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1/14/26, 8:16 PM
This story was so hot, absolutely love and hope for more.
1/5/26, 10:59 PM
Another great chapter, Soren! You've done a really good job balancing both the sexual aspects as well as the emotional and relationship aspects. I concur with Jack, hoping that Caspian/Chase/Hunter can have their happy ending!

1/14/26, 7:29 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Yeah, sometimes I worry about whiplash, but I think it's worth it to give Hawk a moment of weakness while he's fucking Chase with dangerously addictive precum, for example--I think that momentary dimuendo makes the sudden intense roughness hit a lot harder. I left Hunter's anger at Caspian for _after_ he lapped at Caspian's fingers like a good panther, though! Depends on the situation.
1/3/26, 11:25 AM
Oh my GOD! How could you do this, Soren?!? Making me wait another week to find out what happens? This story is so good and so hot and there's so much CUM! I know it's not up to me, but I really, really hope that Caspian, Chase, and Hunter can get back together again. Ugh! It's so good!!!

1/14/26, 7:26 PM
@[Jack Reader](/user/show/915335) I felt the stakes really ramped up in this chapter, lovely to hear that you felt the same way. All the pieces for the hunt are in place, poor Chase is a wreck, Caspian is a wreck, at this point I think Hunter is the only one who's sure of himself and not in a healthy way! Also yeah, you know me, I can't write a story without tons of fucking cum. All that precum for Chase, the way he nuts all over himself and paints his body white, Hunter slam-powerbottoming that poor frat boy for a stomach-bulging load... there's always more cum, lmao.
1/2/26, 12:45 AM
Concurred with Jack, Soren! This chapter was really explicitly sexy and hot, I loved it! Even whilst giving us plenty of eye candy with your models and your descriptions, I appreciate how we're still advancing the Chase/Hunter/Caspian arc. I'm a sucker for a happy ending, so I'm hoping everyone ends up in a better place, but you're really good at these kinds of stories so I know you'll have something good in store. Can't wait for..._well, tomorrow!_

1/14/26, 7:19 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Yeah, the spiritfucking in this chapter was an absolute blast for me! The obstacle course scene was one I was really anticipating writing--but so was Chase finally getting dick from Caspian. I hope their dynamic was really vibrant in this chapter, sexual wrestling and all. Also happy to hear the descriptions worked well. I can't easily visualise people from their descriptions, so the models are important to me, but I've been honing my description of the characters as well. One big thing I'm trying to figure out lately is how to remind readers of the appearance of the models chapter-by-chapter, especially when there's a long time between them, but it sometimes feels repetitive. I think the model images help a lot!
Francesco
12/24/21, 1:59 PM
this is my favorite story of the site, I would like to see more with the same concept of "man of the house" where everything is due, even the most surreal situations become normal, beautiful.

1/14/26, 7:08 PM
@Francesco yes.....to this idea
1/14/26, 7:08 PM
i like how this story ends w dad wanting to experience what his son is experiencing......i'm feeling the same suddenly to experience watching other men while i'm locked...hmmm
1/14/26, 7:07 PM
Damn! So hot! Kinda makes me wanna... stroke...
1/14/26, 7:03 PM
Lordandmaster this is Marky from Cunstruction. Good to see you back on this site. Thankyou for that story. Would love to see a next day for Marky on the crew
Driftingscot
1/14/26, 5:54 PM
Terrific story..well paced, with seduction and hypnosis and sexy rubber..the perfect combination...how many more will submit...
1/14/26, 5:06 PM
Love nonconsensual medical scenes and this one's terrific! Also love the writing; the short staccato phrases really ramp up the suspense. Can't wait for Part Two!