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4/26/24, 12:52 PM
the hottest story I've read on here for quite some time. Great work!
4/26/24, 2:45 AM
Wow!! This was your first story!? It was fantastic! Really hit me over the head with the wish fulfillment of it all. I hope John also becomes a Leatherman in full leather and the two of them learn to love being versatile. :) The more leather, the better! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Anonymous
4/26/24, 4:26 AM
@[Leather Muir Cap](/user/show/10038191) I agree with this comment, actually. Even though the setup in this chapter suggests that John will end up becoming submissive to Nick, I think the idea of them both becoming leathermen and dominating boys together is really hot. And then occasionally bottoming for each other would add to the romantic aspect too.

4/26/24, 11:09 AM
@[Leather Muir Cap](/user/show/10038191) Thank you! Appreciate it! :)

4/26/24, 11:11 AM
@Anonymous Yeah I’m not sure what Johns final role will be in Nicks leather journey! Thanks for your feesback! ❤️
4/23/24, 12:17 PM
Awesome start. Great characters and pricess. Looking forward to following along. Thank you for writing.

4/26/24, 11:00 AM
@[Currious](/user/show/10009075) Thank you very much, man. I've published the second chapter, hope you keep enjoying it. Dr. Jonathan further expands his control over Alex, advancing in the brainwashing process.
4/26/24, 5:43 AM
This has been fantastic

4/26/24, 10:56 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thank you for your comment, it motivates me even more to write.
4/26/24, 10:08 AM
Man this is so hot
4/26/24, 6:18 AM
Not bad
4/26/24, 4:50 AM
Hoping for at least one more chapter of 'Dad Pussy Syndrome,' bro. Pretty please?
11/29/23, 7:58 PM
Loved this. I usually feel bad for the victims/main characters of these types of stories but holy shit this guy was an asshole. Glad you really played into that before the hypnosis/mind control kicked in

11/30/23, 11:45 AM
@[Kael](/user/show/10042411) Thank you! And really wanted this guy to be a dick from the start. Don't get me wrong I do love the Twilight Zone, Goosebumps, ect. twist where they're isn't a hair ending and they might not deserve their fate but I wanted one where the guy did.

12/5/23, 12:11 AM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) Will there be another chapter? (I hope!)

Anonymous
12/12/23, 3:06 AM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) isn't it Officer Freewill ? (not Goodwill) or did that change with his progressing transformation?

Anonymous
12/21/23, 3:15 PM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) Could you do the next chapter as a Christmas edition

Anonymous
12/21/23, 6:54 PM
@Anonymous Will there be a return of the zipper in Jeeves’ uniform?

4/26/24, 3:31 AM
@Anonymous Great idea! Santa costume
Feb 17, 2024
Anonymous
4/26/24, 3:18 AM
Very well written and hot story! I hope there’s another chapter coming soon.
Throne
1/28/24, 9:38 PM
You incorporated a lot of ideas into a short space and did it well. The transformation was vividly described. I especially liked when John was allowed to speak in his own voice, and then continue describing his new life in Johnathan's words. Those moments were intense.

4/26/24, 1:38 AM
@Throne Very well put.
4/26/24, 1:37 AM
Totally loved the story as well as read. Like wow, nicely done plot, as well. Makes me wish
4/24/24, 11:07 PM
Looking forward to this! You should link the separate chapters into the same story! 🙂

4/26/24, 1:25 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) I tried that but I got the second chapter apart from the fact that I'm new to writing, I've always been a reader, I'm learning. I invite you to read the second part. Thank you for your contribution champion
4/25/24, 12:50 AM
Hot!

4/26/24, 1:19 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) thanks champion
4/25/24, 11:27 PM
Perfect scores all around. Brilliant work and THANK YOU! Wow!
mustache
4/25/24, 2:51 AM
I’d really love more stories from you! Are you a male pattern bald man yourself?

4/25/24, 10:20 PM
@mustache Thanks, and no, not personally.
Badboy
4/25/24, 6:02 PM
Loved the story. Made me think of a forced haircut i was once given. i was tied up and given a barber's choice haircut from a dominant top i met for the first time. On the phone before my visit we discussed our mutual fetish for humiliating haircuts, even head shaves. I had about 3 inches of hair when i walked in the door but i wasn't gonna be surprised if I was sent home bald. Instead, he gave me a male pattern bald haircut, way more humiliating than a head shave. Then he announced he was going to take me out to dinner show off my new haircut. The thought of being seen in public with an MPB haircut horrified me and made me hard as hell. My "barber"said he understood my concern and gave me toupee tower to cover my new shame. This was the cheapest, fakest looking toupee anyone ever saw and the color did not match my hair at all. But i was in his power and did as i was told, put it on my bald pate. I had a full boner when we walked the restaurant, i felt like everyone was staring at me and i did hear some chuckles as i passed some tables. But we sat down, he ordered for us and then, without warning, in the middle of dinner, he reached over and yanked the toupee off my head. i wanted to disappear. i heard laughter from surrounding tables but i didn't dare look. i just stared straight into his face and he was just grinning, holding the cheap toupee in his hand. i wanted to leave right away but he insisted we wait until we finished dessert. On the way to the car he tossed the toupee to me and said i could keep it. i still have it as a keepsake of one of the most humiliating and hottest nights of my life.

