Recent Comments

Bazir
2/10/20, 9:18 PM
Wow Amazing thanks for this wonderfull second chapter like the previous people here love to know more about utopia and the System itself but the most are the all kind of drones that are there thanks very much and cheers up continue like that :D
Anonymous
2/10/20, 8:57 PM
Also really looking forward to what happens next! I'm interested to learn more about Utopia and the different types of drones.
Anonymous
2/10/20, 8:31 PM
Another great chapter! Looking forward to what happens next!
Anonymous
2/10/20, 8:06 PM
amazing! when new story creates??
Anonymous
2/10/20, 3:23 PM
It's interesting how the journeyman is still learning, and in his wanting to help, still screws up.
screamingmoist
2/10/20, 2:22 PM
Right? I would 100% be a repeat customer.
2/10/20, 10:28 AM
Thanks for the comments. Hehehe I think he'll be okay, SilentNobody... the only 'lasting effects' being the ones that bring him that much closer to his fate...
Anonymous
2/10/20, 10:06 AM
terrific
malskin
2/10/20, 9:59 AM
wow another great chapter, for me i am liking the fact that Noel is being attracted to the rubber clad drone, i hope that system thats that into account for his designation
transformheaven
2/10/20, 7:31 AM
I agree with slowing it down a little. As for your writing, most mistakes are in weird ways of using verbs, something the free version of Grammarly can help you with, so consider checking that out! :) Great idea and arousing story though ;)