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swngbthways
5/30/20, 5:04 PM
I honestly feel making Leo a "villain" will put this series into more like a "Marvel or DC" world. With the first series where Pine knew his powers in high school (where he was bullied) and STILL emerged from it with his "values" intact, the events have a lot of humanity to the chapters -- ESPECIALLY when Pine and Mike fell in love with each other "naturally." I feel like Leo got drunk from his powers early on and didn't think of consequences for the lives of the guys he put under. I personally like the idea of the younger Pine teaching the older Leo about how to responsibly use his powers. BUT those are just my opinions. You are the author and this your world. Thank you for giving us a glimpse of it. ;)
5/30/20, 5:04 PM
I agree with Thom, time for the main character to enjoy the ride as well.
5/30/20, 5:02 PM
so fucking hot! love a twink with a huge cock hypnotizing anyone he wants! can't wait for part two!
May 30, 2020
5/30/20, 5:02 PM
This is really only the second time I have tried writing erotica. hopefully it is better than the last one thank you all for reading!
5/30/20, 4:50 PM
fuck, such a great follow up!! love Dustin playing with his virgin ass, stretching it wide, and Adam just LOVING it. Love the twist at the end with him resisting and Dustin taking him further and further down. can't wait for the next chapter!
May 28, 2020
5/30/20, 4:40 PM
how is this a #big sub small top story?
Chad
5/30/20, 4:16 PM
Ahh very much looking forward to the future chapters coming out. I enjoy a long plot that has lots of twists and turns so this is exciting. I see, I guess everyone has their preferences! I will definitely carry on reading anything you publish, everything so far has been really great!! Very random question - Is there a specific reason you have bolin on your page or is it just the uniform?? I really enjoyed that arch of Korra, especially seeing the uniformed people with high and tight haircuts!
5/30/20, 1:55 PM
Hot stuff! Love the physical and mental transformations.
5/30/20, 1:55 PM
Another great story from one of my fave authors. Thanks again Derek.
5/30/20, 1:11 PM
Chad, thank you for reading and supporting. As to the length of this arc, I think there about 7 more chapters to come; currently working on chapter 5. With uniforms and this story or Bargain, you won't really see the handling of uniform as the uniform is a goo that takes the shape of uniform. Stories like Soldier Slave which are more grounded will have more handling the uniform/making sure the uniform (the next chapter of Soldier Slave actually does have the proper dressing in the BDUs and polishing of boots). I personally like the tunic jacket more so than Class A (aka suit and tie) uniform, so tunic jackets tend to appear more than Class A in my stories. Thank you for the support; definitely trying to keep the works coming out.