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asfrmaster
3/22/25, 10:05 PM
this is truly one of the best freeze stories I have ever read. do you take commissions?
3/22/25, 9:49 PM
Loving this!
3/22/25, 2:20 PM
Baron Zemo is going to take good care of Spider-Man. I can hardly wait.

3/22/25, 9:47 PM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Oh he will take GOOD care of Peter.
3/22/25, 4:47 PM
Zemo? That's a rare character to see; especially in fan fiction. No doubt rescuing the hero, but just to have his own control over him. But how he does it will be very exciting to see.

3/22/25, 9:47 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) I am trying to keep it MCU adjacent and am moving to Captain America soon so he felt like the best pivot I could use.
3/22/25, 8:14 PM
I'm alive. It's been a while since I posted this story and for a long time I didn't know exactly how to continue it, but I managed to come up with something I liked, and I hope you like it too. Let's hope this chapter doesn't have such a glaring error as the last one (8” wide) hahaha. But to be honest, I haven't corrected and edited this chapter that thoroughly, so if you notice any mistakes, feel free to comment and I'll correct them at some point. Anyway, I hope you enjoy it. And I should probably write at least one more chapter for this story to finish it off the way I envisioned, so stay tuned. I'll try not to take months to post this time hahaha.
Satyroom
3/21/25, 11:21 PM
Love your writing! I'm looking for a writer for some of my game. Paid job. You can DM me at https://x.com/satyroom or on bluesky at @satyroom.bsky.social Interesting to see more of your work in general :^)

3/22/25, 5:09 PM
@Satyroom Thank you! I just DM’d you on X/Twitter/whatever.
3/22/25, 12:59 PM
I'm always up for a good stink story. It's rare that one centers on it like this one does. Writing is direct and crisp. I would have liked if there was more description of the increasing odors, other than just mentioning them. For example . . . HOW one guys musk differs from another. Kind of lost the scent in part two.
3/22/25, 12:40 PM
WOW! The way that you describe things is so exciting... erotic. THANKYOU. That was FUN.
3/22/25, 12:01 PM
And now Helmut Zemo to the rescue or for further abuse? Either way, you make it a great story. Thank you, Jack.
3/22/25, 11:55 AM
Been a while since I've read such a well built story. Thanks for writing and I hope you can keep going