Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/7/20, 1:40 AM
I have to admit that while the writing was superb, I felt really let down by the ending. It felt hollow. It might have been more interesting if Nathan left the control on Joe and freed the others having Dylan take Todd back home
Swizzington
1/7/20, 1:38 AM
I guess my tastes are a little darker than most of the readers here. :-) I actually toned it down a little bit, too!
This is my favorite story series in 'Gay Spiral Stories.'
1/7/20, 1:31 AM
The sex is hot but it's everything else that's happening that makes it a compelling read for me. Anxiously waiting for the next episode. Great work.
UchihaDEMS
1/7/20, 1:29 AM
I was expecting that at some point, all that came after Nathan went to stone was just a dream of Todd inside the hourglass... I must admit, I do like the story... but I hated the end.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
1/7/20, 12:56 AM
Nathan needs to join Todd in his endeavors. The two together, with Todd's brother Dylan also joining them, could not be stopped.
SadReader
1/7/20, 12:55 AM
I was hoping the ending would be different. This somehow felt unsatisfying. Anyways, excellent writing. I will see if Nathan and Joe will be back to not being a slave in the sequel.
LongtimeFan
1/7/20, 12:37 AM
Hey, this is the one place on the Internet where I actually DO read the comments. :p Check your e-mail!
Swizzington
1/7/20, 12:28 AM
Also, I'm not sure if you'll see this message, LongtimeFan, but could you possibly shoot me an email? My address is at the top of the page. I want to ask you about something in private.
Swizzington
1/7/20, 12:20 AM
I'm hoping to get *The Further Adventures of a Mind Controller* finished in the first quarter of 2020. I'm like 7 chapters in right now. But no promises :-)
1/7/20, 12:12 AM
A very good story; you drew me in and had me hooked. I look forward to seeing the story continue, but the ending made me want to write my own continuation as do a number of stories on the site. That's a testament to your writing and the strength of it; I hope I can draw upon it to make something that can sit in the ball park of the world that you've created.