Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/17/20, 11:49 PM
Exceptional! Well done!
Gino
2/17/20, 11:07 PM
Next Chapter? Hot story! thank you
Anonymous
2/17/20, 8:14 PM
are you posting more of this on your FA?
Proofreading help?
2/17/20, 7:40 PM
Hello! I am the creator of Ryleigh. I'm sorry to contact you here, but I didn't know how to reach out to you! I am a native English speaker, so if you would like help proofreading the story, please contact me! I would like to help you with this project in any way that I can, I feel very strongly about it! You can DM me on twitter at @ningyotoko. If I can contact you through some other means, please let me know via our mutual artist friend. You know who!
jemsea13@yahoo.com
2/17/20, 6:45 PM
Very good for a first story posting. You should make it a series of guys running into this mysterious bar tender with vials of potions!
Anonymous
2/17/20, 2:38 PM
Reminds me of my all time favorite series by Mindbender: http://www.pridesites.com/omelissokomos/mindbender/leathernecks-01.html
Anonymous
2/17/20, 1:37 PM
Really excited to hear more about Matthew! thanks for sharing such a great story. Cheers!
malskin
2/17/20, 1:33 PM
i agree another great chapter - i am wondering with Aaron's parents going away there might be a tragic accident and as Butch is the only one left he has to stay with him for good
2/17/20, 4:18 AM
Thanks so much! i practice hypnosis a lot as a subject, and found that i was beginning to trance and get hard as the professor talked Aiden into a deep trance. As a result for me, this story was very arousing, more so than other stories which i also find quite enthralling but not generally to the same extent. That said, i agree with Heru Kane that the professor's having been fired for almost the same thing previously made it seem very unlikely that he would jump into this so quickly and without more concern and forethought. Actually other than the fact of having had a previous hypnosis practice, I don't think the background story about the firing was helpful at all to the overall story. I certainly would have thought that in any case more conversation prior to trance, some sort of preliminary written agreement, and conducting the full erotic session at the professor's home would have made the story more realistic and longer - both good changes I think! Still a very good story, and one which represents the actual process of hypnosis (at least from my experience) much better than most other stories on this site. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Thanks again!! ;))
Anonymous
2/17/20, 3:38 AM
This is a great series. Thanks.
Willie Cici
2/17/20, 3:36 AM
This was great. I was working on a prison story, but I want to see where you go with your story. Well written and storyline engaging. Thanks.
Anonymous
2/17/20, 1:44 AM
I really love this Reflex ecosystem. I would spend every income for them!!
Feb 14, 2020
2/16/20, 11:33 PM
@[BLANK SPACE] Well, that's funny, one of my biggest kinks is Russian scam bots who mess up my comment count.
Anonymous
2/16/20, 6:24 PM
Thank you for proving my point. It is possible for a new author to post a story that has been written AND edited. It was cogent and hot. Can't ask for anything more! Great story!!!
2/16/20, 6:04 PM
I liked it a lot. Great setup and hot descriptions. I agree with the last commenter: it ended a little too quickly. Still, great first story.
Anonymous
2/16/20, 5:01 PM
very well done! hot!
Anonymous
2/16/20, 4:45 PM
Very well written! Great story and ending! Please keep up the great work :)
TcomJ
2/16/20, 3:14 PM
bravo!!
ForgottenCradle
2/16/20, 8:50 AM
awwwww, good thing Butch doesn't have to go long without a good dicking. he was made for it
Allen
2/16/20, 8:33 AM
i agree with CigarMuscle, fucking hot! i wanr more - spin-offs to others changing or different viewpoints - even a prequel! LOVED it 😁
Mar 13, 2018
Daniel
2/16/20, 8:24 AM
This is such a hot, intense story. Love the armpit stuff, I'm a huge sucker for those. it makes me cum like a fire hose. Can this continue, please?
2/16/20, 7:03 AM
really enjoyable, though I wish you'd continued to show Declan's thoughts since that was really good. After the ball got rolling it kinda went too fast
Plague
2/16/20, 6:47 AM
I'm enjoying this a lot. also I'm now wondering 1; how slutty Butch will get over the next few days and 2; what Aaron's going to have Butch wear.
2/16/20, 6:22 AM
Great Story! I hope there are more like it!
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/16/20, 5:38 AM
I would not mind sampling one of those vials myself.
svplgsmslm
2/16/20, 5:10 AM
Different and very erotic.
Anonymous
2/16/20, 2:23 AM
I'd love to read more
Feb 15, 2020
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/16/20, 1:00 AM
How about a chapter with a latex puppy suit & suit blends with his body, making him a latex pup? I can post pictures of my suit if desired.
Feb 15, 2020
2/16/20, 12:59 AM
Amazing piece. Would love to hear about more experiences!
Anonymous
2/16/20, 12:37 AM
this is a low pressure story with no threat. pleasant, like... a Macanudo but without the kick of a Flathead. Enjoyed it.