4/25/24, 10:20 PM
@Badboy Sounds like you had a memorable experience.
4/23/24, 7:50 AM
Seriously this story is fantastic. Idk if we’re going to keep following Ian but that would be SO satisfying given the ending. Overall though, AMAZING and looking forward to more of anything.

4/24/24, 8:04 PM
@[Sprkl](/user/show/10003797) Thank you! I've fleshed out this concept as much as I can, but there'll be more concepts to come. What did you like best with this one?

4/24/24, 8:13 PM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) I like the creeping feeling of embarrassment/humiliation and how it’s all wrapped in an overall pleasant exterior. Nothing is really malicious and it’s oh so satisfying to watch the main character get in way over their head, lol. The way Ian feels as if everyone is staring at him is fantastic. Also love how the change isn’t permanent but it lasts a pretty significant amount of time- and is essentially indistinguishable from actual male pattern baldness throughout that time frame.

Hank
4/25/24, 5:03 PM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) This story still has a lot of meat left in it. It could definitely use a sequel where Ian goes to the wedding, and he is forced to choose between keeping his mpb secret under the toupee, or taking it off and begging known as male pattern bald to his entire family

4/25/24, 10:16 PM
@[Sprkl](/user/show/10003797) Ah yeah, Ian could have stopped at any point, but he didn't for reasons even he doesn't understand. Once it's done it's done, though, and now he'll have to live with it for a good while, and hope his secret isn't revealed.

4/25/24, 10:20 PM
@Hank Which do you prefer?
4/25/24, 9:50 PM
Love this story and so happy to see it continued!
Apr 24, 2024
4/24/24, 12:10 PM
I thought the scenes describing the growth of the drone collective were extremely hot, and I loved how we saw Antonio undergoing a very slow conversion, as it took time for more nanobots to replicate in his body. On the other hand, Pete's response to all of this was so passive and chill, it frequently made me laugh. The story would have made more sense to me--and been even hotter--if we got some indications that Pete had also been mentally affected by the cyborg implant, but was just oblivious about it.

Anonymous
4/24/24, 1:15 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) thanks for the feedback and I can see what you mean... this was my 3rd rewrite so the story has evolved a lot from the initial version and I can see it could use more... details. Let me see what I can edit in to add more to incorporate some additional ideas!

4/25/24, 8:44 PM
@Anonymous I thought about that too but I just assumed that the issue was that Peter was not genre savvy. (Either that or he's dumb.) I mean when the third guy showed up if it were me I would have at least kind of leaned forward and went, dude if you don't leave right now you're going to get turned into a drone though if you're into that... Which has you explicitly stated (good job there) he was. It did add a very slightly comical vibe to it but I don't think that's a problem. It's basically a drone threesome romance.
4/25/24, 8:36 PM
A great start! I look forward to more fun!
4/25/24, 8:25 PM
Interesting start. The move to the Doc pov is fun. Looking forward to the result of Harry being a subby needy bottom.
4/25/24, 8:16 PM
Sexy story! Love the frat takeover.
4/25/24, 7:46 PM
Feels a bit rushed, but very hot!!!!
4/25/24, 7:46 PM
I love such stories. I don't know why but they turn me on. Keep on writing! The wishes are great.
4/25/24, 7:42 PM
Re-read everything to be sure I did not forget anything, man the whole story is so hot!!! So many new men to turn into depraved slaves, so many possibilities, but Christmas is not over yet!
Art
4/25/24, 4:57 PM
Isn't it time you added more to this fun story? Thanks

4/25/24, 6:50 PM
@[Art](/user/show/1014223) Hey Art, glad you like the story. I figured I owed you a response. I have chapters 2 and 3 written, but hit hard writer's block in chapter 4. I wasn't going to post anymore until I figured out my way past the writer's block. I know what needs to happen in chapter 4 (I have up to chapter 10 outlined), but I just keep hitting a wall on a certain scene. Maybe I should just go ahead and post Chapters 2 and 3?
4/25/24, 5:37 PM
Hot and sexy and fun and awesome. What a great start. So hot! Love it! The wishes here are great!
Elm
4/25/24, 5:23 PM
Wow! Just WOW! I loved every second of reading it! It's just dark enough to be enjoyable, and just filled with lovely details. Making Eddie turn his own father was just *chef's kiss* and I like the fact he was made into a gorilla of a man. I kinda wanted the same thing to happen to Hank haha. I just loved the mental image of him always having his belly peeking out of his dress shirt! I just can't help but love overtly detailed stories, please don't ever stop writing them.
4/22/24, 12:23 AM
A sexy version from the horror of the deep

4/22/24, 11:48 PM
@[Dream maker](/user/show/908635) Yeah. Wet, salty and dark with tentacles. Cthulhu is sexy(!?)

Anonymous
4/25/24, 4:10 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) yes he is indeed
4/25/24, 2:54 AM
Really looking forward to what happens next with Boots's newest guest!

4/25/24, 11:13 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thank you!! ❤️