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7/11/22, 11:55 AM
As always, an awesome story! Great to read your work again. Got to check out ebooks. And a collaboration with Mr. Parker. Pretty nice, he's a great writer. Did you used to work with wrestler too? Does he still write?

7/11/22, 12:48 PM
I did collaborate with him on one story called “turnabout“. I do communicate with other writers and we bounce ideas off each other. Yes, to the best of my knowledge wrestlr is still writing and has his own website. If you’re interested you should Google :-) @Currious
Anonymous
7/11/22, 11:44 AM
Nice story! I'd love to see what the packages and the gym do to other people. Perhaps a slower build up at the end, or a couple of friends - each affected differently. Or some outside perspectives. Lots of options :)
7/11/22, 8:30 AM
where is ch 5??? i thought i saw it was released?

7/11/22, 10:14 AM
@Kinkypup Hey, you're right it was, but i was in the middle of moving house so i feel like i rushed it. Its not really up to my standard atm so im gonna re-do and post later
Anonymous
7/11/22, 9:30 AM
I really enjoyed this story, thank you!
7/11/22, 8:40 AM
Great story bro! Got me hard as a nail!
Bl guy
6/25/22, 6:12 PM
I really like where this story's going... it seems like Xander's also falling for Allan and I want him to realize his feelings...

7/8/22, 6:14 PM
@Bl guy Well not to be a terrible tease... No wait actually that's exactly what I'm about to do... Wait until you read part 5, which is hopefully coming by the end of this month.

Bl Guy
7/11/22, 8:17 AM
@Nocturne13 Can't wait to read chapter 5, this story's got me hooked both for how hot it is and also cause the actual story and the developing relationships between the characters is soo good, there are very few stories where you can find both of these... take your time and deliver a masterpiece like you always do
7/11/22, 7:13 AM
I live to serve the Virus.
Evan
7/11/22, 3:56 AM
What an amazing chapter. I loved this. I'm enjoying the elements that a mixing with making Marcus their bottom boy but also caring for him. I'm sure a large part is their lust from their teenage years, but inviting him to move in can't just be about the sex. I feel like there's a polyamorous and romantic element maybe developing. Even if their friend is becoming a cock addicted slut. The weed seems like it's specific to Darius and Xavier's cocks and not just cock in general which is very interesting. I look forward to more and what other side effects that weed could have. Or what the new slut boy can learn. His gradual ignoring of his cock, letting it sit in the pouch of his thong and finding more pleasure in his nipples, his mouth and hole, being used. It's hot as hell. I also appreciate how sensitive he's become. Unable to control filling his thong with his load despite not paying attention to his dick.

easdf
7/11/22, 7:11 AM
@Evan If I understood it as the weed makes the inhaler accept any suggestion given to him, and they told him to be addicted to their cocks only. If they had said addicted to all cocks things would be different.
7/11/22, 7:01 AM
Good story! My problem, when I find a good story, is that it is always too short.
Evan
7/10/22, 9:31 PM
Incredible! What a fantastic story. Just on its own it is magnificent and as an entry for Toxic Masculinity it's a wonderful and imaginative take on it. Shining even brighter given the requirement of the theme. The gradual build, the resistance and tension of avoiding Tao spreading his milk to others was wonderful and had me invested. His succumbing was probably inevitable but HOW that happened was glorious. Mentally more than physically. But both were perfect. The Axel eventually figuring out he and Tao love each other and his overcompensation is costing them happiness. Frantically trying to avoid being changed by a stranger. Wanting it to be Tao. So romantic and hot. Then the conclusion of their accepting each other and growing and pounding. Even when they lose their minds for a fortnight, they stick together. Very sweet. Puck is a mystery. And the two weeks of mindless horny fucking and feeding to change others is hot too. But also mysterious. Why two weeks. Why do they change back. How do they feel afterward. What happens to others changed during the two weeks, being already past 12. Instantly mindless bulls to join the rest? I also find the worldbuilding on this subtle but intriguing. Nut butter sounds like it has cum in it. The military fucking for conquest and dominating each other both for contest and for fun. Loved this. Well done!

7/11/22, 6:53 AM
@Evan The number of times I’ve read this comment in sheer delight embarrassed me. But I am proud to be proud of my work, and grateful that you loved it! You saw everything I was going for, you appreciated the little tidbits of worldbuilding I left—that’s my signature, I feel, is blending subtle worldbuilding into a story that can handle those extra hints—and you hit the nail on the head with nut butter. Yes, it involves cum. I hope I accomplished the effect of making the world feel like a real one, in which these characters live—even if some of its facts are surprising and not yet explainable, like the sex-based military. And Puck. Please, if you can, spread this around—I’m posting pretty late in the contest, and I can use all the ratings I can get. But don’t feel obligated. A review like this was enough to make me feel pride in my own work, and that’s enough reward for me!