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BadDirtyTrickster
7/1/16, 8:50 PM
I don't understand why someone sees no problem in straight-to-gay stories but balk at gay-to-straight ones. For me, what gets me off is the concept of transformation, the process of turning someone into a different kind of person, the changes in body and mind that come with it, no matter which way it goes. Yes, I find it hot the idea of turning a nerdy gay dude into a straight dopey jock bro, even a homophobic one, not because of what they become, but from the transformation itself. And let's keep in mind, folks, this is FICTION! DON'T TRY THIS AT HOME! Keep doing your stuff, Orrin. And get an armour. Arrows always come when you step out of the safe zone. Good luck!
AMan
7/1/16, 8:33 PM
Nice bate fuel -- I bated all the way thru it. Thanks.
Anonymous
7/1/16, 8:26 PM
liked want to see where goes, like idea to "transform?' the jock, get why he might not appreciate his dad leaving his mother, wouild be great to see him understand his dad's bravery as "improves"
Anonymous
7/1/16, 8:20 PM
Awesome story. Love the underwear and twink changes! Maybe some feminization next time.
Anonymous
7/1/16, 8:17 PM
Excellent Story! I should NOT have read this at work...my briefs are SOAKED.
xORRiNx
7/1/16, 7:14 PM
This is written well! I very much enjoyed the gradual dumb-down and the gradual increase in horniness. :)
Sieg
7/1/16, 7:01 PM
I'm just glad I could make a few people happy with my story! Was my first attempt, so I love hearing feedback!
7/1/16, 6:18 PM
Really enjoyed both chapters of your story so far. The whole "out of sight, out of mind" side effect of the lamp is interesting and well done. It opens up a lot of different things you can do with the plot, if you are so inclined.
Anonymous
7/1/16, 5:28 PM
Good job Orrin Brody has a good dad
Anonymous
7/1/16, 4:18 PM
you're the best