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5/11/23, 1:30 AM
Nice though I kinda wish Eli had a program that snapped him out of it like Erik. I'm curious if he would show remorse
5/11/23, 12:19 AM
Sorry, but this is just... it doesn't make any _sense_. Things happen that were never set up (or directly contradict the previous chapter/paragraphs) — even basic, fundamental stuff like John (apparently) offering to give up his own muscle to Jack. That's **never explained** in the story, it's just suddenly what's happening out of nowhere. The procedure — which also starts out of nowhere, one second John and Jack are sitting in the waiting room, the next moment the transfer is already in progress — goes from being a muscle-transference process in chapter 1, to suddenly transferring attributes that have nothing to do with muscle, like bone density and height, in chapter 2. Having an AI generate a starting point for a story is fine, but a human editor still needs to check it for basic coherence afterwards.
Anonymous
5/10/23, 11:55 PM
I hope the bullies would come to like what had happened to them :)
5/10/23, 10:46 PM
Had a lot of fun reading this one!
Kippers
5/10/23, 7:58 PM
Generally well written, and though I'm not a foot fan, I do enjoy the scent of fresh sweat and a bit of crotch! Cum in those destroyed briefs and leave them as a gift for your roomie, Trevor! I do hope that Owen will provide some much-needed assistance for Brody, and also that Trevor will be permitted more awareness of the horny deeds Owen has planned. Brody will certainly question why Trevor hands his filthy socks to his roommate, but I'm sure Brody will learn to appreciate the aroma. 😉 May the funk be with you!
5/10/23, 6:51 PM
Fun stuff. The sight into Chad's head was nice. Still glad its mostly dom top pov, but views unto subs head is great! I hope Dexter will play with Chad's butt, some rimming would be great! :)
5/10/23, 3:25 PM
More please!
Nov 8, 2019
5/10/23, 3:14 PM
OINK!
5/10/23, 2:50 PM
Great story..loving the rubber skinheads!
5/10/23, 2:14 PM
I wonder if the toy was made by the same company that made the serum from your “leaking” story?
5/10/23, 2:09 PM
Loved how the toy had made it so he could get his whole hand inside. Hope this continues. There are so many ways it could go. Will he go back to the shop? Will he contact the toy manufacturer? Will he ask a trusted friend for help?
5/10/23, 11:08 AM
Uh oh, Stephen. Run. Don't get ensnared too! :D
5/9/23, 9:42 PM
WOW. Thrilling. Thank you.

5/10/23, 10:58 AM
@[Clinton J](/user/show/2616233) Thanks!
5/9/23, 10:37 PM
Quite fascinating thank you. I was expecting (hoping for?) some heavy BDSM fireworks. But this is better.

5/10/23, 10:58 AM
@[Corinthian38](/user/show/38372) Thanks! Happy you enjoyed fireworks of a different kind.
5/10/23, 12:10 AM
I mean, obviously he has to dose everyone now. His colleagues, the FDA inspectors. It's the only thing that makes sense [in a porno story]. :satisfied:

5/10/23, 10:56 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Dr. Wilshire doesn’t know he’s in a porno story. 😉
johnlee88888888@yahoo.com
5/10/23, 10:43 AM
Super exciting story, quite a turn on!
5/10/23, 2:30 AM
A truly great sequel that tops the previous chapter in every sense and manages to deliver an incredibly hot and mesmerizing tale with a romantic twist. Brilliant Twan, one of my new faves!

5/10/23, 9:05 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Thank you so much, Essex. I'm really glad you liked it!
5/10/23, 8:53 AM
Shrink his cock and make him a bottom. :)
5/10/23, 7:08 AM
Omg I’m addicted to This story😳😳😳
littledickslave@yahoo.com
5/7/23, 9:06 PM
Wow! I graduated from Cal Poly Pomona just like Mac in the story and I lived in Anaheim Hills, right next to Mac's Yorba Linda! How cool!

Martin
5/10/23, 5:19 AM
@[Local](/user/show/10031217) There are DMs, just make sure to register with the Forum at least once (which can be done by clicking on the "Forum" icon, the rest is done automatically). And you might want to check if there's anything new on the forum for you from time to time.
5/10/23, 3:06 AM
🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤
5/10/23, 1:38 AM
Oh this is excellent, looking forward to seeing it continued. Great job with the set up and hypnosis in this story and the very hot Max.
5/9/23, 9:41 PM
I actually thought this was the best installment of the series. While you've been careful to detail exactly why we should dislike Mac up to this point you have kind of glossed over just how loathsome the Dougs and various other characters are. Doug getting dropped on his fat ass made the story up to this point worthwhile. The main Doug is such an overconfident troglodyte that I hate to see him win, no matter how many negative character tropes are loaded onto Mac, I'd rather see him grow than see him remain under Doug's thumb.
Apr 30, 2023
5/10/23, 1:27 AM
You’re doing just fine. Keep up the good work and keep perfecting your English.
5/10/23, 12:25 AM
Very nice so far.
Sep 12, 2011
Iacobus
5/9/23, 10:59 PM
Great story, one of the hottest
5/9/23, 10:55 PM
Ooh i like that he kept their consciousness while torturing them. I cant wait whats gonna happen to the bullies.
5/9/23, 10:46 PM
Looking forward to stage 2, please.
5/9/23, 5:42 PM
I'm a fan, i love this story, i didn't Know how you would continue the story since the third episode was different from the first two. This one seemed to me the weakest of the four, i think because it was shorter or you were going very fast or because of all the exposure you did. Please continue this saga, maybe you should expand the universe since i would like to see more of Eli and Camille's eccentric friends and see if they also use Mac/Auggie (or whatever our protagonist is called) or if they make their own tops, or the neighbors of the dougs or the other corporative bottoms at Apollobiotech creating submissive/service tops, it would be nice to see our protagonist interact with other tops, maybe have other points of view. Since the pills and drugs used here affect sexual performance and suggestion and don't seem to have an effect on muscles, will we see any flirting with steroids?
5/9/23, 8:23 PM
This is turning into an excellent series! Really hoping he continues to move on to other jocks.