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5/18/20, 10:51 PM
I agree with bucke! This is getting really awesome. I also think you've improved on capturing the essence of Wishbone's writing. You are doing a good job, New Guy. I love men in suits and the Captain's conversion was very, very sexy. A slight criticism, though. If I remember correctly, the way the recruits worked in the original story was that the wristband did the sting and the men immediately had a painful erection. Then when the snake coils around their bodies and bites their carotid artery, the lust venom makes them ejaculate and then theyre converted into slaves. It's no big deal really, but I feel like its important to stay true to the source material. But the cocoon stuff that you added, the oath of service and the black uniform are such great additions that you made. I also love the cameo from Jason in the end (at least I assumed it was him). Overall, such a stellar job. Please keep writing more!
5/18/20, 10:41 PM
no problem
5/18/20, 10:34 PM
This is a thoroughly engaging, well-written series. I hope there are many more posts to come.
5/18/20, 10:27 PM
Sorry Darkblade2814, i couldn't quite get with . maybe one day I'll rewrite it, I'm sure i can do better.
5/18/20, 10:12 PM
I hope he gets the police chief too!
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5/18/20, 10:06 PM
i wish you could give us a description of how Mikey, sorry McFaggy looks. For no reason I imagine him pale, tall, brown hair, cuter than handsome, and not really that fat but chubby enough to get enough mocks about his weight. that's me, but I'd like to know how you imagine him
5/18/20, 10:02 PM
I was hoping for more when it comes from the guardians
5/18/20, 9:35 PM
Thanks! I'm actually a little inspired by some of your stories so I'm glad you like!
5/18/20, 9:15 PM
Wonderful. I love a nice hive. :-)
5/18/20, 9:13 PM
> As others have said, this has a lot of potential to be much more than just another sex story (those are fun too). I have a question, will this follow traditional lore of Nate getting bitten (or maybe fucked) by Dave, will he also become a werewolf, like a communion of sorts? > At the moment, I haven't thought about Nate becoming a werewolf. I'm kind of focusing on exploring their relationship and the werewolf lore, but I haven't yet ruled out the possibility of that happening at some point. (Maybe in a future arc, I'm having a lot of fun writing this story so it'll most likely get more than 5 chapters). Thanks for the feedback, guys!