Recent Comments

LongtimeFan
8/12/19, 8:22 PM
Oh, what an ending...as you say, it is hopeful, not happy. I like to believe that Michael makes it out. I think he will. :) It's especially satisfying because Mayor Derry conjured those kids from the energy he sucked from his victims, so he'd presumably want them straight--and yet...And it is interesting that the mayor, for all of his inhuman power, STILL can't completely break the very depths of a person's sexuality, whether it's Steven still having sex with his "daddy" or Kevin longing to love again. That is the hope I see in this story--that all the hatred, all the self-loathing, all the judgment, the very depths of cruelty, cannot change *who we are.* Also, Wesley, you are so brave to share your story with us, and you and your husband are both incredibly strong for surviving in such a horrible environment. That you shared this incredible, heartrending story with us, channeling pure pain into helping others...there is beauty in that. In the words of Maya Angelou: "But still, like dust... WE RISE."
Anonymous
8/12/19, 7:13 PM
It's very well written, I especially enjoy the trickery part. The only thing that doesn't really follow is Trent having sex with his little brother. I could see his little brother possibly being gay and Trent being the homophobe that he is bullying him, but sex with him? That and wouldn't his body have lost its "no homo" status long ago if he had indeed been having sex with his brother?
8/12/19, 7:00 PM
I quite like the core story of the narrator's transformation into a boi, and I like the world building you're doing here (with the whole alternate history of boi harems). I'm just not sure that you need the whole framing device with the genie.
Phxforce
8/12/19, 6:36 PM
so i have a question how did he even control these guys? i know you sorta explained it in previous chapters. still i would love a chapter on how he did it especially when they were seemingly hard for no reason. anyhow i love the personal story that went into this. thank you as i have personally been trapped in that kind of place before. amazing story amazing premise!!!
8/12/19, 6:14 PM
The story as is is hot though when I think how it made all actual gay people into bois I'm not a fan. But him becoming a boi is sexy.
8/12/19, 6:06 PM
Live this series! keep going!! gets me off every time..turn those boys!
Anonymous
8/12/19, 5:50 PM
that was fun and creative!!0
Anonymous
8/12/19, 5:46 PM
Why though?
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
8/12/19, 3:14 PM
I hope this continues, please
Your_gay_boi123
8/12/19, 2:40 PM
This is so hot please keep the story going dude.