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5/17/23, 12:07 PM
Great start
5/16/23, 8:21 PM
Awesome stuff! And very interesting concept overall! Love it! The drone ID as a laser-applied tattoo on the soles is especially kinky! :3

5/17/23, 7:50 AM
@[ITO-K](/user/show/864520) I know right? :D ~~I shamelessly borrowed it from your story~~ Your story inspired this very kinky, very hot element. It has refused to let me go ever since I read Destination: Utopia.
5/17/23, 4:49 AM
When is the next part coming out because I can’t wait. This was such a great read
Kippers
5/17/23, 3:48 AM
Mitch stood up "strait" and later "straitened," but otherwise a hot swap romp in the woods
5/16/20, 5:07 AM
Was really hoping the coffee abstinence was leading to some piss play, but maybe there'll be a sequel 😁

Kippers
5/17/23, 3:28 AM
@[PEN15LUVR](/user/show/1012360) I thought "coffee" was going to be a trigger word, so that Jeff would writhe, squirm and squeeze down on Gary's cock in his primed hairless pussy.
5/17/23, 3:16 AM
Over and over and over, hot hot hot hot hot HOT!
5/17/23, 2:15 AM
Oh, I have been WAITING for this--and it didn't disappoint. "Twice-told-tales"--the same story retold from multiple perspectives--are among my favorites, but they're very tricky to pull off...and this was PERFECT! Seeing the previous events of the story--the first practice with Coach, the discovery in the bathroom stall, the first time Sammy fucked Luke--from Sammy's perspective, in all of its confusion and longing, completely reshape how we see those chapters. And I love how you paint Sammy with so many dimensions: a fuckboy with a heart, someone motivated above all by love but not afraid of the sexual aspect of that love. Even Anwar gets a bit of development, which speaks volumes about your ability to provide excellent characterization with just a few sentences. Thank you for sharing your gift with us! :)

5/17/23, 2:30 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) “Fuckboy with a heart” oh my god that’s exactly Sammy haha Glad you enjoyed. You’re one of my most enthusiastic readers and you always give great comments, so thank you for that.
5/17/23, 12:30 AM
Could you do more stories like this it was great

5/17/23, 2:03 AM
@[Muscle theft lover](/user/show/10025522) Chances are good I will write something similar.
Anonymous
5/17/23, 2:02 AM
So good and amazing is there possibility for more?
Anonymous
5/17/23, 12:54 AM
You knocked it out of the park with this one. Great character work! While the erotic bits were brief and recaps, you still managed to make them fresh and super hot. Can’t wait to see what comes next!
5/17/23, 12:32 AM
Any chance that u could do like pt3 and 4 or 5 because these two story were so fucking amazing but just alittle short hope this isn't the end of this story because wow it was amazing and a new idea great idea
Mar 21, 2021
Anonymous
5/17/23, 12:22 AM
Sequel… need sequel!
5/17/23, 12:17 AM
Hell ya......
5/16/23, 11:33 PM
I am very glad things like this aren’t actually possible with hypnosis.
5/16/23, 6:49 PM
For not having English as a first language, this is a great attempt to tackle a classic storyline! Keep up the good work! You're definitely developing as a writer, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!

5/16/23, 11:23 PM
@[Ganymede and Co.](/user/show/956270) Thanks, I hope you also enjoyed my another stories.
5/16/23, 6:34 AM
hot! continue please!!

5/16/23, 11:21 PM
@[John A](/user/show/975533) Thank you, for the continuation it will takes between 2-3 weeks or maybe even longer.
5/16/23, 4:25 AM
Hey, man! I congratulate you on writing this super hot dumb jock story, and not letting any language barrier stop you. I’m not a native English speaker myself and I suffer from a lot of typos, but I only got better the more and more I wrote, so please, never stop! I would only recommend you send the story to someone you trust first, I think this will go a long way in helping you improve your writing :) And yes, I definitely want to read more, and fast! Not only I want to see how Noah will trick Jake into fucking his sweet twink ass with his huge cock, but I also want to see Noah being a manipulative, slutty bottom to all of Jake’s dumb, hung jock friends! Can’t wait for more! Thanks for your awesome story!

