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Anonymous
1/5/25, 6:56 AM
please update i really love this story
1/5/25, 5:18 AM
And so we've reached what I believe is the end. Loved the whole story. Felt a little like a throwback to some of your earlier works. I wonder if Langley will ever learn of what Harris has gotten away with or if he'll be able to start his own little herd of followers.
1/5/25, 2:09 AM
What a nice ending. Glad that both sides got their happy ending. And that open ending of either Benji getting the memories or not is a nice touch.
1/4/25, 9:10 PM
Amazing, read! I loved it

1/4/25, 9:46 PM
@[LKV11](/user/show/10013658) Thank you!
Anonymous
1/4/25, 9:12 PM
Great story, love coming back to it. Hopefully one day you come back.
1/4/25, 9:09 PM
Are you going to write again?
1/4/25, 7:54 PM
Well this just warms the cockles of my heart! Charlie, you should be incredibly proud of the wonderful story you've created and shared with us! So full of character, life, and - yes - juicy jock cake! :drooling_face: Can't wait to see what Luke, Sammy, Mark, and the gang will be up to! I know I'll be eagerly waiting!
1/4/25, 6:39 PM
Fantastic opening! I am looking forward to descriptions of how the Alphas train the Betas. I also wonder if the father will go through Beta training, too, once Andrew realizes he can dominate the entire family.
1/4/25, 6:08 PM
I'm impressed at how much is going on here and the detail and thought you've put into every strand. Like straight to gay is a um, not exactly uncommon kink around these parts but it's really fascinating how it's playing out here. Them knowing in advance that it's going to happen and dealing with the creeping change of sexuality, I enjoyed the spectrum of attitudes to it, from Yeong's eagerness to Ray's more tentative embrace of it. (Given my proclivities I enjoyed Yeong realising that yes indeed gay guys will enjoy straight guys turned gay jocks and just going for it haha). And of course there's Victor's decay which is very grim to start with but as we progress gets just a dash of sweetness mixed in with the bitterness, particularly given what they all go through I found Victor asking to be next to Liam in the vault quite a touching way to end the chapter. And in general it's sweet to see the support and acceptance the students get from others despite their self-perceptions/self-esteem issues.. mostly. (tell Ms Terrell I hate her smh)
Anonymous
1/4/25, 6:03 PM
More please