Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/10/19, 10:44 AM
i am a huge fan of twinks this might have been the hottest chapter yet super awesome
Anonymous
4/10/19, 8:04 AM
Wow! That was great! No only was it really hot, but it was also very beautifully written. I felt like you conveyed the beauty of being enveloped by the energy of a multitude of men very well. Now if only we can find out who that man formed from his cum is...
4/10/19, 6:44 AM
I also had to take a moment to track the Psyphone exchange. Otherwise, the story is coming together fantastically.
ForgottenCradle
4/10/19, 5:22 AM
have to admit, the writing did confuse me at times,but it was too hot and I was too hard to be bothered by it
Anonymous
4/10/19, 3:37 AM
so glad to see you writing and posting again!!!
SirD
4/10/19, 3:16 AM
loved the story and cant wait for the next part
4/10/19, 2:53 AM
thanks this feels fun as always. glad back. I would recommend more beta-readers. but do like the visuals and the "sense" the story makes and uses
4/10/19, 12:49 AM
Excellent. Looking forward to this story!!
JR
4/10/19, 12:42 AM
I love the fact that he went from muscles to fat. Curious to see what will happen to him as a chub
Mindwinder
4/10/19, 12:29 AM
This was great! I love the history of total control Nathan has over his brother, and the descriptions of the guys getting hypnotized initially and then even further later were written really well. Do you plan on continuing this, or is it just a one-and-done?