5/16/23, 11:20 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Great that you like my story and yeah you know what I think for the continuation of this story😁
Anonymous
5/15/23, 9:48 PM
Hot! Keep going! Noah just found out by his “doctor” that he needs his hole stretched regularly and what better tool to use than Jacks 12 inch cock

5/16/23, 11:16 PM
@Anonymous Thank you, I will consider it in my next stories.
5/15/23, 1:16 AM
These stories always make me laugh. Token "ethnic" characters sprinkled throughout the story and the ridiculous imagery at the bottom of the pages. LOL

5/15/23, 1:37 AM
@[Kim_Jaewon](/user/show/1327650) Glad to have entertained you. Now move on to another author if you don't like my stories. There's plenty on the site without insulting my work. I mean, what is really the point of your comment? Make yourself feel superior somehow because you can think of something to whine about? Do you think your comment accomplished anything? Next time you have this kind of comment for one of my stories, just shut up. I don't need that. I give my time for free. Go complain somewhere else.

5/16/23, 10:38 PM
I think what Mafisto said applies to any story in any site. So please, @[Kim_Jaewon](/user/show/1327650) consider being respectful to others. This type of attitude is completely out of place and unnecessary. Feedback must always come from a place of empathy, a measured tone, and good intention. Otherwise it's not an opinion, it's an aggression.
5/16/23, 10:01 PM
need more chapterssssss :drooling_face:
5/16/23, 9:57 PM
extraordinary...
5/15/23, 11:40 PM
All of this naked men in one room and not an orgy happening is a travesty. I want a refund. I need to se a manager. Ernest is not using Obezol's power to the maximum.

5/16/23, 9:52 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) He's just trying to be a nice, ethical scientist. That usually means no orgies, although there are rumours that at the local university, there's scandalous things happening in room 6969 of the Bonner Building.
Anonymous
5/16/23, 12:45 AM
Hoping for more feet!!

5/16/23, 9:49 PM
@Anonymous Thanks. I first read this as hopping for more feet and I admired the dedication.
5/16/23, 8:56 PM
Oh my, poor Dr. Wilshire, spiraling down, caught on his own tangled mess. Good thing he has a liquid capable of bending anybody's mind, eh? ;) Although, there is no knowledge about side effects, or how long it takes for the chemicals to stop working. Would people under the influence of Obezol not only stop obeying but also reverting to their original state of mind? I guess I'll find out in the next couple of chapters! (or maybe not haha depending on the direction the story takes). In any case, the sex scene was very hot! :fire: And the story is quite interesting. I like how it feels like anything could happen.

5/16/23, 9:48 PM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) > Although, there is no knowledge about side effects, or how long it takes for the chemicals to stop working. Would people under the influence of Obezol not only stop obeying but also reverting to their original state of mind? Now you see why they must proceed to human trials as soon as possible. So all these questions can be answered! Nobody understands Dr. Wilshire.
5/16/23, 9:42 PM
Please do continue
5/16/23, 4:01 PM
Welcome back; good to see you back writing stories. I still owe you stories for the Rubber Empire series, but you are dealing with a subject matter in _Defenders of The Earth_ that I've thought about for a long time. For me it's the animated cartoon, not the comic book. So I'll see what I can come up with to help expand your series.

5/16/23, 9:39 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Can't wait to Read your addition of both story's;)))
5/16/23, 11:26 AM
I have to say, it left me wanting more, so is this the end of the story?Still well written, but I was surprised to see a story about AI ending with a sex zombie.I was expecting a more sci-fi ending. And I thought the ending would be a little more sci-fi, and Piper was like a wizard who brought the boys into the world and left them alone. Finally, thank you for your story and look forward to more writing from you.

Anonymous
5/16/23, 12:09 PM
@[GoJia](/user/show/23538) Oh,.. that's not the end. But, for the pair right now, it really feels like it. At one point the start of the next chapter was stuck on the end here. That clarified things better, but was still jarring. The whole next chapter was supposed to be here, but... Greed. There was no way it was close to fitting. So, don't worry; this is just a fake-out ending. The truth follows,...

5/16/23, 1:12 PM
@Anonymous Oops,... Identity crisis here. ^Yes this was me :3

5/16/23, 4:08 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Oh, that's great XD I thought you said earlier that the story only has four chapters.

5/16/23, 4:58 PM
@[GoJia](/user/show/23538) Oh, I certainly did! I can't count; not in terms of chapters or words :p I got this far into the chapter and realized I hadn't even gotten to the point yet, so,... yeah. Another chapter is coming. You could call this an interlude, if you like. Then there would only be one more REAL chapter when I said it :3
5/16/23, 4:51 PM
I love it, thank you
5/16/23, 4:42 PM
Where do you volunteer?
5/16/23, 4:34 PM
Thank you for the great chapter and series!