Recent Comments

Jake
4/3/20, 7:27 AM
I agree, I'm hoping for an "oblivious foot job" where the roommate takes advantage of the MC maybe laying on his stomach with his feet in the air/in the lap of roommate. Maybe roommate has an ingenious idea of "tricking" MC into sucking him off by blindfolding him and telling him a lie in order to get off.
Mar 29, 2020
Hypnominion
4/3/20, 7:22 AM
I have the vapours...oh, my goodness! This is a brilliant example of a true, internal narrative of submission. This moment of transformative surrender is what Isearch for in my own erotic fantasies and fetish endeavors . Thank you!
4/3/20, 6:35 AM
it needs proof reading and editing. But before that, you need to work out the plot and tie up loose ends. Too disorganized, even for porn. Still, there's the possibility of a whopping good porn yarn with some work.
Anonymous
4/3/20, 5:10 AM
more more please
Anonymous
4/3/20, 4:03 AM
loved it and fiddler bears work, you told an electric story.
4/3/20, 1:51 AM
Why does he get lessons in Romanian when he is going to be Bulgarian?
Anonymous
4/3/20, 12:36 AM
Derek, I am a big fan of this kind of story, where a magical game forces random and unexpected changes on several hot guys gathered together. And you made this fun and familiar trope exceptionally hot. I felt like each round touched on one of my favorite kinks. I'm almost embarrassed to say how many times i got off while reading this. Thank you!
Anonymous
4/2/20, 11:49 PM
Love this! Hopefully more to come!
4/2/20, 11:15 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! BY THE GODS GIVE ME MORE! You have turned what could have been a typical enslavement/recruitment story into a very hot origin story... By the gods are they gonna fuck? this had me licking my nectar off the screen and running for my super suit.... nicely done.
Apr 2, 2020
S1lv3rF0x
4/2/20, 11:04 PM
SissElixir?