Recent Comments

Jul 28, 2019
SubforTay
8/3/19, 5:20 AM
I hope you will revisit the "Extra" salon. Maybe some of these firemen could visit there?
Anonymous
8/3/19, 5:10 AM
Love this sort of premise soooooo much. Thanks as always!
TurnMeIntoABearToo
8/3/19, 4:35 AM
Yessss! Need more, can't wait >:)
Lusty Stallion
8/3/19, 4:24 AM
Well done man. Great first story. Tons of great ideas. I find I like to write as fast as my imagination, but building some suspense, and staying in particular scenes a bit longer helps build the fantasy. Keep it up man, I love where you're taking it
Aug 1, 2019
Swizzington
8/3/19, 3:28 AM
Bigger, are you saying you have actually met people in real life with the name Chernobyl?
Anonymous
8/3/19, 2:48 AM
Love the moustache focus! Keep writing!
Anonymous
8/3/19, 1:57 AM
bleach yuk ugh
Cigarboy Cody
8/3/19, 1:43 AM
I concur. Some of your best stuff yet!! Benny is going to be like a character from Invasion of the Body Snatchers. As he watches his friends change one by one. Until he doesn't know eho to trust. Maybe even his son will become a LittleMsn
Anonymous
8/3/19, 1:08 AM
Slow moving but very well put together. Love the role reversal, but I think you can do much more with your setup. Looking forward to you building on this.
sweatnosis
8/2/19, 11:11 PM
Still hoping there's more of this to come!