Recent Comments

10/25/19, 6:41 AM
lame? I damn well love this chapter, not lame at all
10/25/19, 6:29 AM
The idea is really good but it was boring at times and not as entertaining, the end thou was perfect
Feb 4, 2019
10/25/19, 6:27 AM
Rather long the opening and a tad confusing but the important part was great, would love for you to explore more the corrupted men
10/25/19, 6:26 AM
I find it a little bit ridiulous the "squeake" name and explanation but the story's good
Anonymous
10/25/19, 5:53 AM
very hot. i like what you wrote very much
10/25/19, 5:50 AM
I'm keeping this one for future use, really good one
Anonymous
10/25/19, 5:47 AM
Wow, an original idea for a change!
Anonymous
10/25/19, 4:05 AM
I like it. Loved that the grubby bearded guys were his Dad and brothers. Excellent beginning.
nycboot
10/25/19, 2:38 AM
Whoa....great start!
Darkestlycan
10/25/19, 2:10 AM
Also thank you Martin for having such an open site for creative expression and not letting the every now and then person change what you believe in and what this site is about.