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Anonymous
1/6/20, 3:22 PM
I feel like Nathan is being set up to have a daenerys like type arc. He seems too obsessed to win at any cost. That particular line where he called Joe "damaged goods" or something to that effect and so therefore can be used again for the second time is particularly savage. I was also expecting Todd to make Dylan pretend he's still on Nathan's side. That seemed like the more logical choice so I was surprised by that. I do think that Joe is on Nathan's side. I think he's really convincing because Nathan compelled him to do so, and I think Dylan is still a slave. If Nathan is going to win, it'll be because of Joe's help. I'm not quite sure if Dylan can break free. Now, Mike should be stronger than Joe right? I'm hoping he'll overpower Joe when he sees him trying to betray Todd. Maybe Dylan's programming would also kick in and try to subdue him. I do think they both also have serums with them, not just Joe. No matter how this story ends, I'll be okay with it. I can always just keep my fantasy ending if it goes there.
LongtimeFan
1/6/20, 3:17 PM
Ohboy, predictions! I want to make some too. I predict that: -Dylan will join the mindscape battle because the serum wore off faster than anticipated (we saw what happened when Chester was rushed previously--why else would the phone bug failing be important? I've learned that in a Swizzington story, every detail matters!). :p -Joe will stick Todd with the serum after all after a moment of struggle (the conflict is between Nathan's command and Todd's glasses, and my suspicion is that Todd, in his arrogance, didn't bother to check Joe's conditioning when he got back from Nathan's), OR Todd did check and reinforce his own conditioning, but Nathan's work will at least delay Joe enough for Dylan to join the fight. -Dylan and Nathan will combine their powers to punish Todd -Chester will arrive with the serum, putting Nathan in the position of either setting everyone free, becoming a tyrant like Todd, or somewhere in between. I wonder if any of my guesses will come true!
Anonymous
1/6/20, 2:56 PM
My prediction is that erasing Joe's memory - which was done rather altruistically by Nathan - will mean he's erased the knowledge that would prompt Joe to save him or fight for him/against Todd. And then that will have a tragic result, both for Nathan and, ironically, for Joe.
Swizzington
1/6/20, 2:44 PM
I wrote out a longer reply to your comment regarding Dylan and the serum, nycboot, then I realized I was probably giving away spoilers for the finale. So I'm not going to reply to you after all :-) I will try to upload the final chapter in the next few hours. Thanks to everyone who has stuck with the story to the end!
Anonymous
1/6/20, 2:29 PM
TODD FOR THE WIN!!!!!
jiaao24@163.com
1/6/20, 2:21 PM
HOT! Really really love your works especially the Gym Clothes series and hope there will be more <3
Anonymous
1/6/20, 1:26 PM
I guess we shall see tomorrow what happens at the big show down. I'm glad Joe is back to his regular self or not... but I am worried about how the next chapter will go. I do hope it is a real long chapter. Thank you for all of the hard work you have done for this story. Can't wait to see it pan out tomorrow. I hope you also do a sequel series to this. That might be very interesting to read!
nycboot
1/6/20, 1:16 PM
The more I think of it, the more I realize that Dylan is just playing along. The serum should have worn off the previous night. Also in the previous chapter we saw Nathan like we had never seen him: full of anger and rage - and that's what got him through to Joe without touching him. If Nathan can just summon that fury with Todd, it might lead to a satisfying outcome: Perhaps what Todd really needs is to become the slave he projects on others - maybe that's the only way he can really function in this world. I'm hoping that Chester and Joe stick the serum gun (on the permanent setting) into Todd. So long as I'm over-thinking things, I was thinking that the key to Todd's power is really Chester. If somehow Nathan or Dylan can undo Todd's influence in Chester that would really turn things. (At one point I was thinking Nathan would end up with Chester, but Chester seems to be very asexual, so that's unlikely.) Joe was apparently disgusted by the sexual activity, but he still needs dominance, so what is going to be the outcome for Nathan's relationship with him? As I said before, a real interesting cliffhanger! And yeah, the enjoyment of this story has increased with being able to interact with you Swizz (or should I say Swizzle?) and the others on here. :)
K
1/6/20, 12:31 PM
I'm so confused!!! hahaha I really curious about what going to be happen I don't want Nathan to become like Todd. A little selfish is fine but please don't become a psychopath or become Todd slave I'm still on Nathan side he may not be a real good person but for me he way better than Todd
Anonymous
1/6/20, 11:47 AM
Moreee!