Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/3/17, 10:51 PM
Personality transformations <3
Anonymous
11/3/17, 10:32 PM
So far so GREAT...Can't wait to see where this goes. Hopefully wonderful for Jared. Hope he gets the guys he wants. And nothing too bad for him. WAITING for the next chapters.
LongtimeFan
11/3/17, 10:24 PM
What fun! I love all the mythological references (“did you turn him into a pig...that’s more Her thing”—yay, Circe!). And clearly Jared has some flaws, but as someone who doesn’t like the whole “guy gets power and becomes a complete jerk to everyone” trope (more power to you if you do!), I like that his conscience kept him from turning Garret into a mindless toy. But who knows? :p You never can tell in these stories...
Anonymous
11/3/17, 10:04 PM
Amazing, and beautiful.
Anonymous
11/3/17, 9:15 PM
This is good! Can’t wait to see where he goes....and in classic myths, the hero succumbs to corruption and weak morals!
Anonymous
11/3/17, 8:08 PM
Keep going please! We need coaches, cops, gangsters, mafias ... wow!
JoJoJo
11/3/17, 8:00 PM
Trust me, he's no good guy.
Anonymous
11/3/17, 7:59 PM
Masterpiece!
Anonymous
11/3/17, 7:43 PM
I love that Jared's "easy fix" for his roommate's fem aversion isn't just making him comfortable around all gay guys--it's making him want/need to be a flamer himself. Fun stuff. :p Maybe Jared's morals are looser than he'd like to think!
Anonymous
11/3/17, 7:05 PM
This is getting good. Keep up the good work
Anonymous
11/3/17, 4:06 PM
i love it... cyborg brother
Anonymous
11/3/17, 3:52 PM
And here he is...ignoring the warning and using more than one on not one, but TWO people....oh this can't end well....or maybe too well... And what about Sarah...Jared is the one that the Lotus Tree gave the flower to, not her...so many possible outcomes run through my mind, and none of them good :(
Anonymous
11/3/17, 3:29 PM
Well that update came quick! Great story and I can't wait to see where this will go!!
Anonymous
11/3/17, 3:29 PM
Well that update came quick! Great story and I can't wait to see where this will go!!
screamingmoist
11/3/17, 2:39 PM
@MissMerboy - the greasers were fun to write! I'll be using some in future stories for sure.
skumbum
11/3/17, 2:36 PM
would love to read the continuation!
Anonymous
11/3/17, 2:10 PM
Hoooott
Anonymous
11/3/17, 2:03 PM
Excellent
Anonymous
11/3/17, 11:07 AM
Love the story so far! Pleas write more
Anonymous
11/3/17, 10:43 AM
Can’t wait for more!
Arkanoid
11/3/17, 10:00 AM
Nice!! Next chapter :)
Anonymous
11/3/17, 6:31 AM
In love with this beginning. Please keep it going
Anonymous
11/3/17, 4:38 AM
This has potential!
demonsareourfriends@gmail.com
11/3/17, 4:23 AM
Again, absolutely fantastic. Loved it.
Anonymous
11/3/17, 4:00 AM
Love the beginning of this story. Please continue
xORRiNx
11/3/17, 3:18 AM
Good news: I'm writing about 800 words per day on a larger story based on this genre. Release date will be mid november realistically. It's standalone and won't rely on updates :) Bad news: this story is too far gone for me to get back into. I thank you for your comment but I don't see myself continuing.
Anonymous
11/3/17, 2:45 AM
Bruh that cliffhanger
LongtimeFan
11/3/17, 2:04 AM
Great intro! I love the mythological aspect (contemporary myth and magic is so fun). And it’s well-written and interesting, too. Can’t wait to see more! :)
UchihaDEMS
11/3/17, 1:37 AM
Moar
DD
11/3/17, 12:59 AM
I agree, this is going to be great.