Recent Comments

3/22/25, 8:14 PM
I'm alive. It's been a while since I posted this story and for a long time I didn't know exactly how to continue it, but I managed to come up with something I liked, and I hope you like it too. Let's hope this chapter doesn't have such a glaring error as the last one (8” wide) hahaha. But to be honest, I haven't corrected and edited this chapter that thoroughly, so if you notice any mistakes, feel free to comment and I'll correct them at some point. Anyway, I hope you enjoy it. And I should probably write at least one more chapter for this story to finish it off the way I envisioned, so stay tuned. I'll try not to take months to post this time hahaha.
Satyroom
3/21/25, 11:21 PM
Love your writing! I'm looking for a writer for some of my game. Paid job. You can DM me at https://x.com/satyroom or on bluesky at @satyroom.bsky.social Interesting to see more of your work in general :^)

3/22/25, 5:09 PM
@Satyroom Thank you! I just DM’d you on X/Twitter/whatever.
3/22/25, 12:59 PM
I'm always up for a good stink story. It's rare that one centers on it like this one does. Writing is direct and crisp. I would have liked if there was more description of the increasing odors, other than just mentioning them. For example . . . HOW one guys musk differs from another. Kind of lost the scent in part two.
3/22/25, 12:40 PM
WOW! The way that you describe things is so exciting... erotic. THANKYOU. That was FUN.
3/22/25, 12:01 PM
And now Helmut Zemo to the rescue or for further abuse? Either way, you make it a great story. Thank you, Jack.
3/22/25, 11:55 AM
Been a while since I've read such a well built story. Thanks for writing and I hope you can keep going
3/22/25, 10:55 AM
Damn harry is
3/22/25, 6:11 AM
Wow. I just read this story from beginning to end. I cannot believe I missed this story. Easily the best I have read by far over the last decade. I think your profile picture also reminds me of Ethan at least how you describe his appearance in the beginning. Id love to see your singlet inspiration and a continuation if possible. One aspect that I think could be developed if this was continued is more about how Ryan came to be or even their relationship. Is Ethan really just a tool for Ryan or through their training and experiences living together did he develop feelings / relationship with him as a husband or boyfriend. It would be good to develop this more. I think even a spinoff would be good if you just want to make a new story. Maybe even a prequel story to how coach got Ryan in the first place. You describe him as Asian compared to the blond Ethan and I think that makes for a great storyline. I love the wrestling singlet fetish and I think pictures describe a thousand words and would love links to your descriptions. Overall just excellent. I did not want this story to end and will definitely come back to read it again!
Anonymous
3/21/25, 6:12 PM
Is there a social media presence you have? Would love to DM you

3/22/25, 6:07 AM
@Anonymous I'm the same name on the GSS discord server :)
3/22/25, 4:23 AM
Loving the story development and love how much more Austin seems to need to be broken down into a good fag boy. He will learn his place and maybe soon have a new found appreciation in Ivan as a friend and fellow fag boy! UwU