Recent Comments

5/28/20, 5:48 AM
I know this is like three years old at this point, but I'd love it if you made some more chapters of this!
5/28/20, 5:37 AM
So hot!
5/28/20, 5:17 AM
So happy you are writing here again! Another great story.
5/28/20, 4:38 AM
Can't wait for what's up next! Excellent start!
Apr 14, 2012
5/28/20, 4:05 AM
This is absolutely one of my all-time favourite superhero hypnosis stories. I come back to re-read it all the time; the build up, the dialogue, and the open ending all work so well.
5/28/20, 3:53 AM
But that doesn't make any sense, open up another series and you can see individual synopsis for each story in the series. Take for example this story - which I literally just clicked on - https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newSeries/show/6968 and you can see how each chapter has its own description.
Anonymous
5/28/20, 3:02 AM
That was a great story! I can't wait to see how it ends! Please finish the story soon!
Willie Cici
5/28/20, 3:00 AM
I would if I could put a series synopsis and then a story synopsis. Unfortunately, when you create a series, the first story synopsis gets repeated for every story. That's why I don't bother for series. For one shot stories, I also do a more succinct tease.
Anonymous
5/28/20, 1:30 AM
so cool to see this come back
nycboot
5/28/20, 1:21 AM
It's good that you initially painted Jese as not terribly likable. So Dennis can corrupt him all the way and we the readers will probably like the corrupted Jese more than the original. Keep going!