Recent Comments

9/30/22, 7:09 AM
A++ for originality and imagination!

9/30/22, 1:11 PM
@Fingrfethr Cheers dude, I do like me the creative side of fiction… oh I forgot to do a car pun… Ehh that’s for reading., your comment really *drives* me to keep writing.
9/30/22, 11:42 AM
With every chapter Iike you more and more. Who knew that a story about brainwashing could be so wholesome and safe? Very big like
Anonymous
9/30/22, 10:49 AM
I'm not a water sport guy but DAMN! that was hot!
Evan
9/29/22, 11:40 PM
I also have to call out "When you go gay in a dream you go gay in real life." Brilliant line. I also second the creative comment. I look forward to seeing just what these bros have gotten themselves into.

9/30/22, 9:50 AM
@Evan Thank you so much! I'm glad you've been enjoying it.
9/30/22, 5:15 AM
I loved it. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I'll be thinking about all the sweet little dicks ambling about in their tank for a while. It makes me wonder if there's in universe interest from people who want to keep dicks as pets in a home tank setup or if their longterm survival is dependent upon being attached to a host. I suppose I shall find out when I read the rest of your back catalogue.
9/29/22, 6:11 AM
I’m glad I finally got to reading this story! I can’t resist good cum inflation, and this was delicious.

9/30/22, 3:52 AM
@Soren Fitz haha, thank you! I really ought to indulge more often, given that it's my namesake lmao I'm still in the process of slowly cleaning up older stories to post here, so hopefully some of the others are to your taste too 💖 :P
9/30/22, 3:15 AM
I like the premise a lot, but as you said in the story preface, the story lacks a lot of the sort of detail which would make it really really hot. Good start, but I suggest you flesh this one out. For example, who really is this Roger character? How did he get started in this business? What happens to the slaves after delivery? i.e. Tell us about a customer or two. Flesh out the characters and background of the slaves. How close are the police getting? What is the chief detective like? Once fleshed out, I'll be begging for a continuation!
Evan
9/29/22, 11:51 PM
Super (haha) creative! Some nice tongue-in-cheek but still with a great plot and finally overcoming the formula. Fun and hot and an excellent entry into the Halloween contest!

9/30/22, 2:26 AM
@Evan Thanks for your kind praise! It's good to hear the balance of silly and serious worked for you!
9/30/22, 1:55 AM
Great! Second part, Please!
9/30/22, 1:52 AM
Loved this! My mind went so many places after the ending, especially with Harry and his boy!
9/30/22, 1:32 AM
I really like stories with these power dynamics, however I lack a lot of context of our protagonist, who he is and how he got to where he is, as well as the victims, I hope you develop them much more in the following publications
9/30/22, 12:48 AM
wow being converted into mindless drone is so outstanding. willl dream about it happening to me one day.
Evan
9/21/22, 1:02 PM
Loved this. I hope Robbie's affections can be properly returned some time. Great writing. Fun scenes and so very hot. Thank you.

9/29/22, 11:47 PM
@Evan Thank you for the comment, and I guess we'll have to see if anything romantic happens between Duke and Robbie.
mic
9/29/22, 11:40 PM
yeah super nice written, hot ideas, take everything from him but stay together , more cashrape contracts
mic
9/29/22, 11:14 PM
fucking hot, more cocksharing etc , super nice idea, trick him and other guys more, think some hotel guests could have spend some money and help him fuck himself
Evan
9/29/22, 11:06 PM
A fun entry. Really different approach, I wasn't sure where it was going to end up and I enjoyed the lack of sinister elements letting the uncontrolled horniness shine through.
mic
9/29/22, 10:44 PM
so fucking hot, please more guys who get shoved in their lockers, lock them in their lockers after sucking, take their walets handy chlothes and blackmail cashrape and film them
mic
9/29/22, 10:31 PM
so hot written and idea, please more, make him perm dumb , or blackmail him for cash
9/29/22, 10:08 PM
What a wonderful continuation to this story. The Halloween ambience is excellently installed, keep up the amazing work!

9/29/22, 10:12 PM
@Twan Andersen :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Tis the season to be spooky, and slutty!
9/29/22, 9:51 AM
Ha! This last sentence is simply irresistible. What a treat! And also: can’t wait for the Royal Bitch to get her comeuppance. She soooo deserves a nasty ending! Thanks 😊

9/29/22, 8:54 PM
@Yunnick Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. That sentence is the very reason why I split it in two, it was just too fun to pass up. As for RB, we'll see what's she's cooking soon enough.
9/29/22, 8:24 PM
Such a great sequel with a happy gay ending! The Bar's name made me chuckle hard, btw. Also, the question about gay levels was hilarious. Loved how confused Brad is and doesn't notice anything strange even as his outfit changes. Another Norismo masterpiece. Now Brad needs a daddy! :satisfied:

9/29/22, 8:43 PM
@Essex Yay! Now, will this story be 35 parts too? :satisfied:
9/29/22, 7:50 PM
Great beginning
9/29/22, 2:56 PM
I'm sorry if I suddenly got confused, did Mike and Jerome change names to the other?
Jimmy
9/29/22, 6:52 AM
God I hope there's a part three soon

9/29/22, 9:20 AM
hello @Jimmy as the other comments may have clued you in since people keep stealing my shit i'm done writing for free sites. this fucking sucks donkey dick but it can't be helped. thanks for the love and support! this story would have had the most ballsy ending reveal of anything i've ever written.

Jimmy
9/29/22, 2:20 PM
@Daisy I. B. de Melcker I completely understand. We'd all be there if you did release on a non-paid site. I think you story really gets a lot of people's headspaces. Regardless though I hope you find some way to continue writing and receive the right level of respect for your work
9/29/22, 1:20 PM
WOW - this was just a great experience. It was so dark but ... i really enjoyed it. The writing really captured me. I loved it. I wlll read everything you write!
Jonanator
9/29/22, 12:58 PM
Interesting. Can't wait to read more.

9/29/22, 1:04 PM
@Jonanator Thanks! I'll be back to this one soon.
9/29/22, 1:00 PM
Will there be another chapter?
Anonymous
9/29/22, 12:15 PM
Great to see you back with another chapter! Really enjoying your approach to things, with the slight shifts in the medium each time. It keeps things feeling fresh, but with a lot of similar beats to the protagonist’s eventual downfall. Personally was a big fan of the “trapped in VR” angle you took with this one. Whether you stick with this or go somewhere else for the next chapter, consider me hooked! ;)

9/29/22, 12:58 PM
@ Cheers! Glad you enjoyed it! I'll probably revisit this idea in a different story at some point, but for this setting I'm going to keep hopping mediums. Already know where we're going next, but I'm going to explore some other stories first.
9/29/22, 12:58 PM
Love the story. I so want to be Trevor. Can’t wait for the next episode. I like the idea of Omar eventually becoming his Dom after Liam trains him to be that.
9/11/22, 6:01 PM
So... It's been almost a year now. I don't suppose we'll see anymore updates on this story? Such a shame... 😞

Anonymous
9/29/22, 11:22 AM
@HypnoSlaveDude Aye. I check back once or twice a month hoping to see a new chapter.