Recent Comments

Killer
8/7/22, 9:30 AM
This story is getting better and better. Red hot can't wait for more.
Anonymous
7/26/22, 3:01 AM
Like Antonio, all I can say is, "mmmmm..."
7/25/22, 3:31 AM
Super sexy! Loved this chapter. The powers he uses are super cool!
7/24/22, 11:11 PM
YES! Great,Antonio is who we've been waiting for!!!
7/27/22, 6:26 AM
Every time the chapter ends: you will not remember what happened…. But why thooo ;-;
7/25/22, 9:08 AM
This is hot! Would love to see Ryan humiliate pretty boy Nathan and he unwillingly gets off on humiliated, being turned from hotshot to cumdump.
8/2/22, 3:47 PM
What an enjoyable and well-written story. I would enjoy reading other similar tales. This is refreshing to find on this site as it is so unique yet erotic, too.

8/10/22, 3:41 AM
@JayBear Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like this! You might also enjoy some of my other stuff. There is actually a sequel to this story here: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10003291
8/10/22, 3:39 AM
I love Coach Tom. Such a big strong muscle daddy trying to resist his urges.
8/10/22, 1:59 AM
Super hot. I love when a straight jock turns gay. Especially if it's a wrestler. I hope to see more from this story. Even if it's Dr. Conner turning more jocks gay
8/9/22, 8:11 AM
SO glad to see the series back!

8/10/22, 1:42 AM
@ForgottenCradle Thanks for the support!
Anonymous
8/10/22, 1:36 AM
get Vic to dominate Coach Daddy
8/9/22, 11:26 PM
This is super hot and sexy. Nice story!
Anonymous
8/6/22, 7:54 AM
can't wait to see Mason the buff jock stud in panties. I hope he's humiliated but also turned on and excited buying them and wearing em. to bad Mason doesn't have to go buy them in person instead of on the internet. would be hot if Mason has a tiny dick when hard and Charlie's a lot bigger than him. Some SPH would be hot with Mason's tiny dick tenting out the panties as he gets off on the humiliation.

Anonymous
8/9/22, 11:13 PM
Oh god yes please! SPH for the big bully Mason
8/9/22, 11:01 PM
Sexy fantasy! I like the quick acceptance of the sexual dynamics within the team. Short but hot all the same.
8/9/22, 10:44 PM
that was a fun ride, thanks
Anonymous
8/9/22, 2:35 PM
Hot like always. Now that Sam’s hole(s) are open for business I hope we get to see him play the field! Need to see him shared and spitroasted by Freddy and Teddy.

8/9/22, 7:55 PM
@ Thanks! Marc's the star of the next chapter, but the Eddies are definitely around.
8/9/22, 7:49 PM
Yeah I agree with everyone that says he needs to be hypnotized to think his cock is smaller. He deserves more humiliation, to really believe he’s a slave for his (former) father. But this is so freaking horny I love Hanks demented mind.
8/9/22, 6:28 PM
So freaking naughty and so fucking horny
8/9/22, 6:13 PM
I feel like it’s only a matter of time before Mateo sticks one of those electrodes on his shaft
8/9/22, 5:51 PM
This was great. Hoping the second chapter has some reveal for the back story. Will the alpha submit to his creator or is his creator a dominant bottom?
8/9/22, 5:11 PM
Excellent story. Great plot. I had a little trouble with the fast emotional adjustment of the characters , but it is a nicely-told tale in one chapter. I don't think adding time in another chapter would make it better than it is. Good work.
8/9/22, 2:31 PM
Thank you, more please ✍️
8/9/22, 1:18 PM
Oh cmon that’s way too vindictive man. Going through all that redemption and still only become a third wheel for Johnson? That’s sad…somehow. 😅
Anonymous
8/9/22, 11:14 AM
Something tells me Victor will have CoachDaddy wrapped around his little finger and worshipping him
Anonymous
8/9/22, 10:51 AM
Is it possible for an erotic story to be _inconveniently_ arousing? It's like you opened me up, took note of every button, and are systematically pushing them one by one. I have read other perfectly good stories, and then jerked off to the recollection of this one instead.
8/7/22, 3:47 AM
The story is great, but seems more of an idea of a story, or rather, it is a submission for somebody to take for another story. This chapter seems unfinished, but the idea is amazing. I believe it would wise to combine chapter 1 and 2 because it is still the same thought process, and not technically another chapter just because night and morning happening in between. A complete change of an idea is what creates different chapters. Plus I would love to read more of Ethan's life and how he became a pervert. Granted, since this site doesn't allow podophilic stories that could be difficult. I would love to find a website that allows sexual relations with minors since it add an intensity, or also a way to decompress fantasies in a legal way. Granted, I don't know dark websites so I choose to read stories as a way to decompress and it is difficult to find those besides nifty.org

8/7/22, 4:34 AM
@Rhinoman I'm sorry to be rude, but why are you trying to talk about this topic here? As you yourself note, this site doesn't allow stories about this topic, this story has absolutely nothing to do with this topic that you just brought up out of the blue, and it's probably not a good idea to hijack the comment thread to talk about it, especially not to (apparently) try to source other websites that have stuff on the topic.

Anonymous
8/9/22, 7:09 AM
@Retrofantasia Firstly, this is a thread to MY topic that I wrote in a story page. Secondly, my comment talking about pedophilic content was a warning towards _if_ there was a prequel in regards to the main character. Thirdly, my source, or citing, is called building up credibility or reference to other authors in regards to my feedback. People do this so you'll understand better what a person is trying to communicate. Fourth, I'm not trying to be rude or start any kind of argument/debate (cause you just misunderstood. I assume because you read _pedophilic_ and almost had a stroke cause it was even mentioned. Which, by the way, ephebophile would had been the correct word for me to had wrote.) I simply gave feedback on the work. The comment section, and I might be wrong, isn't to just say "Oh damn, wish that was me..." All I wanted was to give a critique. My wonder of wanting to read about minors is simply about someone at 18-19 yrs of age, but most go 20+ yrs. So its hard to find them without it being ephebophilic/podophilic. Perhaps I could had been more clear.
8/6/22, 12:28 PM
Super hot chapter

8/9/22, 3:40 AM
Thank you! @Human Dragon Fruit