Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/24/15, 12:10 AM
Good to have an older, rugged man as the cop victim. Nothing beats fucking a mature muscle man :}
Mr.Dick
12/23/15, 11:40 PM
Thanks so much for the good feedback! I will hopefully be putting out a new chapter by the end of the week.
Anonymous
12/23/15, 11:39 PM
Love me some Baralai stories. Don't stop writing
Hyphap
12/23/15, 9:27 PM
Oh, this is really getting me going. Nothing subtle, but very hot.
Kovu
12/23/15, 7:52 PM
Thank you for the feed back, guys. In future stories I will add a MC element to it. This is really just an attempt at writing smut and gauging what people think. I won't forget to use capitals for a Master's referral! Thanks for the tip!
Anonymous
12/23/15, 2:40 PM
Truly a most electrifying tale. I felt pity for Officer Bright, but it only lasted a split-second. I will enjoy imagining his further destruction!
Cliff
12/23/15, 12:35 PM
Another Baralai's story? Hurray ! Your stories are always fresh and hot, this one is no exception, well done!
Anonymous
12/23/15, 3:42 AM
Very nice start!
Anonymous
12/23/15, 2:17 AM
Awesome!!! I hope they managed to escape somehow!!
Chicago Bully-Boy
12/23/15, 1:55 AM
.....Just discovered this story. I love mind control stuff anyway, but the Bully aspect makes it super hot. Guess you could say its 'politically incorrect', but I got off on the changes to the character of Jake, the way his mind found a way to accept his new feelings of admiration towards his Bully, Alex. It was a letdown when these feeling's were removed. I also enjoyed the changes to J.J.'s mind as he turned into a bully himself. But again, I felt the author didn't carry through, enough. I still have hope that these aspects of the story will return and this won't turn into just another J.O. story : meaning just sex scene after sex scene. Anyway, thanks for publishing this hot bully story.