marc is my favorite character and I’ve been wanting for him to fuck the brains out of MC and I have a feeling this will happen in the next chapter. Please don’t take too long to post that :) cheers @bluesuedewho

7/5/22, 1:46 AM
@Elmara Thanks! I'm trying to get something written for the contest, but I do still have plans for Textbook.
7/3/22, 10:27 AM
Thanks for the chapter! I love multi-part curses like that "Dumb and Full of Cum" effect! My vote goes for ass upgrade.

7/5/22, 1:44 AM
@drummer Glad you like it! I enjoy squirmy curse stories, but this is basically the first one I've written.
7/5/22, 1:41 AM
All of the ass play in this chapter made me wonder of Henry's hypnotic touch could affect the internals of the person he's playing with. That matter I'm wondering if coming inside one of his toys reinforces anything or if it's just ordinary come. The mysteries of it all...
7/3/22, 3:11 AM
Rusty has a lot in the tank, why should we choose? ;) Carter can grab a Custom Special Ability to improve casting early on, but when Rusty keeps pumping him full of more and more cum and his brains start to really give out, I think Carter’s going to invest HEAVY in ass upgrades. Besides, when he gets really dull he’s not going to know upgrading a 5 to a 6 is pushing his ass beyond human limitations… that’s a very exciting idea

7/5/22, 1:36 AM
@brium Plenty of XP, we'll have to see how Carter uses it!
7/5/22, 1:35 AM
"It would probably rip a hole in the fabric of the time-space continuum and that was a level of crisis that he just wasn’t emotionally prepared to deal with at the minute." I can relate to this! A soulbound former murderous Roman emperor? A baking competition? Stakes are higher than ever! Can't wait for what comes next and Vivian being humiliated anew.
7/3/22, 2:05 AM
I'd love to see the special custom ability! More chaos is always fun Also, this is just semantics, but isn't Rusty technically full of his own precum right now? I think he should also take those hits to mental stats /j

7/5/22, 1:34 AM
@gargayle Oooh, the ability specifies targeted character! Otherwise, yes, Rusty would be totally braindead really fast. And I agree, more chaos is fun.
7/5/22, 1:30 AM
I loved this story and am so glad to see it here!
Spiralthiago
7/5/22, 12:58 AM
Exelent!! beautiful writing I want that virus to exist soon so we all become Big and have muscle orgies 😈😈
Anonymous
7/4/22, 11:46 PM
Great job and very hot. Can’t wait to see what’s next. Perfect start to the story
7/4/22, 11:45 PM
Really can't wait to see where this goes. We've come full circle and what comes next is a mystery. Kudos, as always.
Anonymous
7/4/22, 11:38 PM
Very happy whenever I see a new preppy story on the site! Great story with slow build.
7/4/22, 11:25 PM
Another classic! So great to see your work here and happy to be able to revisit all of it.
7/4/22, 11:24 PM
My god! I remember this story and the Tulane following chapters all the way back from Omelissokoms site. Great to have it here now!
7/4/22, 10:41 PM
I've always loved this story (and it was a not-so-subtle influence on my own story "[Last Resort](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/114274)"). I'm glad to see you uploading it here with the original image still intact!
Jul 3, 2022
Evan
7/4/22, 6:17 AM
I am an enormous fan of the Dubcon universe. Your stories always get me hard and horny. This one was a different take and I loved it just like the rest. Gooning guys getting dumb and just able to focus on their pleasure was new and hot. The story would have still been great without the warden twist but with all that hand sanitizer pumping throughout the story it was surprising yet inevitable that someone exploited that and saved some more money and gave the warden a new appreciation for his dong. I can't wait for another story from you. Whatever the theme, I know it'll be hot and with a great plot, characters, and further world building.

7/4/22, 10:04 PM
Thanks @Evan. I knew i wanted a guard or someone betrayed and locked both a cell and his gooner brain, and I wanted foreshadowing throughout so the hand sanitizer thing came in pretty early. I also wanted a slow meltdown with the Warden, who knows what's coming rather than the convicts who had no idea of the life that awaits them.
Jul 3, 2022
Anonymous
7/4/22, 7:09 PM
Loved the little bit of Latin flair!

7/4/22, 10:01 PM
@ gotta have a little bit of Latin flair!
Jul 3, 2022
7/3/22, 5:20 PM
So this was sexy. I'm not really a fan of the warden getting turned, I liked him fucking the two, but the general events here were super fun. Too bad it was just masturbation and not rimming and buttplay. Especially with the appeal of dudes spreading legs and holes visible. But yeah good one shot.

7/3/22, 11:05 PM
@Heru Kane was tempted to make it a 2 parter and save the Warden stuff for a 2nd chapter but i wanted this to be a 1 shot. Got rimming, buttplay and thongs coming up in the next story dw ;)

7/4/22, 4:01 PM
@GoonNoob So I was thinking about it and it wasn't the Warden twist that I super hated but rather that the one dude who fucked them was the one made into one of them. If the Warden hadn't done that - or if the deputy had been the one to fuck the dudes and then taken over - I think I would have been more "oh cool" on that twist. Also my mind goes "well if Dubcon is willing to do that to one of its clients then nobody is safe" and that leads me down a mental rabbit hole of untrust. But mostly its the fact I loved how one of the guys fucked the inmates and then to see him be turned was "ah, sad". That said, ooh cool on rimming, buttplay and such in the next story. Looking forward to it. Hope its the dom top that is doing much of the rimming stuff on some good boys. Its a great set up you have here.

7/4/22, 10:01 PM
@Heru Kane Dubcon doesn't turn on their own just for the hell of it. Like Officer Adams in "Thong Fags", and Leroy in "Dare App", anyone who abuses someone under their influence is a target for appropriate retaliation. Kind of a "Only we get to torment these guys" mentality XD
7/4/22, 9:59 PM
This was one more insanely hot story form master hot story writer Jack. The sex is mindblowingly good and Buck is one happy guy in the end, and getting along better with dad.
9/12/21, 3:55 PM
great chapter. the new thought control is an interesting touch. I would have taken the principal too😇😈

7/4/22, 8:59 PM
i cummed so hard! please upload a chapter 4!!!!
7/4/22, 8:42 PM
I thought the domination and sex was extremely sensually written and enjoyable.
7/4/22, 7:15 PM
This could definitely use more chapters - we need to know what happens toJoey and his piggy friends
7/4/22, 7:12 PM
Big fan of preppy stories, I love the slow change, a little at a time.
7/4/22, 5:55 PM
Very Hot, I hope there's more coming! Love yur story!
Tim
7/4/22, 5:48 PM
I wonder if Wes from IT knows Will from IT (a long term favourite)
DMears
6/23/19, 12:51 AM
Hey everyone! Thanks so much for the support with this series! I just got the prequel finished so feel free to take a peek and let me know what ya think. ;-) Also, the user name is different but it's still me. The website had an issue using my name but what can ya do? Lol

7/4/22, 2:09 PM
@DMears I'm waiting for your return.
Anonymous
7/4/22, 10:54 AM
loving the slow burn… another hot chapter… great writing… looking forward to more…
Anonymous
7/4/22, 10:52 AM
This was an amazing story! Can I ask, were you going to continue with it, or do you think that's it for it?
7/4/22, 7:02 AM
Desperately needs a sequel .
7/4/22, 5:32 AM
Grow rustys dick!!!